I like Twilight. I used to 사랑 Twilight. But then, I began to feel disappointed. I wanted Bella to have DONE something that actually could affect the entire WORLD. Suddenly, I created my own versions of Edward and Bella and the Volturi. I like Twilight as it is....but it would be much better like this.
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Bella 백조 tugged on her muddy brown ponytail to keep in in place as thundered roared and rain came down in buckets on the deserted island. The forest, slick with slime and muck, was dangerous enough without HIM lurking in the shadows. Her ears picked up a soft sound beneath the gale. He...

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Chapter 1: The unexpected

Have 당신 ever had one of those dreams, were 당신 try and run fast but 당신 just keep getting slower, well that's the dream I was having. This is the most strangest dream I have ever had. I was being chased 의해 two wannabe snobs from school, Rachel was the leader from between them, who was tall with black hair tied up in to a curly mini style afro like a thick puff ball at the back of her head. she also had long, sleek legs built for running. Along side her was her...

Note: I originally had this as a question, but I guess it was too long, so I'm re-posting this in an article.

Question number one: 뱀파이어 hearts don't beat, correct? Correct. I believe this is mentioned several times. Now, in health class, they teach 당신 that your 심장 pumps and makes your blood flow, correct? Correct. So, it stands to reason that, since 뱀파이어 hearts don't beat, they don't have blood flow, correct? Yes. So, they have no blood flow, no circulation. They cannot bleed, 또는 blush, 또는 anything related to circulation, yes? Yes. This is said several times in the book.

Now, call...