It is a 년 after Tdwt and Duncan and Gwen are still together. In Courtneys’ side she still want her payback .
-FLASHBACK-
One 일 Gwen was in Leshawnas’ house and was going to spend the night there. Duncan was watching the TV when he had a message from his lawyers that he had to pay them then he went mad because he hadn’t expect that and he gave all his money for buying his new car so he decided to loosen up in a bar.
When he’s arrived he noticed a familiar shadow sitting 의해 the bar. Her onyx eyes were deep in pain, her hair was curly and she was drinking some jus and in her hand was her PDA.
Duncan POV
When I saw her my jaw dropped to the floor and my eyes doubled their size because she was wearing knee high leather boots, fishnets, a schoolgirl's red skirt, a studded belt, and a black tank 상단, 맨 위로 that showed off some midriff and a decent amount of cleavage. She had left the makeup very simple except for her smoldering eyes .
‘that girl was Gwen 또는 I was simply dreaming? Is that my girlfriend?’ those 질문 passed 의해 my mind but I was sure that girl wasn’t Gwen because she was supposed to be at her friends’ house she don’t have any PDA and finally she wasn’t tanned like that hot girl . I mean that girl. (He corrected his self).
I decide to sit 의해 her side then I drank some vodka(a lot of 보드카 till he got drunk.) I had totally forgotten the girl who was sitting 의해 my side till she dropped the alcohol 주스 all over my jacket.
“I am sorry” she told me lazily.
“No matter” I replied her as lazily as her .
When I turned my face I saw Courtney, that girl was from the beginning Courtney my ex.
“What are 당신 doing here?” I asked her.
“Duncan? It is you? “She replied.
“Who 당신 want else princess? Wait a 분 you’re drunk?”
“Yeah maybe but you’re drunk too . I knew it when I looked at your blue eyes ….and please don’t call me princess” then she giggled loudly .
“Why are 당신 laughing? Are 당신 laughing at me? “
“Kind of …..But for real I am laughing because it was necessary for me and 당신 to be drunk after all those years to have a similar point.”
“And what is that similar point?”
“Both of us are drunk.” Then she giggled again.
I didn’t make out what she was saying but her laugh was so warm that I laughed too.
She was drunk , and sad ( it was clear in her eyes)there was something wrong.
“What’s wrong with 당신 ? Are 당신 OK? ” I asked her.
“Hmm yeah I have some problems….and my 심장 couldn’t handle it because he is already broken.”
‘Why is it already broken?’ I thought loudly.
“It is broken 의해 당신 Duncan, remember?”
When I’ve heard those words I had been in shock then I said: “ Can I feel if it still beaten 또는 not?” (Ok it was a rhetoric 질문 I know)
I putted my hand on her chest and felt her 심장 beating faster than ever .
“Why is it beating so fast?” I asked.
Maybe…. Maybe because of your presence 의해 my side.” She stuttered shyly then blushed.
‘Am I dreaming 또는 she’s just told me that she loves me after all that time?’ I thought surprised.
Courtney POV
‘Oh my god! Why I’ve said that?’ I thought.’ I am over him now, I think, I mean I am sure’
“Court…”
“What?” I wasn’t expecting what he is going to continue his sentence with.
“Court…I am sorry a-about what happened in-in TDWT …. I had never meant to-to hurt 당신 “ he stuttered. “I think…I mean I am sure that I am in 사랑 with…….”
-END OF THE FLASHBACK –
Courtney POV
In the 다음 morning I was sleeping on something so comfortable, something so warm, something … ‘Wait a 분 why am I sleeping on “something” and not in my bed?
코멘트 please and be gentle cause this is my first fiction, and don't forget to wait for the part 2 !
see u!
-FLASHBACK-
One 일 Gwen was in Leshawnas’ house and was going to spend the night there. Duncan was watching the TV when he had a message from his lawyers that he had to pay them then he went mad because he hadn’t expect that and he gave all his money for buying his new car so he decided to loosen up in a bar.
When he’s arrived he noticed a familiar shadow sitting 의해 the bar. Her onyx eyes were deep in pain, her hair was curly and she was drinking some jus and in her hand was her PDA.
Duncan POV
When I saw her my jaw dropped to the floor and my eyes doubled their size because she was wearing knee high leather boots, fishnets, a schoolgirl's red skirt, a studded belt, and a black tank 상단, 맨 위로 that showed off some midriff and a decent amount of cleavage. She had left the makeup very simple except for her smoldering eyes .
