Alright im 글쓰기 a song. How does this sound??(:

Im ready Im ready
for the end to happen
Im tired im tired
of everything and every lie
당신 made a promise
that 당신 were gonna get
better now I understand that 당신 just don't want to
Your like wanna of those
stuck up chicks that never wants to quit
the hitting
the names
boy your drivin me insane
i'm tired of this
i've got a black eye the size of your fist
were done
were through
the only problem is I don't know
how to get over you
당신 used to bring out the best
but no not now
Your always 연기 like a clown
당신 said 당신 loved me
boy what happened please tell me
cuz
the hittin
the names
boy your drivin me insane
im tired of this i've got a black eye the size of your fist
were done
were through the only problem is i dont know how to get over you.
당신 hurt me because 당신 enjoy the pain I scream
and 당신 watch me cry
I want out of this
please baby
im tired of this i've got a black eye the size of your fist
im done were through
the only problem i'll ever have is I don't know how to get over you.
 Itsmejordyn411 posted over a year ago
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peterslover said:
It's a sad song, that's for sure, but well written. What style of 음악 are 당신 gonna go with it? Maybe country/rock?
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that will work!
peterslover posted over a year ago
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더 많이 a soulful sound.
Itsmejordyn411 posted over a year ago
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thanks(:
Itsmejordyn411 posted over a year ago
pufllys said:
It sounds awesome! :)
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robothor1111 said:
It's a sad song...is it going to be upbeat 또는 slow and mournful? Like some sad songs have a good beat to them, others sound really angsty. What are 당신 going for?
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더 많이 an upbeat like i was thinking from Joss Stone's song Tell Me About it.
Itsmejordyn411 posted over a year ago
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Oh that's good! Not that I have anything against angsty songs...just saying. :D
robothor1111 posted over a year ago
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its cool im looking for 더 많이 an original
Itsmejordyn411 posted over a year ago
zanhar1 said:
cool
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totaldramarox said:
thats really good, is it your first time 글쓰기 a song? I write some songs but i cant really think of one now. Are 당신 in a band?
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Yes I am(: Actually but im the "Music writing" 기타 player(:
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E-rock said:
Thats good.
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Aha(: Thanks(:
Itsmejordyn411 posted over a year ago
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