I wrote this poem, its not very gd, but i wanted some criticism, so i figured...well, here goes
Skeletal Kiss
Kisses from a skeleton.
A hand that cannot touch.
A nose that can't pick up the scent
Of perfumed skin, as such.
Sweet nothings from a skeleton,
Inspired 의해 sightless eye.
Words tainted, 의해 the rotted lips
Through which they must pass by.
Embraces from a skeleton.
The fault of broken heart,
Which used to rest in marrow cage
But now is gone, in part.
사랑 comes not from a skeleton,
From death, from lack of life.
It only lives in memory
Which lives through after life.
Ok, be honest, What do 당신 guys think?
Skeletal Kiss
Kisses from a skeleton.
A hand that cannot touch.
A nose that can't pick up the scent
Of perfumed skin, as such.
Sweet nothings from a skeleton,
Inspired 의해 sightless eye.
Words tainted, 의해 the rotted lips
Through which they must pass by.
Embraces from a skeleton.
The fault of broken heart,
Which used to rest in marrow cage
But now is gone, in part.
사랑 comes not from a skeleton,
From death, from lack of life.
It only lives in memory
Which lives through after life.
Ok, be honest, What do 당신 guys think?
Shard of glass
drops the blood
Could have saved me?
No one
Empty promises
washed down the drain
Memories cut deep
harmful even in sleep
I'm always alone
in this broken home
There's to much blood
I'm not safe
in this nightmare.
~Kayla
What did 당신 think? Tell me in a 코멘트 또는 send me a message, please.
drops the blood
Could have saved me?
No one
Empty promises
washed down the drain
Memories cut deep
harmful even in sleep
I'm always alone
in this broken home
There's to much blood
I'm not safe
in this nightmare.
~Kayla
What did 당신 think? Tell me in a 코멘트 또는 send me a message, please.
My family tells me that
i'm very open minded with
the things that i've written out
inside my journal of poetry.
until 당신 read the compelling
poems 당신 will understand
why my journal of 시
was written the way that it
was,
I don't want people to
look at my journal of
시 and discriminate
the tranquility of this private
diary has to influence so many
people who tend to read it.
People around me doesnt
seem to understand why i'm
글쓰기 this journal in the manner
that i am, so they can understand
why my 시 means the way that it
does to me,
i'm very open minded with
the things that i've written out
inside my journal of poetry.
until 당신 read the compelling
poems 당신 will understand
why my journal of 시
was written the way that it
was,
I don't want people to
look at my journal of
시 and discriminate
the tranquility of this private
diary has to influence so many
people who tend to read it.
People around me doesnt
seem to understand why i'm
글쓰기 this journal in the manner
that i am, so they can understand
why my 시 means the way that it
does to me,
Is it okay to be
.....unwanted?
I go to mami,
To see if she
Loved me.
"you should
Be old enough
To know that
A girl who
더 많이 belongs as
A maid at a
White house
Because she is
A Mexican like
당신 that I don't
사랑 you. I
Never wanted you"
I go to papi who
I call often.
" papi do you
사랑 me?"
Papi said,
"How could I love
A girl like 당신 who
Is half the white race?
You'll bring dishonor
To my familia. I
Never wanted 당신 I
Never did."
So I lay down on
My foster mothers bed
With tears in my eyes.
My new mami loves me
But why couldn't my
White mami 사랑 me?
Do 당신 know how it is
To be unwanted? I do...
But know I am found....
Note: this short story is fictional. :)
.....unwanted?
I go to mami,
To see if she
Loved me.
"you should
Be old enough
To know that
A girl who
더 많이 belongs as
A maid at a
White house
Because she is
A Mexican like
당신 that I don't
사랑 you. I
Never wanted you"
I go to papi who
I call often.
" papi do you
사랑 me?"
Papi said,
"How could I love
A girl like 당신 who
Is half the white race?
You'll bring dishonor
To my familia. I
Never wanted 당신 I
Never did."
So I lay down on
My foster mothers bed
With tears in my eyes.
My new mami loves me
But why couldn't my
White mami 사랑 me?
Do 당신 know how it is
To be unwanted? I do...
But know I am found....
Note: this short story is fictional. :)