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posted by marvel517639
Here's chapter 8 enjoy J
Seth’s Pov
Zooey and our family went to my birthday party. We opened my presents I got new clothes and stuff for my room. Zooey drew me a picture of me in my human form and 늑대 form. It was so good and she gave me a Quileute/ Witch/ Gypsy 목걸이 that Quileute witch’s gypsy women give to their mates to show much they 사랑 them which made me feel even happier. I want to know what Zooey said to her ancestors to make me come back to life but I’m glad because I would never forgive myself if I left and hurt her. Alice yelled “Cake time!” And everyone was around me and my cake.
“Ready? One, two, three.” They sang happy birthday to me and I blew out the candles. I felt someone’s hands on the back my head and shove my face into the cake. I turned and see Zooey’s innocent face trying not to laugh while everyone is laughing “Oh you’re going to pay.” Her eyes got big “Should I run?” The pack nodded and she took off running. I ran after her. She was really fast but not fast enough. I heard her giggled and screaming. I ran as fast as I could and grabbed her 의해 her waist and she squealed. “Gotcha.” I kissed her and she pulled back looking at her shoulder “Oh Seth look what 당신 did. 당신 got frosting on my shoulder.” I licked it off. Zooey giggled and licked the frosting off my face “Mmmm 당신 taste good.”
I smirked “I know so do you.” We walked back holding hands. Embry looked at Zooey’s “Where the frosting?” She rubbed her stomach “In my belly.” Embry was disgusted “Ewww that’s disgusting.” She rolled her eyes and walked past him “I’m half mutt what else I’m I supposed to do?” Everyone laughed and Rosalie put her arm around Zooey “Oh I 사랑 this girl.” I smiled snatching Zooey back “Yeah but I 사랑 her more.” sticking my tongue at her then kissed Zooey’s cheek. Alice put on Dirty Dancer from Enrique Iglesias “Ok Zooey we’ve all seen the funny and kind side of you. Now let’s seen the wild side.” Zooey smiled and grabbed my hand.
We made it to the center and Zooey started to sing and I sang along. We danced like crazy. I’d never seen this part of Zooey but I loved it she has a wild side. I had my hands on her waist as she rubbed against me. I ran my hands from her arms in the air down her arms; I grabbed her breasts growling in her ear as she smiled, my hands moved to her sides of her stomach and her waist squeezing. I felt her hip 옮기기 side-to-side underneath my hands. When the beep was louder and faster she broke off and was twirling and dancing fast. I was so shocked. She looked so amazing and beautiful. At the end her body was against my and we slid to the ground smiling and breathing hard.
Everyone clapped around us as I pulled Zooey into my arms smoothing her with kisses. I sat down and Zooey sat on my lap with her face buried in my neck breathing lightly making me smile. Her hand slipped in my squeezing my fingers “Are 당신 having fun?” My arm tighten around her body “Yes just because you’re here.” I felt her smile on my neck. She pulled up to 키스 me. Embry came up “Zooey can I talk to 당신 alone?” She nodded getting up and kissed my forehead “I’ll be back baby.”
Zooey’s Pov
I walked with Embry to the forest in silence until we reached a lake. He looked nervous and unsure “Look Zooey you’re my sister and I 사랑 you. I know 당신 사랑 Seth very much and 당신 two are getting pretty serious. I know 당신 two will probably do it tonight. I want to know is this what 당신 want.” I grabbed his hand squeezing it “Today I thought I 로스트 him and it was my entire fault. I beg them to bring him back,” I looked at the sky then looked back at our hands “and I promise to give him whatever he wants and I was lucky because of him I protected Renesmee, I found 당신 and mother. He made me feel like there was something to live for and I owe him. It’s not just for him it’s for me too. I do want this I 사랑 him and that will never change. I hope 당신 won’t hate me.”
He hugged me and kissed my cheek “I would never hate you. You’ll always be my sister forever and I 사랑 you.” I closed my eyes “I 사랑 당신 too.” We sat there for a while looking at the lake then we headed back. For the 다음 시간 또는 two we spend time with the family and Seth then we began to pick up everything in like 30 minutes. Everyone said their goodbyes and left. Alice pulled me into her room and handed me a bag of clothes for me and Seth and a hotel key for the Pacific Inn Motel. I hugged her and said thank you. Seth and I left and I told Seth where we’re going and was so happy.
I was nervous but happy and excited at the same time. We reached the motel and thank god Alice got the one all the way at the end so no one can hear us. Seth’s arm was around my shoulders saying “I 사랑 당신 so much.” Over and over in my ear as we walked in the room. The room had white walls and carpet; a bathroom and a king size 침대 with dark blue sheets. It was nice “Thank 당신 Alice.” I thought as Seth grabbed my hands and twirled me around. When I looked into his eyes and he looked into my, he kissed me with passion and love. I brought him to the 침대 and pushed him down roughly. I felt him smile as we kissed I traced my fingers down his white 셔츠 unbuttoning it and throwing it on the floor.
I got on 상단, 맨 위로 of him running my fingers up and down his six pack as he laughed against my lips. (And 당신 all know what happens after that.) After I fell asleep in Seth arms thinking “That was the best night of my life.” I woke the 다음 morning to Seth lightly snoring in my ear which made me giggled. I turned around and watched Seth sleep. He was so cute and peaceful. I wonder if any of our children will look like Seth. It would be cute a small Seth running around the house. I smiled at the thought then frowned “Does Seth even want children?” I brushed the back of my hand against his cheek making him blush in his sleep. I tried to get up but Seth’s arms tighten around my waist “Where are 당신 going?”
“To take a 샤워 so if 당신 want to 가입하기 get up now.” As soon as I said that he was up “I’m coming.” He picked me up 의해 my waist and carried to the bathroom. He whispered in my ear “Last night was amazing, 당신 were amazing. I 사랑 you.” I kissed his cheek “And 당신 made me feel like I was…oh…god I can’t even think right now. I 사랑 당신 too.” He laughed as he turned on the shower. We bathed each other and got dressed. I put on a medium length white dress with little green and orange/ yellow 꽃 and little short shorts underneath and a black belt.
I put on my necklaces along with white feather earrings and brown wedged sandals with straps that went to above my ankles and a gray little hat. I curled my hair and put a little make-up on. I walked out the bathroom to Seth who was deciding on what to wear “How do I look?” He turned around and was checking me up. I didn’t know if that was and yes 또는 no “Is it too much? I can change if 당신 want.” He shook his head “No! No 당신 look perfect!” I blushed. I went to Seth and pick out a white short sleeve shirt, his black jacket, and blue torn shorts. “Thank you.” He kissed my cheek and ran to the bathroom.

