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I need some help. If 당신 are a writer, then please do help (:

So I have a MAJOR writers block. I've taken a WHOLE 월 break and I think it's time to start again. The story that I want to update NOW is 'The Past Will Never Change'. It was very unique but I'm having a little trouble. I discussed with one of my 프렌즈 that I wanted to make the 다음 chapter Edward's POV, with an explanation of why he left Bella in NM. So if 당신 could read the story and maybe give me tips on how to write that? I'm not really good with sticking to the plot line.

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So I will credit 당신 when I post it up here and on FF.net. I'll prop 당신 and if 당신 could even write a tiny chunk for me, I'll REALLY appreciate it. Thanks (:
 lollipopszx3 posted over a year ago
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akashaapril said:
I really think 당신 should some from edward's pov. then kind of write from both throughout the story, eventually having them meet again. I think that would be pretty good. ummmmm...maybe have jacob and the pack in a little chapter telling what happened to them.
as for 글쓰기 a little chunk, I won't do, for the fact that I don't really know whats going on and what 당신 have planed, if anything.
but anyways, those are just a few things i would do.
and i know how 당신 feel, i get writers block all the time, when i'm writing. so i was glad to help. :)
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:D thanks! But I know what I'm doing and I want to get an inside of when Edward left Bella. Then the rest will be in Bella's POV.:D
lollipopszx3 posted over a year ago
rubytuesday101 said:
당신 have a good story,for the 다음 chapter explain about how edward feels and how he has to go to school and do normal things.Then he should meet bella and her son.Thats just idea but i think 당신 should keep 글쓰기 it's a good story.
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Thanks! I might do that for later chapters because I want to show how Bella feels!
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