‘that girl was Gwen 또는 I was simply dreaming? Is that my girlfriend?’ those 질문 passed 의해 my mind but I was sure that girl wasn’t Gwen because she was supposed to be at her friends’ house she don’t have any PDA and finally she wasn’t tanned like that hot girl . I mean that girl. (He corrected his self).
I decide to sit 의해 her side then I drank some vodka(a lot of 보드카 till he got drunk.) I had totally forgotten the girl who was sitting 의해 my side till she dropped the alcohol 주스 all over my jacket.
“I am sorry” she told me lazily.
“No matter” I replied her as lazily as her .
When I turned my face I saw Courtney, that girl was from the beginning Courtney my ex.
“What are 당신 doing here?” I asked her.
“Duncan? It is you? “She replied.
“Who 당신 want else princess? Wait a 분 you’re drunk?”
“Yeah maybe but you’re drunk too . I knew it when I looked at your blue eyes ….and please don’t call me princess” then she giggled loudly .
“Why are 당신 laughing? Are 당신 laughing at me? “
“Kind of …..But for real I am laughing because it was necessary for me and 당신 to be drunk after all those years to have a similar point.”
“And what is that similar point?”
“Both of us are drunk.” Then she giggled again.
I didn’t make out what she was saying but her laugh was so warm that I laughed too.
She was drunk , and sad ( it was clear in her eyes)there was something wrong.
“What’s wrong with 당신 ? Are 당신 OK? ” I asked her.
“Hmm yeah I have some problems….and my 심장 couldn’t handle it because he is already broken.”
‘Why is it already broken?’ I thought loudly.
“It is broken 의해 당신 Duncan, remember?”
When I’ve heard those words I had been in shock then I said: “ Can I feel if it still beaten 또는 not?” (Ok it was a rhetoric 질문 I know)
I putted my hand on her chest and felt her 심장 beating faster than ever .
“Why is it beating so fast?” I asked.
Maybe…. Maybe because of your presence 의해 my side.” She stuttered shyly then blushed.
‘Am I dreaming 또는 she’s just told me that she loves me after all that time?’ I thought surprised.
Courtney POV
‘Oh my god! Why I’ve said that?’ I thought.’ I am over him now, I think, I mean I am sure’
“Court…”
“What?” I wasn’t expecting what he is going to continue his sentence with.
“Court…I am sorry a-about what happened in-in TDWT …. I had never meant to-to hurt 당신 “ he stuttered. “I think…I mean I am sure that I am in 사랑 with…….”
-END OF THE FLASHBACK –
Courtney POV
In the 다음 morning I was sleeping on something so comfortable, something so warm, something … ‘Wait a 분 why am I sleeping on “something” and not in my bed?
코멘트 please and be gentle cause this is my first fiction, and don't forget to wait for the part 2 !
see u!
~in hallways with Calvin and Courtney~
Calvin: HOW COULD 당신 THINK THAT IT WAS OK FOR 당신 TO DANCE WITH DUNCAN TO THAT SAME SONG!?!?!?
Courtney: well excuse me but i didn't think that i needed your permission.
Calvin: *pins her to lockers*
Courtney: OMG Calvin!!?!
Calvin: *slams her to wall*
Courtney: *falls to ground*
Calvin: oh crap....what did i just do?!
Courtney: *still on ground*
Calvin: get up....please.
Duncan: *walks to hallway and sees Courtney on floor* WTF IS GOING ON HERE!?
Calvin: oh she just fainted.
Duncan: your'e lying.
Calvin: no.....it's the truth.
Duncan: i saw it.
Calvin:.............how did 당신 see it?
Duncan: i didn't. i heard the slam.
Calvin: so?
Duncan: do 당신 have a cell phone on you?
Calvin: wtf? why do 당신 need that?
Duncan: To call an ambulance. my dad is a cop. he taught me all the 911 signals.
Calvin: *sighs* fine. BUT i expect to have my cell phone back.
Duncan: *calls 911*
~at hospital~
Calvin: HOW COULD 당신 THINK THAT IT WAS OK FOR 당신 TO DANCE WITH DUNCAN TO THAT SAME SONG!?!?!?
Courtney: well excuse me but i didn't think that i needed your permission.
