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Well..

ZenJeager737 has asked me to review his story JASPER HELL HIGH..

To be honest, I don't usually have high hopes for the fanfiction stories of these days.

The alpha and omega Fanfiction.net page will never completely be the same as it was 3 또는 4 years ago.

All those people I've come know, are gone now, and I barelly come to this page anymore I read other pages, and review most of the stories from back in the day..

But anyway.

This story was better then I expected, though that probably isn't saying much, I wasn't expecting much.

I like the way it keeps switching between P.O.V's so rapidly, I don't think I've seen that before.

And as for the story itself. Not sure if I have anything worth saying.

But that's pretty common now.

I wish I could say their's no sex. But truth is.. I couldn't tell.

Its rated M so it's very likely. But I hope to god there isn't.. But the hope of 'nice' stories is becoming harder and harder these days.

But anyway..

Sorry for not ranting, swearing, 또는 giving a better review.

This is all I could do.

Zen asked me to point out spelling mistakes also, but I don't think I'll be the best for that. Considering I suck at it myself and don't want to sound hypercritical..

Anyway..

Till 다음 time.

Live long and prosper!
Scene 3:

(It's early morning the 다음 day, and everyone is getting ready to go on the journey to find Humphrey's parents)

Kate: 당신 don't have to do this, 당신 know?
Humphrey: Yes, I do, Kate. I have to do this. I have to know the truth.
Kate: Okay.
(Garth and Lilly arrive at the den)
Garth: We're ready.
(Marcel and Paddy fly in)
Marcel: As are we.
Humphrey: All we need now is Daria.
(Daria comes in)
Daria: I'm here.
Humphrey: Okay. Let's go.
(Everyone heads out of the 굴, 덴 where Winston is waiting with Cando and Hutch)
Humphrey: We're ready.
Winston: Good. Cando and Hutch will only be able to take 당신 to the...
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Tommy-Lee, Humphrey, Kate, Lily, Garth, Runt, Stinky and Claudette ate caribou around a fire.
Runt: 저기요 Tommy still tells us a story of Assassin.
Tommy-Lee: Request that has your parents.
Runt: Can mom It tell us a history of assassin?
Kate: Of course.
Humphrey: To go have listen to you.
Tommy-Lee: OK it was it is very a long time has
Jasper Les 늑대 lived in peace and prosperity,
Until the 일 Rogues 늑대 invaded
Jasper.
There N was that only one hope: The Brotherhood of the Assassins.
When the Assassins arrived Rogues 늑대 prepared has to fight.
Kenaï: To go let us put boots on the buttocks...
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also, i'm sorry if i sound like i'm being repetitive about this, but i just wanted to get it off my chest

1) the 애니메이션 in Dino Digs was sometimes better to look at than in Norm of the North
2) Dino Digs kept its gas humor and fart/piss jokes at a minimum, and honestly, it did have some funny bits (when Norm of the North had NONE of it)
3) at least - at the very least - Kate, Humphrey and the pups are decent main characters 당신 can route for (unlike Norm)
4) there's no Brent 또는 Agnes, 또는 Freida and Fran this time around. as for Amy, she was passable (aside from her HIDEOUS design)
5) Dino Digs at least knew when to stop being crazy and nonsensical, so that the audience can take a breath. Norm of the North NEVER stopped being nonsensical and retarded
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Yeah
And I set up and tore down this stage with my own two hands
We've travel this land packed tight in mini vans
And all this for the fans, girls, money, and fame
I played their game
And as they scream my name
I will show no shame
I live and die for this
And if I come off soft
Then chew on this

Are 당신 scared?

Devil Without A Cause
And I'm back with the 비버 hats
And Ben Davis slacks
Thirty pack of Strohs
Thirty pack of hoes
No rogaine and the propane flows
The chosen one
I'm the living proof
With the gift of gab
From the city of truth
I jabbed and stabbed
And knocked critics back
And I did not stutter when I...
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