I called my brother “Hello?” he sounded tired.

“Hey it’s me Zooey.” I giggled

He shift on a 침대 또는 something “Oh 저기요 sis how was it? How are 당신 feeling? Did Seth hurt you?”

“Wait bro too many questions. First it was amazing. 초 I feel so happy. And third no, Seth didn’t hurt me.”

He took a deep breath “That’s good. I’m glad that Seth didn’t hurt 당신 또는 I would’ve killed him.”

I smiled “Yeah we might go to breakfast 또는 to the carnival 또는 something.”

“Ok just be careful and stay close to Seth k?” He asked worried.
He just made me roll my eyes “K I will. 사랑 you.” I heard him smile “Love 당신 too.” I hung up and saw Seth sitting on 침대 waiting for me. I smiled and jumped on his lap making him fall on the 침대 “So baby what do 당신 want to do today?” He gave me a peck on the lips “Anything 당신 want.” I sat on his chest with my legs against his sides of his stomach “Mmmm… what about we go to breakfast then to the carnival?” I heard his stomach growl “Hey let’s go I’m hungry.” I grabbed my phone and clipped inside on my 샌들 wedges, I put my credit card and Id that Alice got me and lose money in my bra.
Seth drove us to a restaurant named In Place. We walked in holding hands and the hosts brought us to a booth. I saw five teenage boys looking at me in a perverted way and just rolled my eyes. The hosts gave us menu’s “Here 당신 go folks and you’re waitress will be with 당신 in a few minutes.” I nodded “Thank you.” She left and I looked at the menus “I’m so hungry that I can eat a horse.” Seth chuckled in my ear “I’m so hungry that I can eat you.” I turned and he kissed me “Mmmm… 당신 taste so good.” I smiled and his warm hand tighten on my cheek as the other one was on my thigh going up my dress. I pulled him closer to me and we interrupted 의해 someone clearing their throat.
I looked at the beautiful teenage girl with long brown hair and gray blue mixed eyes and tan skin. She was skinny and long. She had on a 무지개, 레인 보우 color strapless corset 셔츠 that 당신 can see her lower stomach and a 무지개, 레인 보우 tutu, 무지개, 레인 보우 socks, bracelets, and necklace. She had on a one blue boot and a pick one. She spoke breaking my train of thought “Hi folks my name is Falyn and I’ll be you’re waitress. Can I get 당신 anything to drink?” Seth said “Yeah I’ll have 주황색, 오렌지 주스 and,” He turned to me “Chocolate 우유 please.” She nodded “Do 당신 know what 당신 two want?”
“Yeah we want the four waffles, four eggs, two 해시시, 해시 browns, and six bacon.” I said as she was shocked “Anything else?” Seth shook his head and she walked off. I turned to Seth running my hand down his cheek “So where were we?” He smirked “At the part where I do this.” He grabbed me and kissed me. I felt his tongue twist with my. I heard a familiar voice “Seth? Zooey? Is that you?” We turned and I saw Jolie. She was in the same uniform as Falyn but had a gray shirt. I got off Seth and hugged Jolie “Awww I missed 당신 so much. I’m sorry we didn’t really meet yesterday.” She pulled back “It’s ok.”
Jolie’s Pov
It was so good to see Zooey. I haven’t seen her in years. She’s different but is beautiful still. I’m glad she’s with Seth their perfect couple ever! I’ve never seen Seth so happy in my entire life until now. I saw Falyn was their waitress and got Rikki and Kayla “Falyn, Rikki they are my cousin’s Zooey Call Embry’s sister and Seth Clearwater Leah’s brother, guys this are my 프렌즈 Falyn Hartwick and Rikki Evans.” They shook hands and we sat down and got to know each other. Rikki and Falyn knew about the Cullen’s and my family. But no one knew that Rikki was a mermaid and Falyn is a vampire mermaid and that Kayla is a Fairy.
