Hi everyone I just got this from my editor...
더 많이 will be added to this. But we will have to wait till he's done with the rest...
Anyways without further ado here's the editors edition of chapter 1!
SNOW
AN ALPHA AND OMEGA STORY
의해 Snow Wolf
CHAPTER I
LONE WOLF
I
It was a beautiful 일 in Jasper National Park. The sun was out and the radiance of the green 잔디 shone in the bright morning light. A gentle cool breeze flowed through my fur, making my 코트 sway from side to side. The storms had been brutal the past two days but no matter the weather, nothing was going to ruin this perfect day.
I was playing with my new friends, Jessie and Ryan. Jessie had grey 모피 with a white underbelly, her eyes a striking ice blue. Ryan's 모피 was golden, and he shared the same white underbelly as his sister, but he had strange turquoise eyes, a rare thing for a wolf.
We were playing Pin the Wolf. We chased around, trying to pin each other to the ground. As we laughed and fell about, we heard a voice coming from my newfound friend's den,
"Jessie! Ryan! It's time for your Alpha duties!" shouted their dad, Humphrey.
"Coming dad!" they barked in unison.
I looked toward them as they started to run off.
"I'll see 당신 guys later for the hunt, I better go tell mom and dad what I'm doing if we're going to disappear for a few hours!"
Ryan turned his head back and with a sly grin, said;
"Sure Snow, I'll meet 당신 at the hunting grounds before the sun starts to set. Don't forget!"
I smiled and nodded my sarcastic agreement as Ryan sprinted to catch up with his sister.
~
I got back 집 and found mom and dad sitting at the mouth of the den, enjoying the sun. Rebecca greeted me warmly as I trotted up to them. Vincent stayed quiet but he was always like that.
"Hello son. Did 당신 have fun with Jessie and Ryan?" she asked as she pulled me in to a comforting hug. "You look like 당신 did!" she said with a caring smile forming on her muzzle.
"Of course, mom. Actually, I was going to tell 당신 something -"
"Let's go into the 굴, 덴 and talk about it Snow. I'm pretty sure whatever it is, the whole territory doesn't need to hear it."
Rebecca got up and went inside, and Vincent followed dutifully after her. Once inside, dad turned to me.
"We'll son, what is it? Did 당신 get a girlfriend at last?!" he asked as he chuckled at his joke.
"DAD!" I exclaimed, giving a harsh 펀치 to his leg. "You know I'm not old enough for that!"
He yelped playfully, pretending I'd hurt him badly.
"Ha ha, okay son, I'm sorry. What's the big news 당신 have for us?"
"Nothing, I'm just going hunting with Jessie and Ryan so I won't be back for a few hours, that's all."
"That's it? I mean, that's fine son, at least you're helping feed the pack. That's all that matters. Just be careful, we don't want 당신 getting hurt. Remember you're only young and not as strong as the other wolves."
I noticed my dad had a worried look in his eyes. He turned to look at mom.
"I don't think going inside for that was necessary Rebecca..."
"Vincent honey, I was only concerned for Snow. Now if 당신 don't mind shutting your hole before I rip out your -"
"Honey, that's enough. I don't think Snow wants to hear this." he said, putting his paw over my mother's muzzle.
She pushed his paw to the ground, tapping it in annoyance as she pulled away from him, clearly miffed.
"Don't worry dad! I'll be careful. One 일 I'll be the greatest Alpha ever!" I beamed, as I moved closer to give them both a hug.
I turned and started toward the entrance to the den, but was stopped in my tracks 의해 the appearance of three dark furred 늑대 with demonic red eyes.
"Wh-wh-who are you? What do 당신 want?" I stammered, 겨울왕국 to the spot.
Dad stepped in front of me.
"Get away from my son." he growled flatly under his breath.
Mom was in front of me too now, desperation and anger in her voice.
"You heard him! Get 로스트 now before I rip out your throats and tear your carcasses apart!"
The biggest of the three intruders laughed, and waived his paw at the other two, motioning them to attack. They responded instantly, pouncing at my parents giving them no time to react. They spun in the air and kicked their hind legs out, landing crunching blows with enough force to trigger an earthquake at each intended target. My parents. My flesh and blood.
Terrified, I hid in the corner and squeezed my eyes tight, wincing at the sound of crunching bone.
