zoom in of my 편집

the backgrounds pretty awful imo. the lines are all different measures, especially the purple one (or is it indigo idfk). it takes away from the others and domineers the whole thing
i suppose the persons decent although the super 담홍색, 핑크 glasses and red 셔츠 are making my head spin (then again i'm kinda going through a headache so yeah obviously anything would do that). i'm not really a 팬 of the platform 또는 whatever the character's standing on
either go easy on the palate you're using 또는 figure out a way to even out the overpowering difference between the background and parts of the char

of course 당신 could also disregard everything i said like who cares its your thing do what 당신 want

no i don't have an etch a sketch

I would really suggest using a base 다음 time 당신 do something like this. Bases help give 당신 a grid of what your drawing. Not using a base would make the art sloppy and kinda messy. This is just some advice

ITT: Highschoolers with tech electives.