Here's my poem. Who likes it?

The poem is not words to write 또는 only rhythm
It's feeling coming from inside

I like it. Its reaaly nice

not bad ,its kind of sad. a 나무, 트리 is a green i agree, without them we have no air, no challenge and no dare. its good short and sweet and color abounding outwards to touch, eight out of ten;-]

It's good!

Check out my poems, 당신 can find them in my 기사 :)

pretty good i guess but im just not a poem luvr

This is actually pretty good :))

It's beautiful :)
I like it!

I like it! I think it's pretty. :3

It sounded forced. 시 should flow like a babbling stream over its bed. It shhould be powerful as mountain, yet quiet as a leaf, falling from a tree. 시 doesn't have to rhyme, but it always has a certain pattern to it. Your poem changed patterns. The new pattern was better than the first. To be honest, this poem didn't sound like it was from the heart. It sounded like it was dashed off in a hurry. Perhaps for a school assignment? The best 시 comes from the heart. I highly suggest sitting in a forest and watching the trees grow for a while. See the forest for the trees. Listen to the wind in the branches. Go alone. Solitude allows 당신 to think without the stress of human life. Go in te morning. See te sunlight filter trough te leaves. Feel their trunks. Finger a leaf. Once 당신 do that, inspiration will come.

I like it but I think a poem should mean something not just be a bunch of words put together.

That's great!!!

*applause* YES! :D