When Seth and Zooey were eating Zooey asked “Are 당신 guys hiring?” We nodded “Yes. Yes we are. We need a couple 더 많이 waitresses. What to work here?” She shook her head “Yeah and I’ll ask Renesmee, Natalia, Sharon, and the others if they what to.” I jumped up and down “Hay!!!!!!!!!!!”
Falyn’s Pov
I liked Zooey she was very friendly and hyper. I think we’ll be good friends. I realized she was different from Seth, she still had the wet dog smell but she 빙어, 빙 어 like the forest and I 사랑 that smell. I wish I could tell them that I’m a vampire mermaid “Arhhhh I can’t wait to get out of here!” Kayla and I moved here with Jolie after she phased and I 사랑 it here. And I’m not leaving here ever.
Kayla’s Pov
Work is slow. I don’t understand why 3 of us had to come into work for this? I only people here is Zooey and Seth and those stupid teenage boys from school. Losers are always here and try to persuade us with his apparently ‘sexy and hot’ personally. Yeah whatever and the thing that serious sucks is that I’m their waitress hay! I want to kill myself. I took a deep breath “I’ll be back guys.” I walked to the boys 표, 테이블 “Is there anything else I can get 당신 boys?” The brown haired one I think he’s name is Zach I don’t know smirked “Yeah I want 당신 in my bed.” I rolled my eyes “Yeah in your dreams loser.” Then I walked off as he called “Baby come back!” “That boy doesn’t know what I can do to him.” I thought as I sat back down with everyone.

Rikki’s Pov
“Zane!” I screamed as he walked in and jumped on him. I 사랑 him so much. He wrapped his arms around my waist and crushed his lips to mine “Hey beautiful.” He smiled. “I can’t wait to go to the carnival!” I squealed. He laughed “Me too how much longer until 당신 get off?” I checked my phone “20 minutes.” He nodded and saw Seth and Zooey “Oh 저기요 Seth I haven’t seen 당신 in a month. It’s good to see 당신 bro.” They did their hand shake hug thing and Seth introduced Zooey “Zane this is Zooey Call Embry’s little sister and my girlfriend. Zooey this is Zane Bennett Rikki’s boyfriend. They go to Forks High School.” Zooey shook Zane’s hand “Nice to me you.”
Zooey’s Pov
Seth and Zane were talking about boy stuff so I went to talk to Falyn, Kayla, Jolie, and Rikki “So what’s up?” They didn’t answer, they were looking at something behind me “Guys?” Then a boy with blonde hair taps on my shoulder “Hey there beautiful 당신 knew in town?” I nodded “Yeah I came here from California to be with my family.” He was different. He 빙어, 빙 어 like a sweet sticky smell and it hurt my nose. He began to twist he’s fingers in my hair making me afraid “So Zooey do 당신 want to get out of here?” My 심장 stopped he knew my name. His cold wet hand grabbed my wrist “Let’s go.” I growled pushing him away “No leave me alone.”
He pushed me against the 벽 stabbing his nails in my side and my leg “Now listen Zooey. If 당신 don’t come with me I will kill everyone 당신 사랑 starting with your mutt.” I gasped “What do 당신 want from me?” He smiled tracing his fingers over my body “I just want 당신 to be mine and I’ll get what I want. One way 또는 the other.” He bent down to 키스 me as Seth and Zane pulled him off me. Rikki, Jolie, Kayla, Zane, and Falyn circled him as he laughed “You think 당신 all can take me? I’m too strong for you. Hand over the girl 또는 I’ll kill everyone she loves.” He left and so did his friends. Seth bent down to me holding my face in his hands “Zooey? Zooey are 당신 ok?” I moved my hand to my bloody side “Take me to Carlisle.” He nodded and picked me up “Come one guys close up early.” Zane drove as the others tried to cover up my wounds.
I'm back with the new story line, hope 당신 like it

