Dose anyone have a tile sugestion and is this any good?

Have 당신 ever been hurt 의해 the one 당신 love
Have 당신 ever wanteed to change
Who 당신 were, who 당신 are, who 당신 will be
Feeling as though your life is all laid out
Wondering why 당신 have the life 당신 have
당신 have it for a reason
Figure it out!

Have youo ever been hurt 의해 the one one 당신 love
Have 당신 ever felt so betrayed
That 당신 wanted to die
Don't give up
Things will change...for the best

Have yoou ever tired to change the world
With just a song
Try to change a 심장 just 의해 saying "hello"

Have 당신 ever though 당신 had true love
Then found it in a total stranger
Have 당신 ever had so much hate
Then saved a soul that was dying alone

All of us have in one way 또는 another
Live life your way
The futures always changing








 MattxAliceNine posted over a year ago
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BittenGirl said:
wooow!that is amazing!you should write 더 많이 poems because 당신 are really good!
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irena83 said:
It's a nice poem, emotional, partly dark but filled with a hope.
Suggestions for the tittle could be:
- Eternal struggle
- Pieces of living hope
- Wondering mind
;)
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