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Here's a story contest for 당신 guys!

Rules:
Has to be one of these genres: Realistic Fiction, Fantasy, Historical Fiction, 또는 Horror.
Has to have at least 3 paragraphs with five sentences in each, 또는 five paragraphs with three sentences in each.
No bad language 또는 innapropriate sentences in it.

Prize:
I will do a drawing of the main character of the first 3 winners' stories
(The winners, whoever got the best votes, has to go onto my "PegasisterFun's 글쓰기 Contest Chat"
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Firewriter said:
Alright, here's my sucky attempt. Fiction/ horror maybe??

' Blood. That was all I remember seeing. Pools and pools of blood. The feeling of electricity still coursing through my half numb body keeping me alert. A dim swaying lamp hanging low from the dark ceiling giving off very little light, making everything eerie. The chair, cool steel metal, tipped to it's side. Darkness all around. A fence, cold under my blood covered fingers. What happened? Where was I? '

"Miss Taylor?" My head snapped up, eyes wide, frantic. My hands on the metal coffee cup I held tightened; my knuckles turning white.

' Hands tightening on the cold metal arms of the chair- electricity- screaming...'

"How are 당신 feeling?" The cop asked sitting in the chair behind his 책상, 데스크 opposite mine. He was some what thin. A little older, early forties maybe. I shrugged in response to his question.
"Okay I guess." He nodded, clearly shocked at how calm my voice was in comparison to my state when they found me. He put a pale yellow file on his 책상, 데스크 in between us. I stared at it. People rushed around the office, doing their jobs and working on cases, although mine seemed to be the biggest one so far.
"Miss Taylor, do 당신 remember anything from what happened?"

'Knives, guns, tazors, crying, screaming...'

"No." He leaned back in his black chair, it squeaking silently under his weight. He put his fingers up to his mouth thoughtfully. Watching me for a brief moment.
"Do 당신 remember any details about your attackers 또는 whereabouts?"

' "Don't 당신 remember me?" Breath smelling of common Chinese food, eyes black mirrors, intimidating. Shortly cut raven black hair and deep 올리브 skin the color of wet sand. Long 칼, 나이프 in hand and familiar black uniform on. Hēi'àn.'

"No." I replied steadily. His deep brown eyes narrowed slightly as he studied me. Then, standing up, he grabbed the yellow file off his wooden 책상, 데스크 and patted my shoulder.
"Well, 당신 just focus on getting better now. And if 당신 remember anything, don't hesitate to tell us." I nodded and watched him as he walked off, stopping at another officer who had talked to me earlier. Asking the exact same questions. He was an African American man, well build and almost bald. I strained my ears to listen in on their conversation. Although it wasn't that hard to hear them.
"Detective can I help you?" The African American cop asked.
"Uh yeah," he tapped the file almost nervously and looked ever so slightly back at me. "I wanna put a watch on this girl."
"Why do 당신 want to send this request?"
"I feel like she's hiding something. Almost like she is trying to protect her attackers."
"Detective, that is normal for someone if their life was threatened. I would give her some time."
"Look, Caleb, there is something different this time. I just want a watch put on her." Caleb walked off and I kept an eye on the detective. Me being quiet is protecting you. I thought.
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rugbylover said:
She was doing fine until she saw a mysterious man walking towards her. Who was this man she wondered the man asked “are 당신 Annabelle?” she answered “yes what do 당신 want with me”. He said “I want all of your 13,000,000 dollars and if 당신 don't I will kill you”. Annabelle was frightened she wondered why he thought she a homeless woman would have 30,000,000 dollars she would have been living inside a masion already.
He must be mad to do this to the wrong person.

Suddenly the door burst down it was 배트맨 but something was off about him. He looked strange but then he pressed a button. She was nocked unconcsios. After two hours Annabelle saw 배트맨 carving something into her arm then she thought only bellatrix lestrange does this. It wasn't 배트맨 it was bellatrix Annabelle said “your not 배트맨 your not here to save me 당신 are Bellatrix Lestrange just because I have muggle parents doesn't mean 당신 have to do this'.

Bellatrix Lestrange responded with “I'll do what I did to Neville Longbottems parents to 당신 aka the crucirtist spell. Ha ha ha”. Annabelle tried to get up but she couldn't. “I don't have 30,000,000 dollars” she screamed “I know 당신 don't it was just an excuse to kill you”. The 글쓰기 said mudblood “why are 당신 treating me like how 당신 treated Hermione Granger yes I know they made 영화 about Harry Potters life”. “I know are 당신 an idiot now to kill 당신 ha ha ha AVADA KEDAVRA” and in less then a 초 she was dead.
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