this is after the war with the giants and this is just a sample post what you think (sorry to those who have done things similar to this i adopted some of your ideas)
Percy POV
I can't believe that tomorrow I go to Camp Half-Blood I went to go lean against the wall when I started falling. "Hera, if you did this your gonna regret it!!!"
Thalias POV
"yeah I"ll be there in a minute Phoebe, let me get my arrows." I went to go when the ground in front of me opened up and I fell through. "GODS!!! I HATE THIS!!!"
Nicos POV
I can't believe how many heroes went to Elysium after the war. I thought as I flopped onto my bed that wasn't there "CRAP!!!!"
Percys POV
"OW!" I yelled as i landed on the floor
"OUCH!" I yelled again as a person landed on me
"Thalia?"
"Percy?"
Suddenly there was a scream as a 14 year old demigod landed on top of me.
"Oh, come ON!" I complained as I pushed Nico off of me "Why does everything happend to me?"
"Cuz me and Thalia are just cool like that" Nico taunted.
"But seriously, what are we doing here" Thalia asked.
"I could ask you the same question" a familiar voice asked.
Zeus POV
I was about to welcome the campers to Olympus when suddenly three teenagers appeared out of nowhere.
"OW!" yelled a boy with black hair and green eyes, I was about to ask what he was doing here when a girl with black hair and blue eyes landed on top of him.
"OUCH!" he cried now I was getting angry but before I could talk a black hair boy with dark eyes landed on top of him
"Oh, come ON!" he complained "Why does everything happend to me!" He had a point there.
The other boy replied "Cuz me and Thalia are cool like that."
"But seriously the girl asked "what are we doing here?"
"I could ask you the same question" Chiron asked.
The three teens gasped as they saw fourteen super powered gods, a centaur and eight demigods.
"Who are you?" my voice booming.
Percy POV
I was about to answer when a package fell on my head.
"SERIOUSLY, WHAT DID I DO?!?!?!?" I exclaimed.
"Whats in the box?" Zeus asked "Open it."
I walked over and cut open the box inside there were two books and a note.
"Well? read the note" he commanded.
I cleared my throat and read:
Dear Gods,
I have sent these three heroes here so you may learn about the future from these books and perhaps we may avoid less bloodshed. However, if you try to kill these three or try to change the future I will take the books back and wipe any memory of this happening and may send the third if all goes well.
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"Well, this is exciting we get to learn about the future" Athena said.
"Yes, it is" Apollo agreed. "We get to see how even MORE awesome I am!"
Artemis groaned
"But I would like my question answered" Zeus stated
Thalia,Nico and I had a quick conversation and decided that we would tell them our names, but not who we were unless the book revealed it. And just because my friemds are so awesome they pushed me forward.
"Like the note said, we are from the future, I'm Percy Jackson"
Poseidon flinched
"This is Nico di Angelo"
Hades head snapped forward
"And this is Thalia Grace"
After I said Thalias name a squeal came from a girl of about 10 years old with blond hair and gray eyes.
"Thalia, I thought you were gone forever!" she ran up and gave her a big hug which Thalia returned
"You'll find out how I came back" she promised.
Now that I got a good look I saw that Annabeth wasn't alone Chiron, Grover, Clarisse, Connor and Travis, Silena, Will, Beckendorf, and Katie were also there all looking between the ages of ten and thirteen.
"Whats the first book called?" Silena asked.
"Umm, The Heroes of Olympus Book One: The Lost Hero" I answered
"Whos the lost hero?" Ares asked
"Thats the point in reading" Athena stated
a few of the gods and demigods snickered at this
"Who wants to read first?" I asked
"I will" Hestia volunteered
I
JASON
EVEN BEFORE HE GOT ELECTROCUTED, Jason was having a rotten day.
well this is the sample like i said this is my first one give me advice on how i can make it better, im gonna need three posts before i continue
Percy POV
I can't believe that tomorrow I go to Camp Half-Blood I went to go lean against the wall when I started falling. "Hera, if you did this your gonna regret it!!!"
Thalias POV
"yeah I"ll be there in a minute Phoebe, let me get my arrows." I went to go when the ground in front of me opened up and I fell through. "GODS!!! I HATE THIS!!!"
Nicos POV
I can't believe how many heroes went to Elysium after the war. I thought as I flopped onto my bed that wasn't there "CRAP!!!!"
Percys POV
"OW!" I yelled as i landed on the floor
"OUCH!" I yelled again as a person landed on me
"Thalia?"
"Percy?"
Suddenly there was a scream as a 14 year old demigod landed on top of me.
"Oh, come ON!" I complained as I pushed Nico off of me "Why does everything happend to me?"
"Cuz me and Thalia are just cool like that" Nico taunted.
"But seriously, what are we doing here" Thalia asked.
"I could ask you the same question" a familiar voice asked.
Zeus POV
I was about to welcome the campers to Olympus when suddenly three teenagers appeared out of nowhere.
"OW!" yelled a boy with black hair and green eyes, I was about to ask what he was doing here when a girl with black hair and blue eyes landed on top of him.
"OUCH!" he cried now I was getting angry but before I could talk a black hair boy with dark eyes landed on top of him
"Oh, come ON!" he complained "Why does everything happend to me!" He had a point there.
The other boy replied "Cuz me and Thalia are cool like that."
"But seriously the girl asked "what are we doing here?"
"I could ask you the same question" Chiron asked.
The three teens gasped as they saw fourteen super powered gods, a centaur and eight demigods.
"Who are you?" my voice booming.
Percy POV
I was about to answer when a package fell on my head.
"SERIOUSLY, WHAT DID I DO?!?!?!?" I exclaimed.
"Whats in the box?" Zeus asked "Open it."
I walked over and cut open the box inside there were two books and a note.
"Well? read the note" he commanded.
I cleared my throat and read:
Dear Gods,
I have sent these three heroes here so you may learn about the future from these books and perhaps we may avoid less bloodshed. However, if you try to kill these three or try to change the future I will take the books back and wipe any memory of this happening and may send the third if all goes well.
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"Well, this is exciting we get to learn about the future" Athena said.
"Yes, it is" Apollo agreed. "We get to see how even MORE awesome I am!"
Artemis groaned
"But I would like my question answered" Zeus stated
Thalia,Nico and I had a quick conversation and decided that we would tell them our names, but not who we were unless the book revealed it. And just because my friemds are so awesome they pushed me forward.
"Like the note said, we are from the future, I'm Percy Jackson"
Poseidon flinched
"This is Nico di Angelo"
Hades head snapped forward
"And this is Thalia Grace"
After I said Thalias name a squeal came from a girl of about 10 years old with blond hair and gray eyes.
"Thalia, I thought you were gone forever!" she ran up and gave her a big hug which Thalia returned
"You'll find out how I came back" she promised.
Now that I got a good look I saw that Annabeth wasn't alone Chiron, Grover, Clarisse, Connor and Travis, Silena, Will, Beckendorf, and Katie were also there all looking between the ages of ten and thirteen.
"Whats the first book called?" Silena asked.
"Umm, The Heroes of Olympus Book One: The Lost Hero" I answered
"Whos the lost hero?" Ares asked
"Thats the point in reading" Athena stated
a few of the gods and demigods snickered at this
"Who wants to read first?" I asked
"I will" Hestia volunteered
I
JASON
EVEN BEFORE HE GOT ELECTROCUTED, Jason was having a rotten day.
well this is the sample like i said this is my first one give me advice on how i can make it better, im gonna need three posts before i continue
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