~
Although an age seemed to pass, and I desperately wanted to keep me eyes closed, I had to look, had to see what had become of my parents. I opened one tear stained eye, only to be horrified 의해 the state my mother and father were in. They had been beaten badly, matted blood-stained 모피 hanging from their bruised and battered bodies. There was still some fight left in them however.
Seemingly tired of wasting his time, the pack leader of this group of evil hounds came at me all at once and struck me with his paw, claws fully extended, ripping into my chest as I screamed in pain.
Seeing their son injured so horribly, Vincent and Rebecca both screamed and struggled to get to their feet but were knocked down yet again 의해 the two 동물 that had attacked them so mercilessly.
"SNOW!"
"NO!"
"LEAVE HIM ALONE Y-Y-YOU MONSTERS!"
"PLEASE DON'T HURT OUR SON! HE'S DONE NOTHING TO YOU... PLEASE!"
They pleaded and they pleaded, but the 늑대 just walked away as one of them grabbed me 의해 the scruff of the neck.
"MOM! DAD! HELP ME!" I screamed.
The 늑대 who was carrying me 의해 the scruff of my neck spoke in a muffled tone.
"Say goodbye to your precious parents kid because it's the last time you're gonna see them again."
"GO TO HE-"
I tried to finish my sentence but it was cut short when the 늑대 hit me with a very hard object which seemed like the moon had just crash landed on my head. Everything started to fade into black as my 심장 rate almost slowed to a stop, and I fell headlong into the abyss of unconscious sleep.
~
{To be continued...}
더 많이 will be added to this. But we will have to wait till he's done with the rest...
Anyways without further ado here's the editors edition of chapter 1!
SNOW
AN ALPHA AND OMEGA STORY
의해 Snow Wolf
CHAPTER I
LONE WOLF
I
It was a beautiful 일 in Jasper National Park. The sun was out and the radiance of the green 잔디 shone in the bright morning light. A gentle cool breeze flowed through my fur, making my 코트 sway from side to side. The storms had been brutal the past two days but no matter the weather, nothing was going to ruin this perfect day.
I was playing with my new friends, Jessie and Ryan. Jessie had grey 모피 with a white underbelly, her eyes a striking ice blue. Ryan's 모피 was golden, and he shared the same white underbelly as his sister, but he had strange turquoise eyes, a rare thing for a wolf.
We were playing Pin the Wolf. We chased around, trying to pin each other to the ground. As we laughed and fell about, we heard a voice coming from my newfound friend's den,
"Jessie! Ryan! It's time for your Alpha duties!" shouted their dad, Humphrey.
"Coming dad!" they barked in unison.
I looked toward them as they started to run off.
"I'll see 당신 guys later for the hunt, I better go tell mom and dad what I'm doing if we're going to disappear for a few hours!"
Ryan turned his head back and with a sly grin, said;
"Sure Snow, I'll meet 당신 at the hunting grounds before the sun starts to set. Don't forget!"
I smiled and nodded my sarcastic agreement as Ryan sprinted to catch up with his sister.
~
I got back 집 and found mom and dad sitting at the mouth of the den, enjoying the sun. Rebecca greeted me warmly as I trotted up to them. Vincent stayed quiet but he was always like that.
"Hello son. Did 당신 have fun with Jessie and Ryan?" she asked as she pulled me in to a comforting hug. "You look like 당신 did!" she said with a caring smile forming on her muzzle.
"Of course, mom. Actually, I was going to tell 당신 something -"
"Let's go into the 굴, 덴 and talk about it Snow. I'm pretty sure whatever it is, the whole territory doesn't need to hear it."
Rebecca got up and went inside, and Vincent followed dutifully after her. Once inside, dad turned to me.
"We'll son, what is it? Did 당신 get a girlfriend at last?!" he asked as he chuckled at his joke.
"DAD!" I exclaimed, giving a harsh 펀치 to his leg. "You know I'm not old enough for that!"
He yelped playfully, pretending I'd hurt him badly.
"Ha ha, okay son, I'm sorry. What's the big news 당신 have for us?"
"Nothing, I'm just going hunting with Jessie and Ryan so I won't be back for a few hours, that's all."
"That's it? I mean, that's fine son, at least you're helping feed the pack. That's all that matters. Just be careful, we don't want 당신 getting hurt. Remember you're only young and not as strong as the other wolves."
I noticed my dad had a worried look in his eyes. He turned to look at mom.
