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I was 글쓰기 this book, and I need your opinions on it! I am still working on the 초 chapter, so no 코멘트 onn incompletion, please! :P Any suggestions, opinions, 또는 코멘트 당신 have on it, please post below! I think it is a good story, but I want other peoples opinions. Thank you! :D (There isn't a 제목 yet)





In the battle against two myths, two High School sweethearts must face the ultimate challenge; either put everything at risk to be together, 또는 put their 사랑 at risk to stay alive.


Chapter 1

Henna


Well, let’s just say that my life is not normal. In fact, it’s probably at the most least normal level as it could possibly get. I had never even heard of this myth until it had happened to me. Neither have you, because there are no records of it. I am a Masker. I was only 17 when I became one. The leader of our clan had told me that I was part of a very secret clan. He said we did good things. I still don’t know what these are. He stopped there. But I at least know this. I am not a human anymore.

I still have the mark from when I became a Masker, it is a long scratch mark on my back. Five long streaks, from five long claws. I bet you’re thinking something like, “OMG, that is just like a Vampire 또는 Zombie bite!” Well, yeah, same basic idea, but 더 많이 frightening, trust me, When I woke up from my coma when I was scratched, I almost fainted when I looked in the mirror. I couldn’t faint, I fell on the floor, feeling dizzy. My face looked like a mask. A red mask that looked like there was a cage around my face, but the bars were red. A long red streak ran around the edge of my face, and straight red line going up, down, and across my face.. My eyes were no longer the soft blue they were beofer. they were black. As black as midnight. My hands had long claws on the tips of my fingers where my nails used to be. These claws were silver, and VERY shiney and pointy, and very lethal. These claws were
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laura199627 said:
It sounds interesting :)..
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