Bella and Edward

Okay so I have written a story similar to this. Same concept just 더 많이 different. The other story I 게시됨 was/is on fanfiction.net I wrote that story years 이전 and now looking back at it, I want to change it up and fix my grammar and what not. This story picks up right after new moon before eclipse. No Victoria battle, no 키싱 Jake, no marriage, no Renesmee, at least idk yet. (; Enjoy. Review. Please.
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What if Edward and Jacob left Bella for a while and as this time alone for her, causes her pain, 더 많이 pain then they ever imagined. She turns...

I understand that I will probably get a lot of hate crime for this but I don't care THE WORLD DESEVES TO KNOW! THE TRUTH!
why harry potter is better than twilight.

1. HP 팬 don't rely on characters looks to like a story/movie.

2. even though twilight has good romantic scenes they have nothing else! HP has romance, action, adventure, friendship, even death!

3. OH and in twilight I didn't know that blood doesn't come out of your head 또는 neck when 당신 chop it off!

4. HP is for females males and for all ages. Twilight is for teenage girls! I am a teenage girl and I even hate twilight!

5. J.K Rowling...

I don't really care for Jacob that much, but this a scene that I've always wanted to see written: Jacob's wedding with Nessie. Now, I'm not the best writer in the world, so please don't judge too harshly:

Renesmee sat on the living room 침상, 소파 with Jacob's arm tight around her waist. Beside them sat Alice, a big pile of bridal magazines in her lap.
"I just can't believe 당신 two are getting married already," she gushed, flipping through the glossy pages of a Modern Bride issue. "It seems like just yesterday Ness was still in diapers. Oh, where has the time gone?"
Renesmee rolled her eyes.
"Anyway,"...