"I don't think going inside for that was necessary Rebecca..."
"Vincent honey, I was only concerned for Snow. Now if 당신 don't mind shutting your hole before I rip out your -"
"Honey, that's enough. I don't think Snow wants to hear this." he said, putting his paw over my mother's muzzle.
She pushed his paw to the ground, tapping it in annoyance as she pulled away from him, clearly miffed.
"Don't worry dad! I'll be careful. One 일 I'll be the greatest Alpha ever!" I beamed, as I moved closer to give them both a hug.
I turned and started toward the entrance to the den, but was stopped in my tracks 의해 the appearance of three dark furred 늑대 with demonic red eyes.
"Wh-wh-who are you? What do 당신 want?" I stammered, 겨울왕국 to the spot.
Dad stepped in front of me.
"Get away from my son." he growled flatly under his breath.
Mom was in front of me too now, desperation and anger in her voice.
"You heard him! Get 로스트 now before I rip out your throats and tear your carcasses apart!"
The biggest of the three intruders laughed, and waived his paw at the other two, motioning them to attack. They responded instantly, pouncing at my parents giving them no time to react. They spun in the air and kicked their hind legs out, landing crunching blows with enough force to trigger an earthquake at each intended target. My parents. My flesh and blood.
Terrified, I hid in the corner and squeezed my eyes tight, wincing at the sound of crunching bone.
~
Although an age seemed to pass, and I desperately wanted to keep me eyes closed, I had to look, had to see what had become of my parents. I opened one tear stained eye, only to be horrified 의해 the state my mother and father were in. They had been beaten badly, matted blood-stained 모피 hanging from their bruised and battered bodies. There was still some fight left in them however.
Seemingly tired of wasting his time, the pack leader of this group of evil hounds came at me all at once and struck me with his paw, claws fully extended, ripping into my chest as I screamed in pain.
Seeing their son injured so horribly, Vincent and Rebecca both screamed and struggled to get to their feet but were knocked down yet again 의해 the two 동물 that had attacked them so mercilessly.
"SNOW!"
"NO!"
"LEAVE HIM ALONE Y-Y-YOU MONSTERS!"
"PLEASE DON'T HURT OUR SON! HE'S DONE NOTHING TO YOU... PLEASE!"
They pleaded and they pleaded, but the 늑대 just walked away as one of them grabbed me 의해 the scruff of the neck.
"MOM! DAD! HELP ME!" I screamed.
The 늑대 who was carrying me 의해 the scruff of my neck spoke in a muffled tone.
"Say goodbye to your precious parents kid because it's the last time you're gonna see them again."
"GO TO HE-"
I tried to finish my sentence but it was cut short when the 늑대 hit me with a very hard object which seemed like the moon had just crash landed on my head. Everything started to fade into black as my 심장 rate almost slowed to a stop, and I fell headlong into the abyss of unconscious sleep.
~
{To be continued...}
this came in a dream once about spirit heart... in his life time i took a real little peak of it. it was about his family. he had 2 pups...a wife... but thier names were unknown. just spirit heart. spirit 심장 and his wife were having so much fun. but then... some 늑대 came 의해 from the pack. thier pack...arnt really friendly... spirit 심장 was a alpha. but... he wasnt that quite powerful. one 늑대 was above his rate... and was pure evil... i keep wondering... is it the bad wolf... from the "TWO 늑대 CHEROKEE STORY" is it possible that he exist. impossible. then the rest of the pack came up to his family. then they murdered his pups, then they raped and killed spirit hearts wife. spirit 심장 was very upset. he tried to kill them... but he was too weak. then... they strangled spirit heart.... then killed him.... and that... was the story of spirit heart. and spirit 심장 was letting me look through his eyes... like i was him... it was crazy...
Well guys I'm back and I guess I'll add to another story because I've completely forgotten where I was going with HIM(The Humphrey in Me), Goodbye Pack, and the Brotherhood. So what I will do is start from scratch and make a new thing which sort of involves wolves....They're werewolves.....And it's for a 망가 I am actually deciding to create and might get published. (Have a artist as a friend....long story.) But since my pack here loves me...I thought it would be a good idea....But I want to know what 당신 brothers and sisters have to say....I don't mind if 당신 don't want me to...It's just easier because with each story I get feedback and I get better and better! So 코멘트 with your thoughts...I really really would appreciate it ^.^