Calvin: *pins her to lockers*
Courtney: OMG Calvin!!?!
Calvin: *slams her to wall*
Courtney: *falls to ground*
Calvin: oh crap....what did i just do?!
Courtney: *still on ground*
Calvin: get up....please.
Duncan: *walks to hallway and sees Courtney on floor* WTF IS GOING ON HERE!?
Calvin: oh she just fainted.
Duncan: your'e lying.
Calvin: no.....it's the truth.
Duncan: i saw it.
Calvin:.............how did 당신 see it?
Duncan: i didn't. i heard the slam.
Calvin: so?
Duncan: do 당신 have a cell phone on you?
Calvin: wtf? why do 당신 need that?
Duncan: To call an ambulance. my dad is a cop. he taught me all the 911 signals.
Calvin: *sighs* fine. BUT i expect to have my cell phone back.
Duncan: *calls 911*
~at hospital~
Okay I'm curious as to what 당신 readers want.I only have 1 코멘트 for my new chapter and its been 2 days.I don't know if i'M just impatient 또는 if my story really sucks.I know most of 당신 rpobably like it and don't 코멘트 but,I have a low self esteem and when i don't see 코멘트 i don't feel too confident to continue because i think no one will read them.My WHY DO 당신 LIKE HER story is the most 인기 now.And that was one of the first ones I did.Now I think I peeked too early.
Anyway,it helps me to see 더 많이 코멘트 about my stories to continue.SO please comment!PLEASE!NO one make fun of me please!
Anyway,it helps me to see 더 많이 코멘트 about my stories to continue.SO please comment!PLEASE!NO one make fun of me please!
Courtney-um 저기요 so how u doing Duncan-fine fine very nice Duncan-hey can i talk to u in private Courtney-sure sure they walk to a a hallway Trent -im gonna go listen to them be right back dudes .... Duncan-so Courtney um I broke up with Gwen Courtney-why u guys were perfect for each other Duncan-we were cause u were really mean and mad Courtney-i was but then i gusse i got over u Duncan-u did Courtney-i dont know how but i guess i did Duncan-look im sorry if i hert u so would u like to be um Courtney-to still be 프렌즈 thatll be nice Duncan-sure we can but i ment 더 많이 than 프렌즈 Courtney-oh u mean boyfriend and girlfriend Duncan-yeah Courtney-but What will be diffrent this time Duncan-look will be honest and not crazy I just want to be with u Courtney-really? Duncan-really then they kiss
Narrators POV:
Duncan found Courtney and left Steve unconces and went back to the wedding (this only took like 5 min.)Do 당신 Duncan Paine Take Courtney 꽃 to be your ofley wedded wife...I do and do 당신 Courtney 꽃 Take Duncan Paine to be your ofley wedded husbind.....I do....not
just kidding I do. Then with the power invested in me I now pronunce 당신 man and wife 당신 may now 키스 the bride.
Duncans POV:
With plesher.This is the best 일 of my life.
Courtneys POV: This is the best 일 ever.
Narrators POV:
When they got 집 they poped open a bottle of shapane and watched 영화 on cable.
Duncan found Courtney and left Steve unconces and went back to the wedding (this only took like 5 min.)Do 당신 Duncan Paine Take Courtney 꽃 to be your ofley wedded wife...I do and do 당신 Courtney 꽃 Take Duncan Paine to be your ofley wedded husbind.....I do....not
just kidding I do. Then with the power invested in me I now pronunce 당신 man and wife 당신 may now 키스 the bride.
Duncans POV:
With plesher.This is the best 일 of my life.
Courtneys POV: This is the best 일 ever.
Narrators POV:
When they got 집 they poped open a bottle of shapane and watched 영화 on cable.
Okay; This.. May possibly sound wierd. But! It's kinda related. So.. I was 읽기 Twilight. Then; All of the sudden... The 사랑 삼각형 popped into my mind. Do 당신 know how Edward is protective, somewhat strict about Bella, and who she hangs out with? Well... Edward is like a male version of Courtney. then; Theres... Gwen. -_-. Gwen is layed back; Protective when she wants to be; and knows how to have fun. See? Jacob's a male version if Gwen—Not goth though. Then, Bella is a female version of Duncan. 당신 see how in NewMoon; she got into tons of trouble? And; Thats how Duncan is.
Now.. What do ya think?
Now.. What do ya think?