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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. 의해 no means am I forcing 당신 to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless 당신 truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before 당신 start posting. It can be as little as a bio, 또는 as big as an entire 기사 series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no 더 많이 than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he 또는 she is in, can pull out another trick out of his 또는 her hat.
4. If 당신 absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his 또는 her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely 랜덤 and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when 당신 have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the 다음 일 you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own 또는 is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the recent outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, 또는 claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If 당신 must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, 또는 so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if 당신 do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot 또는 stabbed in the heart, then pop up 분 later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull 또는 flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to 또는 dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to 또는 dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created 의해 you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing 또는 potential character is a Mary Sue, 또는 if 당신 suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, 당신 can take link. If 당신 want, 당신 can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case 당신 were curious, which 당신 probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all 당신 want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, 의해 no means do 당신 have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
posted by Robin_Love
 Satsuriku
Satsuriku
Had him in my head for a few months. Just now wrote him up. Yay me! XD


Name: Satsuriku Kuran
Alias: None
Occupation: the Dark Prince; Full-blood Vampire
Powers:faster than light, strength, “kiss” of death, people speaking, super senses, endurance, excellence in fighting-with 또는 with out weapons
History: Satsuriku was raised as the prince of Vampires, strongest creature there is. His parents died when he was eight (in human years). He became ruler of the Vampires. He was cursed 의해 a witch with the power to steal souls; the “kiss of death”. He travels often, his band of 뱀파이어 faithful to...
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posted by InfinityYJ
BAH. I'm working on Living Remains, I swear, but I was pressured into posting this.
Rated PG-13 for gore and over-description.
Kind of AU-ish, where Nathan Stone is real and not Ryan Zucco, but not dating Fin. At all. :D


The linoleum tiles were splattered with a crimson liquid, and Dick could've sworn it was taunting him. Some of it was just 랜덤 splashes of coppery scented color against the pale walls, most of it was in patterns and words. Widened grins of a crazed madman were prominent, Bruce noted dutifully, but some were crude letters scribbled with a finger. Among these were "help," "pain,"...
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posted by Hot_ShotYJ
 Image credit: Adonihs
Image credit: Adonihs
Name: Sebastienne Bellerose Moran

Alias: Hot Shot

Occupation: Assassin, professional sniper, black 벨트 martial artist.

Appearance: Long and light brown hair but sometimes dyes it black for disguises, icy blue eyes, tall.

Personality: Loud, out going, kind, serious, can be aggressive very easily, caring, loyal.

Power: She heals but not rapidly, it is possible for her to die (obviously), and she age like normal people (also obviously) . She can also heal others as well but can’t bring them back to life.

Weapons: Rifle, two hand guns, knives, explosives.

Hero outfit: Black T shirt, black or...
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posted by FangYJ
PAIN. 
               That's all Fang felt when he opened his eyes to blinding lights. He shifted around, noticing the cuts that were across his face, including the one that stretched from his left eye and the way down past his lips. His hair was stuck together in the back from all the blood. Fang coughed and wincing from feeling his newly cracked ribs, he looked to the right staring at a IV drip that was in his arm.
"Nyah, wha?" Fang managed to croak out.
"Don't strain yourself." A woman in a labcoat re-adjusted the restraint around Fangs wrist. 
"School..."
"No no dearie. You're in Dr....
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posted by MidnightYJ
((Too involved in RP to change accounts))



She adjusted the small 표, 테이블 mirror, watching her reflected fingers braid her hair. She wasn't really paying attention to anything, just relaxed.
“Stop worrying, will ya? You're gorgeous.”
She jumped at the voice and turned to see the fifteen-year-old soldier sitting on her window sill.
“You scared me! I didn't know 당신 were here.”
The young warrior shrugged.
“I have that affect on people.”
“Not all people.”
She shrugged again, her foot hanging out the window, swinging against the sheer cliff drop the little house was located by.
“What are...
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Sneak Peek Red Revenge Book 1: To Deny a Hero
Copyright 66DragonAnimations 2014/2015.

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Sam was right were Rose thought he'd be: at his father's grave. She walked up as silently as possible and stayed half a dozen feet away, umbrella shielding her from the rain.

The 일 was gloomy. Dark clouds once again covered New York. Sam jerked the weeds out from around his dad's grave. He could've paid someone to. He didn't have to get his suit dirty replacing the 꽃 on the grave, but he did. No one was allowed to touch his father's grave.

