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Marias POV
Ive been waiting on Chre to come down for yearsssss now.He my brother my very concieted brother I understand its the first 일 of school but if my 나귀, 엉덩이 can come down on time so can he i mean dude your cute but come on now. I waited for about 5 더 많이 분 before i was about to get up and drag his 나귀, 엉덩이 down here when my dad came in the door with a bottle in his hand
"hey baby girl" he said with slurred words
"hey dad" i said non chalantly
"come on ihaven't seen 당신 in a g-good little while girve your daddy a kiss" he said as he was getting closer and closer to me
"dad your drunk" "come on just one little peck" he said quickly grabbing my hair and pulling backwards so my neck would cock back i could smell the achohol on his breathe
"no dad" i said trying my best to push him away
"give me a 키스 NOW 당신 little bitch" he pinned me down i was about to scream when chre FINALLY decided to show up
"AYE get the fuck off of her" he said running down the stairs and pushing dad to the floor
"hey theres my boy" dad said taking a sip from the bottle
"tis, the fuck" he said shaking his head "you ok ria go to the car i be there in a 분 i gotta help this SORRY EXCUSE FOR A FATHER " he said making sure dad heard the key words i mean when he's actually sober for once he's the best dad ever...but that doesn't happen often. I did as i as told and ran to the car and waited for chre to come out. He finally came out and came to the car "are 당신 sure your ok ria?" he said with a sincer apologetic look on his face which instantly made me smile he's one of the only people in this world who TRULY cares about me "yeah im fine" i said with a smile on my face. He smiled and backed out of the drive way, on our way to school 'no new friends' 의해 드레이크, 드레이 크 came on and roc instantly started rapping and 노래 over it. Hes so talented with really anything that has to do with music. Of course i started rapping with him we both really have a passion for 음악 to be truthful danceing to. We finally pulled up to school we saw chre's boys outside talking so we walked up to them.
OK sooooo this is just part of it and I want your opinion on whether 또는 not I should continue 또는 just start over GOOD 또는 BAD? 코멘트 pweaseee pplzzzz it mght be horrible I haven't wrote in like forever but tell meeee BYEEEE
Marias POV
Ive been waiting on Chre to come down for yearsssss now.He my brother my very concieted brother I understand its the first 일 of school but if my 나귀, 엉덩이 can come down on time so can he i mean dude your cute but come on now. I waited for about 5 더 많이 분 before i was about to get up and drag his 나귀, 엉덩이 down here when my dad came in the door with a bottle in his hand
"hey baby girl" he said with slurred words
"hey dad" i said non chalantly
"come on ihaven't seen 당신 in a g-good little while girve your daddy a kiss" he said as he was getting closer and closer to me
"dad your drunk" "come on just one little peck" he said quickly grabbing my hair and pulling backwards so my neck would cock back i could smell the achohol on his breathe
"no dad" i said trying my best to push him away
"give me a 키스 NOW 당신 little bitch" he pinned me down i was about to scream when chre FINALLY decided to show up
"AYE get the fuck off of her" he said running down the stairs and pushing dad to the floor
"hey theres my boy" dad said taking a sip from the bottle
"tis, the fuck" he said shaking his head "you ok ria go to the car i be there in a 분 i gotta help this SORRY EXCUSE FOR A FATHER " he said making sure dad heard the key words i mean when he's actually sober for once he's the best dad ever...but that doesn't happen often. I did as i as told and ran to the car and waited for chre to come out. He finally came out and came to the car "are 당신 sure your ok ria?" he said with a sincer apologetic look on his face which instantly made me smile he's one of the only people in this world who TRULY cares about me "yeah im fine" i said with a smile on my face. He smiled and backed out of the drive way, on our way to school 'no new friends' 의해 드레이크, 드레이 크 came on and roc instantly started rapping and 노래 over it. Hes so talented with really anything that has to do with music. Of course i started rapping with him we both really have a passion for 음악 to be truthful danceing to. We finally pulled up to school we saw chre's boys outside talking so we walked up to them.
OK sooooo this is just part of it and I want your opinion on whether 또는 not I should continue 또는 just start over GOOD 또는 BAD? 코멘트 pweaseee pplzzzz it mght be horrible I haven't wrote in like forever but tell meeee BYEEEE
