트와일라잇 시리즈

이 질문에 답하기

트와일라잇 시리즈 질문

저기요 do 당신 like this poem i did about alice and jasper's love?

these two were insepreable
the trust and 사랑 in his eyes
made her feel 안전한, 안전
when she smiled
it brightened his 일
the thrill of the adventure
the adventure of 사랑
was making alice and jasper
fall ever so passionetly inlove
사랑 is like the wind
당신 cant see it
but 당신 can feel it
사랑 folowed jasper and alice
because they were destined for eachother

 twilight_lover9 posted over a year ago
next question »

트와일라잇 시리즈 답변

TEAM-EDWARDxxx said:
I Like it...

But is okay i guess.. maybe sum 더 많이 stuff bout like 뱀파이어 haha that would be interesting..
 select as best answer
posted over a year ago 
*
당신 could just go to the request a peom 질문 and say that u kno! but thanx! for the tip
twilight_lover9 posted over a year ago
Little_Cullen said:
사랑 it. Punctuation a bit funny, but the actual 글쓰기 is really cool. I especially like the bit about he makes her feel 안전한, 안전 and her smile brightens his day. I 사랑 it. Keep it up!
 select as best answer
posted over a year ago 
*
thank-u so much
twilight_lover9 posted over a year ago
twilightgirlNo1 said:
i think its great but some of the lines could be a little better.
 select as best answer
posted over a year ago 
twilight0girl said:
it's a perfect poem about them.
 select as best answer
it's a perfect poem about them.
posted over a year ago 
Twilightpup said:
Its really good , 당신 should make one about Bella and Edward
 select as best answer
posted over a year ago 
emilyemmett said:
That is really good!! 당신 should write another one!! Maybe about the meadow 또는 Jacob and Renesmee 또는 something!
 select as best answer
posted over a year ago 
sessa123 said:
Its not bad, i always thought a poem used to jus have to rhyme but narr its really gud maybe fix up some little thing and maybe have a good thing to rhyme bout, like werewolves, 뱀파이어 anything LOL KEEP IT UP HUN XX
 select as best answer
posted over a year ago 
zXwolfgirlXz said:
aww i like it

 select as best answer
posted over a year ago 
Brysis said:
It´s cute ♥
 select as best answer
posted over a year ago 
LovelyDragon said:
Ya, I like it. Some of the lines could be a little better, but it's really cool. :)
select as best answer
posted over a year ago 
next question »
Cookies help us bring you Fanpop. By using Fanpop, you agree to our use of cookies. Learn More Got It!