Chapter 1: Father's visit
Rift: *sitting in chair reading*
Fluttershy: 저기요 Rift, may I talk to 당신 for a second?
Rift: Sure, what is it?
Fluttershy: Um, is it alright if my father comes for a visit.
Rift: Uh, yeah sure.
Fluttershy: Is there something wrong?
Rift: Uh, no it's just..... I think your father hates me.
Fluttershy: Oh, come on Rift, he doesn't hate you.
Rift: Fluttershy, he tried to bribe me to break up with 당신 when we where dating.
Fluttershy: I know, but 당신 didn't did you?
Rift: No, but that's not the point, he clearly doesn't like 당신 being with me.
Fluttershy: What about at the wedding?
Rift: I'm sure he was just saying that to not break your heart.
Fluttershy: Just give him another chance.
Rift: I dunno Fluttershy.
Fluttershy: Pretty please? *gives Rift the 강아지 eyes*
Rift: *Smiles* 당신 know I can never say no to 당신 when 당신 give me those 강아지 eyes. What the heck why not, when is he coming?
Fluttershy: I probably should have told you-
Marcus: *knocks on door* Fluttershy?
Rift: 당신 didn't.
Fluttershy: I did. Come on in daddy!
Marcus: *comes in* Hi Fluttershy.
Fluttershy: Daddy! *hugs Marcus*
Marcus: How's my little Fillyshy?
Fluttershy: I'm fine.
Marcus: Ahhh, mister Ruft. *starts a stare down with Rift*
Rift: It's Rift, with an 'i' Sir. *butts his head against Marcus's*
Fluttershy: Daddy, 당신 told me 당신 wouldn't do this.
Kat: 저기요 dad, um...... What the?
Fluttershy: Oh Kat meet your grandfather, my dad, Marcus.
Rift: Now if 당신 don't mind, I'm going to see what my daughter needs. What's the matter Kat?
Kat: Uh, Calvin accedentally made a glue bottle explode and Susie's mad because it's all in her mane.
Susie: 당신 are so stupid Calvin!!!
Dewdrop: That's not very nice Susie.
Calvin: How was I supposed to know that a brick would do that?
Susie: 의해 using your brain which 당신 aperently don't have!!!
Marcus: 당신 have fillies?
Fluttershy: Yes, Kat, Susie, Dewdrop, and our most recent, Calvin.
Rift: Susan Alexandra Jones, 당신 know not to yell at your younger brother. He doesn't know any better.
Susie: But look at what he did to my mane, it took Rarity hours to get it the way it is.
Rift: Why don't 당신 keep it like Kat's?
Susie: Because I'm better than her and don't need it like hers.
Kat: Are not.
Susie: Are too.
Kat: Why 당신 little!!!! *takels Susie and pulls on her mane*
Rift: Oh, Celestia. Come on 당신 two 당신 are sisters 당신 shouldn't be-*Susies hoof comes up and hits Rift in the chin*
Fluttershy: Oh dear.
Marcus: He's as bad a father as he is a son in law.
Rift: Enough 당신 two!!
Susie: Ow, ow, ow. Daddy get her off me she's pulling on the parts of my mane that are covered in glue!!
Rift: Kathrine Jones! Get of of your sister now! Kat 당신 are grounded young lady.
Susie: Who's this?
Rift: Your grandfather Marcus. I'm steppin' out!!!
Marcus: Couldn't handle it?
Chapter 2: Hatered and love
Rift: *sitting in bar with cider*
Snake: Hey, a 사과, 애플 cider! Howdy Rift. *puts his cowboy hat on Rift's head*
Rift: *takes off hat and throws it on the ground*
Snake: Something wrong?
Rift: Yeah *pickes up hat and puts it on table* my father in law is over and is givin' me a hard time.
Snake: Man, that's rough. I don't know what it's like.
Rift: You're lucky Macintosh told me his parents are gone, 또는 dead, I don't remember.
Snake: Should 당신 be getting 집 의해 now?
Rift: Shouldn't you?
Snake: No, 사과 브랜디 let's me stay out a while.
Rift: I see. Well I'm going back.
Snake: See ya.
Later back at Fluttershy's cottage*
Rift: Here we go. Hi Kat what is it?
Kat: I'm sorry for pulling on Susie's mane. I know 당신 don't like me a whole lot and- *starts crying*
Rift: No, no Kat I 사랑 you. You're one of my 가장 좋아하는 daughters.
Kat: But, it didn't seem like it when 당신 yelled at me.
Rift: *hugs Kat* Kat, I'm sorry I yelled at you, I was frustrated and it wasn't helping that 당신 and Susie where fighting. 
Kat: *sniff* 당신 don't hate me?
Rift: Kat, why would I hate my own daughter?
Kat: Because I can't do anything right.
Rift: Kat, that's not true. 당신 stand up for your brother, 당신 smak one heck of a 집 run, 당신 do good in school. Heck, if I was somepony else's father I'd be jealous not having 당신 as my daughter.
Kat: Really? *sniff*
Rift: Eeyup, how about we go get some ice cream and I lift your grounding. Deal?
Kat: Deal. And 'one of your 가장 좋아하는 daughters'? 
Rift: Dewdrop.
