Does this sketch look good?

he needs a bigger bulge...

Looks good IMO.

It's alright. Looks p. OK to me 👍

Also i feel ya,, i used to have a rly hard time w/ getting the proportions of the shoulders right tho it's nothing that can't be fixed without some practice
Just keep practicing the proportions, you're actually not that bad

No.

It's ok.
Proportions need a bit of work but clean lines 👍

Bah, it looks fine lol. 당신 could just fix all those things pretty easily in digital like this.
All I did was shift the neck and sorta change the left shoulder.

looks very nice! way better than i can draw!

Definitely not the best drawing, but I think it's good 당신 know what 당신 have to work on. Proportions can be really hard, I know from experience. Just a tip, I don't know if 당신 did this 또는 not but when trying to work on proportions, 또는 any drawing, it's best to get basic shapes and see if they look good before adding detail. That's how I always do it. But you're totally on the right track, just keep practicing!