I know everybody wants they're 기사 on What's Hot on the first page 또는 on 상단, 맨 위로 Rated. So do I. my first article, Who Is Better, was on 상단, 맨 위로 Rated for a couple of weeks once. I was really happy. Then it got moved to What's Hot on page 7. I'm fine with that, but I kind of miss it being on 상단, 맨 위로 Rated. I'm still trying to get it on there still though. But am I right everybody wants there 기사 to soon be on one of those pages. That is why I am 글쓰기 this article. I want everybody who reads this to go to the 코멘트 area of this 기사 and put what 당신 always want in a Twilight article. So not only me, but everybody else can get 조언 on what to put on their 다음 article.
ok so this is my first stoy so please 코멘트 and tell me if 당신 want me to continue and if 당신 have any ideas it would help.plz.=D
(bellas pov)
I was studying for the dartmouth finals when edward walked in and through my book across the room.the 다음 thing i knew he was on 상단, 맨 위로 of me.you study to much he whispered in my ear his lips traced along my jaw and back up to my lips.then there was a knock on the door.go away alice!edward said angry.i pushed edward off me and sliped into my defenive crouch. its ok bella its just alice.no its not i said through my teeth then the door slamed down.a girl walked in and edward started screaming so i put my sheild around him and he stoped. who are 당신 and what do 당신 want!?!i asked hard.my name is 재스민 속, 재 스민 im from olimpia.then i relaxed my crouch because i knew of olimpia.jasmine smiled your from olimpia to right.i nodded im a telapath just like you,am i correct.yes i said guilty.edwards eyes were confused and in shock.
(bellas pov)
I was studying for the dartmouth finals when edward walked in and through my book across the room.the 다음 thing i knew he was on 상단, 맨 위로 of me.you study to much he whispered in my ear his lips traced along my jaw and back up to my lips.then there was a knock on the door.go away alice!edward said angry.i pushed edward off me and sliped into my defenive crouch. its ok bella its just alice.no its not i said through my teeth then the door slamed down.a girl walked in and edward started screaming so i put my sheild around him and he stoped. who are 당신 and what do 당신 want!?!i asked hard.my name is 재스민 속, 재 스민 im from olimpia.then i relaxed my crouch because i knew of olimpia.jasmine smiled your from olimpia to right.i nodded im a telapath just like you,am i correct.yes i said guilty.edwards eyes were confused and in shock.