Kat: Oh
Chapter 3: 다음 morning
Rift: Zzzzzzzzzzzz...
Fluttershy: Wake up big boy.
Rift: hmm, what? Oh, morning 앤젤 how'd 당신 sleep?
Marcus: She slept fine.
Rift: Oh, you're still here.
Macus: For the whole week my friend. And mabye later I could talk to you.
Later...*
Rift: 당신 got me out now what?
Marcus: Walk with me.... Listen, we'd both do what's right for Fluttershy correct?
Rift: Where are 당신 going with this?
Marcus: I'll pay 당신 fourteen thousand bits to divorce Fluttershy.
Rift: *slaps Marcus* 당신 keep your blood money, I'll never break up with your daughter. And the 일 I do is the 일 I die. Now good 일 to 당신 sir!
Way later....*
Snake: This is the third time in this week I've seen 당신 here man.
Rift: I swear I'll rip his head off and feed to a Changling and......*sigh* What's the use? He'll never like me.
Snake: I see the problem here, he thinks you're not good enough for Fluttershy.
Rift: Really?
Snake: Yeah, I took pyscology in highschool so I know this stuff, if 당신 prove to him that 당신 are good enough for her he'll stop givin' 당신 a hard time.
Rift: Thanks man. 
Snake: 저기요 당신 need 조언 come over any time.
Chapter 3: Trying
Rift: Ok, I'm going to help Fluttershy today, no matter what. Ahem, Fluttershy is there anything you'd like me to do for you?
Fluttershy: Sure, could 당신 help Susie get gum out of her mane?
Rift: How'd that happen?
Fluttershy: Kat was blowing a bubble and it popped. 당신 should know the rest.
Rift: Yeah, doesn't take a detective to figure it out.
*in the bathroom*
Rift: Ok, Susie I need 당신 to stay perfectly still.
Susie: Ow, ow, ow, ow, ow, you're pulling on my mane!
Rift: There's gum in it Susie, I need to use the brush to get it out so of course there will be some pulling involved...... There, that wasn't so bad was it?
Susie: I guess not.
Marcus: Please, anypony can do that.
The 다음 day...*
Fluttershy: *with a Sining tone* Oh Rift.
Rift: Yeah Fluttershy?
Fluttershy: Can 당신 please bring me my planner? I need to see if I have any oppointments today.
Rift: Sure Angel. *grabs planner* Here 당신 go.
Fluttershy: Thank you. *kisses Rift's cheek*
Marcus: I could've done that.
Chapter 4: Never good enough
Rift: *sitting in chair reading*
Fluttershy: *crying* Ow, ow, ow!!!!
Rift: *Runs over to Fluttershy* 앤젤 what happened?
Fluttershy: I.... I cut my hind leg and it hurts a lot.
Rift: Here just lay on your back a bit. KAT!!!! I need the first aid kit!
Kat: Got it daddy.
Rift: Ok, open it up and hand me the gauze.
Kat: That's the white bandages right?
Rift: Yes.
Kat: Here 당신 go.
Fluttershy: *still crying* Owww!! It hurts so much.
Rift: *in a clamping tone* Shh-h-h, it's ok, I get cut a lot I'm use to doing this. I'll just 덮개, 랩 this around your cute little hoof and it should be fine.
Fluttershy: 당신 *sniff* 당신 think my hoof is cute?
Rift: Yes, but then again, I think evey thing about 당신 is cute. There, if 당신 want 당신 can ride on my back if 당신 need to go somewhere. Are 당신 ok? I'm sorry 당신 got cut.
Fluttershy: *sniff* Yes, thank 당신 Rift.
Marcus: Big whoop, I've been healing her wounds since she was a filly.
Rift: I'll never be good enough for 당신 will I? I've taken care of your daughter for a long time and 당신 treat me as if I only make things worse. But it's 당신 who make's things worse, you'll never see it. Come on Fluttershy, I'll help 당신 to bed.
Chapter 5: Confession
Rift: * Reading*
Marcus: Rift, may I talk to 당신 for a while?
Rift: If you're trying to bribe me again I swear on the name of my father I'll rip your head off.
Marcus: Listen, 당신 know why I've been rough on you?
Rift: Because 당신 are a annoying braying donkey who hates everypony except his own daughter.
Marcus: No, it's because I know 당신 don't have a father and I've been trying to be like him.
Rift: *pfft* 당신 could never be like my father, he was understanding, kind, and never bribed me to do anything. Unlike you.
Marcus: Mabye that's where I went wrong. I tried being like the kind of father who is over protective of his child. I'm not purposefully rough on you, I'm just trying to be like him.
Rift: Then mabye 다음 time you'll ask me what he was like. Instead of coming to conclusions that he was hard on me.
Marcus: Alright, well how about it? Shake hooves and let bygones be bygones and we'll no longer be enemies? Deal?
Rift: If 당신 accept me as your son in law and stop trying to bribe me then we gotta deal.
Chapter 6: Bye
Marcus: Well I'd better get going, bye my little Fillyshy.
Fluttershy: Bye daddy.
Marcus: Rift?
Rift: Yeah?
Marcus: Take good care of my daughter, she's lucky to have 당신 as a husband.
Rift: Thanks sir and bye.