Robsten Fanmade 의해 "hgrhr" (take a look; this girl is a real artist ! )

tell me if yall like it 또는 no the way i can know what can i improve thankx!

Rennesme and i went inside 집 were everyone was at and for our surprise everyone was at the living room just waiting for us!!!

"Happy birthday" Nessi. they all yelled
Rennesme was too happy, she was very exited
- Thank 당신 guys. she said with tears in her eyes
- 당신 deserved this and more. Esme told her
- Thanks grandma! so now am 16 officially very soon i will stop aging and finally i will go to school

- Well it's time for presents! Alice announce
- yeah i 사랑 presents, lets open them
- 당신 should open mine first. Alice...