Bella & Edward

Okay so I have written a story similar to this. Same concept just 더 많이 different. The other story I 게시됨 was/is on fanfiction.net I wrote that story years 이전 and now looking back at it, I want to change it up and fix my grammar and what not. This story picks up right after new moon before eclipse. No Victoria battle, no 키싱 Jake, no marriage, no Renesmee, at least idk yet. (; Enjoy. Review. Please.
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What if Edward and Jacob left Bella for a while and as this time alone for her, causes her pain, 더 많이 pain then they ever imagined. She turns...

I understand that I will probably get a lot of hate crime for this but I don't care THE WORLD DESEVES TO KNOW! THE TRUTH!
why harry potter is better than twilight.

1. HP 팬 don't rely on characters looks to like a story/movie.

2. even though twilight has good romantic scenes they have nothing else! HP has romance, action, adventure, friendship, even death!

3. OH and in twilight I didn't know that blood doesn't come out of your head 또는 neck when 당신 chop it off!

4. HP is for females males and for all ages. Twilight is for teenage girls! I am a teenage girl and I even hate twilight!

5. J.K Rowling...

I don't really care for Jacob that much, but this a scene that I've always wanted to see written: Jacob's wedding with Nessie. Now, I'm not the best writer in the world, so please don't judge too harshly:

Renesmee sat on the living room 침상, 소파 with Jacob's arm tight around her waist. Beside them sat Alice, a big pile of bridal magazines in her lap.
"I just can't believe 당신 two are getting married already," she gushed, flipping through the glossy pages of a Modern Bride issue. "It seems like just yesterday Ness was still in diapers. Oh, where has the time gone?"
Renesmee rolled her eyes.
"Anyway,"...

These are my fave Edward 인용구 from the Eclipse book.Enjoy them and fall in 사랑 with Edward all over again.


I’ll let 당신 pay me back, if that makes 당신 happy. If 당신 want, I can charge 당신 interest.

Edward Cullen, Eclipse, Chapter 1, p.22

There’s no hurry. I won’t let anyone hurt you. 당신 can take all the time 당신 need.

Edward Cullen, Eclipse, Chapter 1, p.25

I’ll never forgive myself for leaving you. Not if I live a hundred thousand years.

Edward Cullen, Eclipse, Chapter 1, p.33

I don’t know how to phrase this properly. It’s going to sound cruel, I suppose. But I’ve come too close...

Here's chapter 4 enjoy:)
Hala's Pov
I never thought that i would fall in 사랑 after my mother died.I thought that life suck and there wasn't any reason for me to be here. I have no hope but until today when i meant Seth. He made me feel like there was something to live for. Like i worth something. I've never loved anyone beside my mother. Every 키스 and touch was a magentic shocked through my body. It felt great. Seth was explaining to me imprinting that every 늑대 imprints in when they find their 'Soul Mate' and they will do everything for them. The Seth told me that he imprinted on me and...

Dear Edward


Edward, 당신 are THE guy according to 99.9% of the girls out there but not me no siree! here is why:

Watching Bella while she is asleep:
I get that 당신 wanna protect her blah blah all the romantic stuff, but 당신 started doing the watch-her-while-she-is-asleep thingy RIGHT after 당신 met her. What were 당신 protecting her from? oh right 당신 were scared that she would die in her sleep 또는 something, would have been interesting to see how 당신 would have saved her from that one.

The whole deal with blood:
Do not care whether 당신 drink human blood, animal blood 또는 any other blood. Its disturbing...

''edward where are we going?'' 당신 asked feeling nerves overcome you.''it's not important right now''he whispered trying to keep controll.''why are 당신 so mad?''you asked you've never seen him ike this beffore.''i just can't stand it when someone makes 당신 angry...i'm going to kill mike newton!''he shouted increasing his speed limit. ''why did 당신 fight you've always been in controll untill 당신 로스트 it today why?''you asked him.''like i said i can't stand it when someone makes 당신 angry and when they try to flirt with you...i was 읽기 his thoughts i knew what he wanted i knew what he felt...

''ok class today we're switching seats''your teacher announced.''_and edward cullen,mike and tyler...''the sound of your name made 당신 jerk up as edward cullen sat 다음 to you.''hey_my name is edward cullen''he said in his perfect voice.''hi'' 당신 replied shyly.at the end of class 당신 walked fast down the hall but tripped over mike newton and tyler,''sorry babe''mike smiled at 당신 he knew 당신 hated when people called 당신 babe.''stop it 당신 know i hate that!'' 당신 yelled at him through klenched teeth.''sorry babe''he chuckled again darkly,''mike just GO!!!'' 당신 yelled furiously.''make me!''he...

Well I promised this tomorrow but I finished it and well here it is. It's Bree tanner in diegos point of view. Going from where he left her his final night with her. I wrote this fir fun and have only wrote this one. Here's the link about me explaining what I am doing: link
And all that I am also continuing midnight sun 당신 first timers 읽기 my 팬 fiction. Umm...what next? Oh yeah no copyright intended just free weighting. Oh yeah one side note this is a rough draft. It is not edited of anything. I just wrote it for kicks and it is my 다음 project I am working on. So 당신 will see this draft...