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Rosalie's POV
I was in my room sobbing over my old life and the the fact I will be cold and hard forever. A knock at my door broke my thoughts. I quickly pulled myself together and said, "come in." The door opened wide enough to revel Edward, my brother for all intensive purposes. Edward was tall and always looked to have a sadden, i'm going to hurt 당신 if 당신 say the wrong thing to melook on his face. His hair stuck up every which a way, people we went to school with here in Astoria say he has hair like Elvis. He slowly stepped through the doorway I looked at him and said "Yes Edward, is anything wrong?"
He looked at me for a 분 and said, "you need to hunt, your eyes are starting to get dark and everyone's worried because 당신 haven't been in a while."
"Ok Edward, I will go hunting." I told him getting off my 침대 and following him down stairs.
When I got down stairs I saw Esme, my mother, she has light brown hair that hung in curls just below her shoulders. I call her my mother because that is what she is, she is a better mother than my old one, not that I didn't 사랑 her though. "We are going hunting, we will be back soon." I said grabbing my 재킷, 자 켓 out of the closet.
"Alright, Carlisle should be returning from hunting himself." Esme said in return.
I smiled at her and followed Edward out the door. As soon as we reached the edge of the woods we both began to run. Edward stopped suddenly. What could possibly be wrong i thought.
"A herd of deer." he answered the thought that was in my head. It gets really annoy that he can read my every thoughts. "Tell me about." He said as he went after the buck that just emerged into the clearing in front of us.
A smaller female emerged behind it and I ran after. I put broke its neck so it can't fight and it won't feel anymore pain and slowly sank my teeth into its neck. The warm blood trickled out of the wound my teeth created and down my throat.
"I'm going back home." Edward said as I rose from the deer.
"Ok, I'm going to hunt a little longer." I responded.
Edward started running towards home, at that time, I had no idea of the tragedy of my decision.
Rosalie's POV
I was in my room sobbing over my old life and the the fact I will be cold and hard forever. A knock at my door broke my thoughts. I quickly pulled myself together and said, "come in." The door opened wide enough to revel Edward, my brother for all intensive purposes. Edward was tall and always looked to have a sadden, i'm going to hurt 당신 if 당신 say the wrong thing to melook on his face. His hair stuck up every which a way, people we went to school with here in Astoria say he has hair like Elvis. He slowly stepped through the doorway I looked at him and said "Yes Edward, is anything wrong?"
He looked at me for a 분 and said, "you need to hunt, your eyes are starting to get dark and everyone's worried because 당신 haven't been in a while."
"Ok Edward, I will go hunting." I told him getting off my 침대 and following him down stairs.
When I got down stairs I saw Esme, my mother, she has light brown hair that hung in curls just below her shoulders. I call her my mother because that is what she is, she is a better mother than my old one, not that I didn't 사랑 her though. "We are going hunting, we will be back soon." I said grabbing my 재킷, 자 켓 out of the closet.
"Alright, Carlisle should be returning from hunting himself." Esme said in return.
I smiled at her and followed Edward out the door. As soon as we reached the edge of the woods we both began to run. Edward stopped suddenly. What could possibly be wrong i thought.
"A herd of deer." he answered the thought that was in my head. It gets really annoy that he can read my every thoughts. "Tell me about." He said as he went after the buck that just emerged into the clearing in front of us.
A smaller female emerged behind it and I ran after. I put broke its neck so it can't fight and it won't feel anymore pain and slowly sank my teeth into its neck. The warm blood trickled out of the wound my teeth created and down my throat.
"I'm going back home." Edward said as I rose from the deer.
"Ok, I'm going to hunt a little longer." I responded.
Edward started running towards home, at that time, I had no idea of the tragedy of my decision.
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mY NAME NAOMI AND I AM PRACTICLY IN LUV WIT PATRICK!! oMG HE SO SEXi!!! i WISH i COULD TALK TO DEM SOMED 일 AND i'D LUV IF 일 CUD CUM TO cHI~TOWN 1 일 AND HAV A CONSERT. iF THEY PERFORMED 4 ONE OF MY B-DAY PARTYS ID PROBABLY FAINT!! aNYWAY I LUV ALL OF B5 THEY GREAT SINGA AND 일 A CUTE BUT I LUV PATRICK DA MOST. mE AND MY FRIEND JOCELYN WANNA MEET THEM SO BADD!! wE LUV B5!!!
Bella and Jacob
as it seems to be best 프렌즈 with feelings Jacob's 심장 beats for Bella and yet after all she put him through it can steel be beating for that girl that will one 일 have the vampire's eyes and have to keep up with lies to keep herself a secret to stay alive, Jacob's 심장 wants Bella but he gets Her daughter Renessme and he loves her much 더 많이 so for now his 심장 only beats a Little for her mother but so much 더 많이 for her.
Bella and Edward
Edward can break her and put her back together so easy like the wind moving a leaf on a summers 일 but steel yet there it stay in the new place. Bella will always 사랑 Jacob as a friend and as a son for her daughter will marry him one day. Bella and Edward will always be a perfect couple as there eyes to match there 심장 for no beat there gaze to stare forever in each others arms.
as it seems to be best 프렌즈 with feelings Jacob's 심장 beats for Bella and yet after all she put him through it can steel be beating for that girl that will one 일 have the vampire's eyes and have to keep up with lies to keep herself a secret to stay alive, Jacob's 심장 wants Bella but he gets Her daughter Renessme and he loves her much 더 많이 so for now his 심장 only beats a Little for her mother but so much 더 많이 for her.
Bella and Edward
Edward can break her and put her back together so easy like the wind moving a leaf on a summers 일 but steel yet there it stay in the new place. Bella will always 사랑 Jacob as a friend and as a son for her daughter will marry him one day. Bella and Edward will always be a perfect couple as there eyes to match there 심장 for no beat there gaze to stare forever in each others arms.