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I've been working on a book for a while now. Im not gona post all of it at the same time, but I Will post the Prologue. Please tell me what 당신 think! I invite constructive criticism to make it better! THX!
Prologue
“Tanya! I don’t understand what’s so different about this kid! He’s done nothing to make me see him as special!” Tanya glowered at her obnoxious boyfriend. “Don’t 당신 see?” She said icily, “He isn’t like us!” Virgil and Tanya looked at there new child. He wiggled around in his 어린이 침대, 침대 and giggled happily. The child crabbed the edge of the 어린이 침대, 침대 and clung to it tightly. Suddenly, the boys’ eyes began to glow. When the glowing stopped, the boy released the 어린이 침대, 침대 and continued to giggle and squirm. There was a scorch mark left on the bar from where his hand was.
Tanya looked at her hard headed boyfriend and said, “We where not like this. We didn’t giggle and squirm and go to sleep kindly. He’s soft hearted.” Virgil looked at Tanya with an expression half way between anger and sadness. “What are 당신 saying that we do?” Virgil asked. Tanya Looked at her child. He had her pale blue eyes and dark skin, Virgil’s snow white hair.
“I was talking to some of the other characters the other day,” Tanya said, “They told me about the Guides. They said that It’s getting to be the time where a child of two villains becomes a Guide.” Virgil looked at Tanya with a cool expression, “And 당신 think that it’s him?” Tanya looked at her boyfriend with annoyance. “It’s time for us to take the lead for a while. We villains need a turn to be triumphant.” Virgil nodded inn agreement.
“We should train him.” Virgil said flatly, “He obviously has your 불, 화재 using abilities, and I have a strong feeling that he will be an excellent swords master.” Tanya laughed. “All in good time Virgil,” she said, “All in good time.”
I've been working on a book for a while now. Im not gona post all of it at the same time, but I Will post the Prologue. Please tell me what 당신 think! I invite constructive criticism to make it better! THX!
Prologue
“Tanya! I don’t understand what’s so different about this kid! He’s done nothing to make me see him as special!” Tanya glowered at her obnoxious boyfriend. “Don’t 당신 see?” She said icily, “He isn’t like us!” Virgil and Tanya looked at there new child. He wiggled around in his 어린이 침대, 침대 and giggled happily. The child crabbed the edge of the 어린이 침대, 침대 and clung to it tightly. Suddenly, the boys’ eyes began to glow. When the glowing stopped, the boy released the 어린이 침대, 침대 and continued to giggle and squirm. There was a scorch mark left on the bar from where his hand was.
Tanya looked at her hard headed boyfriend and said, “We where not like this. We didn’t giggle and squirm and go to sleep kindly. He’s soft hearted.” Virgil looked at Tanya with an expression half way between anger and sadness. “What are 당신 saying that we do?” Virgil asked. Tanya Looked at her child. He had her pale blue eyes and dark skin, Virgil’s snow white hair.
“I was talking to some of the other characters the other day,” Tanya said, “They told me about the Guides. They said that It’s getting to be the time where a child of two villains becomes a Guide.” Virgil looked at Tanya with a cool expression, “And 당신 think that it’s him?” Tanya looked at her boyfriend with annoyance. “It’s time for us to take the lead for a while. We villains need a turn to be triumphant.” Virgil nodded inn agreement.
“We should train him.” Virgil said flatly, “He obviously has your 불, 화재 using abilities, and I have a strong feeling that he will be an excellent swords master.” Tanya laughed. “All in good time Virgil,” she said, “All in good time.”
It’s the color of you
당신 always wore it
It’s the color we shared
As we hid from them
With it we showed our true selves,
Though no one cared
Our 주황색, 오렌지 book bags
Were our shields from some of the pain
We protected each other
But it wasn’t enough
We were like two 주황색, 오렌지 crayons
When everyone else was green
Then 당신 left me alone,
All I had was our color orange
As they hit me
I took peace in knowing
당신 were in the 주황색, 오렌지 field in the sky
당신 always said was there.
The 주황색, 오렌지 of the sun set
Is your smile
Even though 당신 left too soon
Orange…
Now it’s my color
My way of remembering you
Now I am the lone 주황색, 오렌지 in the rainbow
Without 당신 here
I protect my own
Though I wish 당신 were here
Now 주황색, 오렌지 is my color
A color for your bravery
A color for my survival
주황색, 오렌지 will forever be our color
Even though death took 당신 away
Forever 주황색, 오렌지 for you,
Sweet Cassidy.
당신 always wore it
It’s the color we shared
As we hid from them
With it we showed our true selves,
Though no one cared
Our 주황색, 오렌지 book bags
Were our shields from some of the pain
We protected each other
But it wasn’t enough
We were like two 주황색, 오렌지 crayons
When everyone else was green
Then 당신 left me alone,
All I had was our color orange
As they hit me
I took peace in knowing
당신 were in the 주황색, 오렌지 field in the sky
당신 always said was there.
The 주황색, 오렌지 of the sun set
Is your smile
Even though 당신 left too soon
Orange…
Now it’s my color
My way of remembering you
Now I am the lone 주황색, 오렌지 in the rainbow
Without 당신 here
I protect my own
Though I wish 당신 were here
Now 주황색, 오렌지 is my color
A color for your bravery
A color for my survival
주황색, 오렌지 will forever be our color
Even though death took 당신 away
Forever 주황색, 오렌지 for you,
Sweet Cassidy.
Violently, the ground shook,
As the mountain exhaled black smoke.
Overwhelmed, they ran for cover,
Those left began to choke.
Cherished, were the possessions left behind,
Melted and scattered as ash.
Beloved, the children lost,
They couldn’t make a 빠른, 스위프트 dash.
Darkened, the cloudy heavens above,
Black clouds fell from the sky.
Covered, the people escaping,
With no way out they began to die.
Lost, the souls of the trapped,
A snatched half-chance at life.
Fallen is Pompeii;
Civilisation, 사랑 and it’s people’s cries.
As the mountain exhaled black smoke.
Overwhelmed, they ran for cover,
Those left began to choke.
Cherished, were the possessions left behind,
Melted and scattered as ash.
Beloved, the children lost,
They couldn’t make a 빠른, 스위프트 dash.
Darkened, the cloudy heavens above,
Black clouds fell from the sky.
Covered, the people escaping,
With no way out they began to die.
Lost, the souls of the trapped,
A snatched half-chance at life.
Fallen is Pompeii;
Civilisation, 사랑 and it’s people’s cries.