Sam...
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posted by Punk__Heart
 Kaleb
Kaleb
Please don't shoot me

Name: Kaleb Anton

Alias: Arkana

Age: 17

Alliance: Hero

Appearance: shaggy brown hair, blue eyes, 5'10", pale skin

Personality: kind, caring, withdrawn, doesn't trust people easily, stubborn, brave

Powers: He has transformation powers that allow him to alter his appearance, martial arts, fights with a bow staff with a hidden blade

Bio: His life as a kid was normal, he went to school, he helped at his dad's shop. When he was sixteen he left his family after discovering his powers. He trained for a 년 abroad before joining the team
 랜덤 pic (thanks R_L)
random pic (thanks R_L)
 hidden blade bow staff
hidden blade bow staff
posted by Mclovin_69
(( Gotham City 6:34 PM November 12th, 2012))

He jumped a building as a cop shouted for him to stop, it amused him the cop actually thought he was going to stop. He shot his grappling hook and swung of the building " yeeha!!! " he shouted out laughing and shot a grappling hook from his other wrist compartment and swung from building to building, people wondered why he always ran if only they could be in his shoes and know all hes been through than maybe they would understand. Suddenly he was shot back into the side of a building and cracked the glass he crashed into, his eyes widened as he saw...
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posted by Robin_Love
The magic seeped inside, whispering in her heart, speaking out. Surrender. She chanted her spell again, fighting the urge to regain control of her magic. She had to do this. This was the reason she had been chosen. She was a fighter, but the best warrior had the humility to rescue anyone in danger despite the chance of risking their own lives. She had been trained, she'd known her life led up to this moment. She was strong on her own but there were weaknesses that had never been overlooked. Now it was time to let them all go; even if she took her life with them.

She felt the wind rush along...
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posted by The_Writer
The World Premiere of Divided We Fall is right around the corner, this Saturday to be exact! I have everything for the premiere completely done (except one story I'm debating on).

Now, how will this premiere work? Immediately following the mid-season premiere of Young Justice Invasion, the "Prologue" to Divided We Fall will be published. Here's a schedule to keep 당신 on track:


Sept. 29th:
"Ominous Prophecy"


Sept. 30th:
"Diabhal Part 1"
"Diabhal Part 2"


Oct. 1st:
"Trapper Part 1"


Oct. 2nd:
"Trapper Part 2"


Oct. 3rd:
"Trapper Part 3"


Oct. 4th:
"Trapper Part 4"


Oct. 5th:
"Trapper Part 5"


Oct. 6th:
"Jolt"
"Blind...
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posted by SilverWings13
 Improv Civvies
Improv Civvies
Biking across Gotham certainly took much longer than driving. But it was also faster than walking. And Aryess wasn't in the mood to break the law 의해 driving her 오토바이, 오토바이 타기 while underage, even if she did have a (false) license.
Ary didn't mind the long ride. It was a nice way to clear her head in the simple task. She could have gone without the heat, though. The beating sun had forced her to exchange her hero uniform for not her usual civvies: blue-and-gray striped shirt, hooded jean jacket, and jeans, but instead a spaghetti-strap 상단, 맨 위로 and black shorts. The fingerless gray gloves stayed in...
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posted by SilverWingsYJ
Was going to do this way back when, but I put it aside for a while. Here it is: a few ways to stay unharmed when hanging around SilverWings. I recommend NOT doing them ;)

1) Threaten Bentley.

2) Ruffle her hair.

3) Sneak up on her and jump out and yell "BOO!". She may reflexively pull out a 칼, 나이프 and... 당신 get the picture.

4) Ask why she doesn't have wings despite her hero name.

5) Touch her knives, hidden blade, 또는 any other weapon.

6) Call her "Angel", "kiddo", "Cub", 또는 any other name Blaze calls her.

7) Spray her with Silly String.

8) Dump a bucket of ice water on her while she's sleeping (yes...
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posted by InfinityYJ
Fin shifted, not opening her eyes quite yet, but instead feeling the fabrics she was resting on. It was standard cotton, nothing fancy, but it was welcoming and soft. She smiled sweetly and moved her head on the thin pillow, allowing herself to relish in the fact that there even was a pillow. Then she began to listen.
There was the beeping of a 심장 monitor, the occasional blip in sync with a heartbeat, her heartbeat, she realized. There was a bustling a ways off, not too loud, but it sounded like someone was moving things around. Sighing, she opened her eyes, and was hit with bright lights,...
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Okay, I'm gonna come right out and say it:


Young Justice Invasion Episodes 8-18 are ready to air.

BOOM! Good news!

Comic 책 are right on schedule.

Video Game something 또는 other, didn't really look:

link





Now, I also wanna say that the Robin we knew in Season 1 would never do this to a girl. But....

