Help!!!!! I don't know where to change it 또는 keep it all the same!?!?!?!

If 당신 want my advice, here it is: You're overthinking the book. You're planning too far ahead in the story. This drastically increases the chance of early spoilers. Butdon't worry. There is a way to salvage your book. First, 당신 need to throw out all your plans for the storyline. Keep anything that doesn't pose a spoiler risk. After that, firmly plant the original vision of the book in your mind. From there, the book should practically write itself.

I had the same problem. Two years ago, I was 글쓰기 a book called 참드 and Dangerous. I thought everything was wrong and I added too much stuff and I ruined the ending. I threw the book idea out. Looking back on it now I realized nothing was wrong with it, I was trying too hard and didn't relax about it. And here it is today, the original version.

U r over thinking it. U need to take a breathe and do half. Add some spoilers but then have 더 많이 질문 popp to the point where there are spoilers but 당신 haven't spoiled the ending, 당신 are just keeping the reader interested, the 더 많이 질문 and secrets go unanswered the 더 많이 they will read. Spoilers are interesting, don't get rid if them all. But if u feel that it is good then don't changer but if your 심장 is half way in it then something needs to be done.