The Siren's Song?

Hi. I write a story about two teenage girls who have to deal with everyday problems while being a mermaid to make things 더 많이 complicated. It's written in parts like a fanfiction except I made up everything 의해 myself. Will 당신 read it and 가입하기 the club? It needs 더 많이 팬 and i'll give 당신 props for joining. If 당신 could read it and tell me what 당신 think, i'll give 당신 props for honesty (:
Thanks.
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