Dick Grayson has dated Zatanna

Dick Grayson is dating Batgirl

And Dick's surprising girlfriend is....

Rocket???


So...... Yeah..... Link below.

Adios! *runs and hides*




link



Wait, did he just blow off Tim? And Babs is strangely okay with two girls 키싱 her BF....
posted by FangYJ
It's okay...I guess.


Fang sat staring at his computer screen. 
"Gyah..No idea what to say." He frowned and leaned back against the 침상, 소파 for any ideas. A ding come from the laptop and Fang looked down and the highlighted 질문 in the corner of his screen. 
"Lovely." Fang sighed and switched over to the questions, scanning over the questions. This should be interesting 

Are 당신 goth 또는 emo?  
What makes 당신 assume that I'm either?

Why do wear so much black? Are going black and never going back?  
DO EVEN KNOW WHAT THAT MEANS?!?!?! OH MY GOD!!!!!!! 

What's with the long hair? 이모 또는 goth?...
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Twins!
Name: Swift
Secret ID: April Francine Styles
Age: 14
Occupation: Former Criminal/Heroin
Appearance: Straight long auburn hair, cobalt blue eyes, willowy.
Personality: Serious, mysterious, ferocious, and a deadly assassin. Otherwise quiet and peaceful. 당신 would usually see her training 또는 playing her guitar.
Powers: April has a natural telepathy link with her twin brother Cecil. She is the only one out of the the two to make telepathy calls with others other than her own twin 의해 either transmitting calls to ones head 또는 의해 just touching them. She also has the elemental power of air, and can...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
 Civvies
Civvies
Hehee!

Name: Alexis "Lexi" Adams
Alias: None....so far!
Powers/skills:
-Flight (wings!)
-abnormal strength like her father,
-gained Fang diseappearing act, only when Lexi moves she's still completely invisible.
-super senses
-Can only control one element, wind. And she only uses to push herself along when she's too lazy to fly.
Past: Alexis was kidnapped at the age of 3 의해 the School. Only this time, it was different. Instead of keeping her in the United States, they shipped her to Germany, holding her hostage in Itex. At the age of 6, Alexis gained enough strength to break free, and setting free the other experiments along with herself.
Other: -Lexi, is a MAJOR mommy's girl.
-May look like Fang, but she acts like Devin.
-Youngest of all the kids. 의해 7 또는 8 years.
-Easy to set off temper, but she hides it extremly well.
-She's extremly happy and cheerful.
-PLEASE DON'T give her sugar. She'll bounce off the walls.
 Silver always wants to know whats on his mind
Silver always wants to know whats on his mind
1: he loves it when she runs her fingers through his hair

2: he loves the way she is and how she jokes around with him

3: he loves it when she smiles at him

4: he loves the way she brushes the hair out of his face

5: he loves it when she blushes


(( i didnt make that many cause LOL i dunno just a couple cuz this is the first time this has been done LOL hopefully silverwings13 will have a reply to this XD LOL but yeah im making a couple one shots on these two beauties <3 iand now i have to talk cause this 기사 isnt long enough WALLY WALLY WALLY WALLY WALLY WALLY WALLY WALLY WALLY!!! <3 okay so Mcl out peace))
posted by Obscurity98
Name: Genesis

Alias: Eden

Age: 10 yrs

Nicknames: Gen, Genny, Genny-la

Powers: Flight, Invulnerability, controls but cant become 불, 화재 and water.

Skills: 거리 fighting experience

Weapons: Two 총 hidden in her 셔츠 and pocket knife.

Bio:
Harley's not clone but sister, After Lex Found her DNA, it was given to CADMUS. where they tried to re clone her, after realizing their tries were in vain, they decided on simplicity, Give Harley a sister.
They successfully created the girl, calling her Genesis.
They released her and led her to Harley.


Notes:
-This is part of her bio
- Who she is will soon be revealed.
- hates 슈퍼맨 and 배트맨 and Superboy
- Doesn't like Skylar nor Wolf, 또는 Sy.
- really smart
posted by ShadowYJ
Name: 빠른, 스위프트
Secret ID: April Francine Styles
Age: 14
Occupation: Former Crimanal/Heroin
Appearance: Straight long auburn hair,cobalt blue eyes, willowy.
Personality: Serious, mysterious, ferocious, and a deadly assassin. Otherwise quiet and peaceful. 당신 would usually see her training 또는 playing her guitar.
Powers: April has a natural telepathy link with her twin brother Cecil. She is the only one out of the two to make telepathy calls with others other than her twin 의해 either transmitting calls to ones head 또는 의해 just touching them. She also has the elemental power of air, and can even turn her...
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