My first Niall poem, "Love Divided" - Tell me what 당신 think maybe? :3

Going somewhere,
Ending nowhere,
Where am I to go?
Wanting solitude,
Finding opposite,
Am I to walk alone?
You, there,
Across the field,
Of 판타지 and fame.
Where did 당신 come from?
How do I get to you,
Without crossing the flame?
당신 appeared out of nowhere,
A 별, 스타 suddenly born,
And I am drawn to your light.
But 당신 can't see mine,
Its too dim to shine,
Never seen in the night.
당신 go on in life,
With it displayed to the world,
And mine displayed elsewhere.
당신 go on without knowing,
That I am here, waiting for you,
That I am always there.
And wait I do,
For 당신 to see,
The imaginary girl who is always 의해 your side.
The one with the smile,
The one with the voice,
That you'll never seem to recognize.
So 당신 go on,
일 after day,
With your lively life.
While I am stuck here,
Never near,
The one who seems to be my light.
Yes, that's right, 당신 are my light,
And shine bright, 당신 do.
Edges illuminated,
Flames engulfed,
For the one 당신 never knew.
When I am down,
And I listen to your soft melodic words,
Of carefully chosen wisdom.
I know that someday,
Deep in my heart,
My 일 will surely come.
당신 bring me to my senses,
But 당신 drive me insane,
You, the boy who's on the edge.
But I am on the verge,
And 당신 bring me back from it,
Saving me from darkness.
당신 make me feel free,
Like I am surely alive,
Like 당신 사랑 me with a burning passion.
But I am still a nobody,
Blending with the sea,
And I should just push past it.
But something about you,
Something I've never seen before,
Draws me to you.
And I smile in delight,
But frown in fright,
From how much I've fallen for you.
Though, why am I still nowhere?
Why am I alone?
Without you, I am lost.
Without you, I am unknown.

Sorry its so long and sorry if there's a typo. Please let me know what 당신 think of it :)