A very short story i wrote for my freshman english class. tell me what 당신 think



Life, as I knew it, was only darkness. Only a large sea of smell, touch, taste and sound. From the 일 I was born I was not able to see, I never saw a baseball game on a hot summer’s day, 또는 a sunset on a chilling fall night. I’ve never seen the face of my one true love, but the one thing I dreaded every 일 was I never saw the face of my daughter. I didn’t have to see to know she was beautiful; I’ve known that since the 일 she was born; when I held her tiny, fragile body in my arms. The way her soft skin...

Another short story I thought of.

Will was tired, really tired. He was on his computer downstairs, trying to finish his 신고 for English class. He glanced at the clock on the computer. It read 12:31. Will yawned and went back to his work.
He suddenly heard a strange sound. It was footsteps. Will knew that was impossible, as his parents were in 침대 and his sister at a 프렌즈 house for the night.
He went back to his report. The footsteps were there again, closer. Will glanced behind him. They stopped.
He had barely pressed another key, when the footsteps were there again. And there was also a...

My eyes were glued to the pavement as I walked 집 from school. All I could feel were stinging tears falling from eyes and onto my cheeks, the rest of my body was numb. Everything around me felt small and useless. I felt a hand on my shoulder and turned around to be face to face with Ryan, my best friend. 또는 at least he was until today. He stared confused at me offering nothing but his gray eyes that were bigger than saucers. "Jenna why'd 당신 run off like that?" He started slowly trying to hide his fidgeting; he fidgeted when he was nervous. But I couldn't even look at him all I could do...

I know fighting is bad. But I have been taking her crap for years. I knew as soon as she said Keisha death was alright I wanted to kill her. I remember as soon as she said what she did I went right up to her... "What did 당신 just say?" I remember her face. It looked like she knew she would regret saying that about Keisha in front of me. "Nothing NerdBrain." I gave her the biggest death glare. I knew I would miss my bus so I walked off. Then thinking she was all squeaky clean She began talking to the clones again. Then not knowing I was still listening She uttered. "Gee I'm Glad Keisha's dead....

I lay there on my rock solid bed. Thinking of it...I look down at pictures of me a Keisha. The trips our families took together. We were so close yet now we are so far. It's not what 당신 think. She didn't 옮기기 like 당신 would've thought. What happened was to much to say. Then as a tear fell from my eye my mother walked in. "Honey, are 당신 alright. I haven't heard any noise from 당신 since lunch". As she said that she notices that I had a tears falling from my eyes. "Honey whats wrong". She came closer to me. I waved the 사진 to her face. She then got a look of concern on her face. "Honey is...

Journey to the Temple of the Gods

Day 1

Today i have started my epic journey to go find the temple of the gods. Some say it is impossible to reach. Others say the gods will destroy 당신 for entering it. I dont know who to believe but for right now i know i will be the first adventurer to try it in over a century. I have 2 companions accompanying me on this perilous journey. 1 is a centaur i met a while back and we have been best 프렌즈 ever since then. My 초 companion is a very 메리다와 마법의 숲 and honest man who also happens to be a demi god (half man half god) his mother is Athena the goddess of...