What do 당신 guys think of it?

This is my book cover that I made for my fanfiction. I'm wondering if 당신 guys think it needs to have 더 많이 things to fill the white space? (By the way, the notepad thing above Michael's head says "dear dad." Sorry that the picture is so small; 팬팝 resized it because it was too big. How are 당신 guys enjoying the story so far? Any 가장 좋아하는 parts if 당신 had to pick one? L. O. V. E. I have to say that I like 글쓰기 this one a whole lot 더 많이 than my first one "daddy's little tomboy." It just seems to flow a lot easier this time around and I like how it's in Michael's point of view now. Do 당신 prefer "daddy's little tomboy" 또는 "unconditional love…… A story of fatherhood?" I like being able to start completely from scratch again because I often find myself thinking of things that I could've put in the chapter that I didn't think of before I 게시됨 it! Just a heads up, there will be a whole bunch of plot twists and surprising moments coming up! I'm going a whole different direction with this story and I think you're going to like this one way 더 많이 than the 이전 one!!! I'm not about to reveal anything secrets though… You'll just have to wait and see what I have up my sleeve!!!!!