WHAT DO 당신 THINK OF THIS POEM?

He's like a flower,so gentle and sensitive.
He needs a light,he needs a water,he needs a care.
He's so sweet and mysterious,he never lets anybody close to his minds,anybody but me. He gives me a little part of his soul to keep,to cherish.
And yet,he's so lonely,trapped inside his own world,which no one else understands.
But he sees everything,he sees the hatred into the eyes of the people who judge.
And yet,he's different,he feels the weakness of the others,and it hurts.
He's trying to be a better man,but arrogant,no.
He asks no help from the others,because that's who he is,a man who lives in his own world,cold,alone and empty.
His words are like the most beautiful song,you can feel the dept in in,his eyes are so bright,you feel calm while 당신 look into them.
And he's like a poison,won't let 당신 go,but yet so cold,himself.
You're trying to reach his soul,but 당신 fail,he gives 당신 only that 당신 need to see,but yet the cold guy like he is long for the deepest 사랑 and understanding.
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Did 당신 Make It?
TDIFan960 posted over a year ago
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Yes.
irena83 posted over a year ago
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Oh yeah,it is possible.
irena83 posted over a year ago
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Pikafan32 said:
What a pleasant poem. i particularly enjoy poems like this, ones that talk about 사랑 in hating way. 또는 as I dubbed them 'Ripping Menders'.

It was very enjoyable and fluent to read, the minor mistakes wouldn't be noticed 의해 anyone but an overeacting perfectionists.

I hope no one says anything but good about this poetic wonder!

- Re Re
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Oh thank 당신 so much. Well,actually i have noticed several mistakes during the reading. LOL
irena83 posted over a year ago
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I saw them too but I meant the minor ones like for example a comma splice. Spelling mistakes and others I tought 당신 would notice... Anyways it was still delicious to read! <3 XD
Pikafan32 posted over a year ago
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Well,i did notice after i had finished the poem.lol Anyway thanks,i appreciate it.
irena83 posted over a year ago
Dwolf247 said:
I 사랑 it. It's beautiful. 당신 made it?
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Thank you. Oh yes,i wrote this poem.
irena83 posted over a year ago
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