Bella's Pov

Introduction

4 years have past since I found out that I was a half witch, half vampire. That 년 was so busy and hectic. Me giving birth to Mason, the volturi showing up to kill him, seeing Daniel and Leann again, than those strong witches who came after me and then the worsted thing of that 년 were the vampire hunters.
I still having a hard time remembering what happened to those hunters, I know I killed some hunters but still my memory is blank on some points.
The best thing that happened that 년 was Edward and me going to Isle...
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posted by just_bella
I swore that I wasn't going to write this story for a few days, but it's like an addiction. I 사랑 글쓰기 all of my stories, but this one is SO much fun!! Enjoy!!
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Refresher-

"Emmett, you're alright. Nothing will hurt 당신 anymore." The doctor said as he touched my hand.

I had so many 질문 I wanted to ask. I tried to hold my mouth shut, but once again my mouth opened. I squeezed my eyes shut and braced myself for the screaming.

Nothing happened, I wasn't screaming. I opened my eyes quickly and looked around at everyone, the suprise obviously...
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hey i'm back, lucky my writers block is gone now. i had a hole 일 to think what i was going to write, so i hope 당신 still like it. It's a long one because i'm trying to end it at 기사 50 so i can jump ahead in time and start with a new kind of 제목 part 1.

Bella's pov

A new 일 started after me and Edward saw the sunrise. We were running back to our home, when Edward stopped in the middle of the forest.
“What is it” I said concerned
“Jake is heading our way, we should wait here” he said back to me
“Why is Jake looking for us” I asked him curious
“Alice want us to get Mason, he’s...
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posted by Brown_x_Eyes
Edward: Happy Birthday, Bella.

Bella: Screw my birthday, I don’t wanna grow up!

Edward: You’re like Peter Pan, except you’re a girl!

Bella: About that…

Edward: What?

Bella: Nothing.

Edward: Let’s go to my place.

Bella: Giving in? The perfect present…

Edward: Hell no! 당신 think I’m weak?! WELL I’LL SHOW 당신 WEAK! –Bends down to Bella’s neck-

Bella: Edward, wait for Victoria to kill me. She has 더 많이 practice.

Edward: Let’s go inside!

Alice: Surprise! Big huge party to be celebrated 의해 only 8 people! WOO!

Bella: I totally didn’t see this coming…

Esme: I baked 당신 this wonderful cake!...
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it's not a really big one, but i guess you'll all been waiting for this one :D Enjoy and again sorry for mistakes :-)

Bella's pov

The days past 의해 very slowly, the only thing I was aloud to do was, eat, sleep and rest. I just hate staying in 침대 all the time but Edward and the other family members kept a close eye one me, not because I was dangerous but because of the size of my stomach. I was about 3 weeks and I looked like someone who was 8 또는 9 months pregnant.
When I ate I still had these outburst, so I only ate once a day. But I didn’t care about that because the baby was big already and...
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posted by foreveryours
Chapter 3:

I paused in a small bakery and stomped my feet in an attempt to stimulate the circulation of blood through to my 겨울왕국 toes. I headed toward the counter and ordered a French baguette, which I always did before going over to Martin’s for 공식 만찬, 저녁 식사 because his mother loved them so much. As I waited for the overly tanned baker to finish wrapping up my baguette, I stared out of the window. February in Seattle was one of the dreariest months of the year, especially when it was raining. As if the heavens were listening to my thoughts, a few drops clattered onto the sidewalk. Wonderful....
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posted by ktbminnie12
Bella’s POV

Was I seeing this right? I wiped my eyes to see if I was seeing things correctly. Yep. Sure was. This was the last person I would expect to come save me.
    “Bella. Bella Swan?” he asked in the voice I remembered from the lat time I saw him.
    “Aro? What are 당신 doing here?” I asked.
    Aro shot down the stairs in a second. He crouched in front of me.
    “I came here because our dear friend Lorenzo has broken the rules,” he said.
    “What did he do?” I asked.
    “He...
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posted by BuffyFaithFan1
BLOOD LUST. . . . . .By: BuffyFaithfan1
"""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""Chapter Eight: When The Stars Go Blue...""""

There is this lyric from a song 의해 Haley James Scott called DANCING WHEN THE STARS GO BLUE. Its a cover for the song 의해 Tim McGraw WHEN THE STARS GO BLUE. The lyric is: "...Where do 당신 go when youre lonely?..." And it got me thinking. . . .Where DO 당신 go when your lonely? Like where does the lonelyness go? Does it just vanish into thin air? Disappear into the darkness of the past? Fly off into its cave like hole, waiting to affet some body else? 또는 does...
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posted by Alice_President
Okay, I have never done anything like this before, so please do not laugh, but constructive criticism is welcome. Thanks <3

This is my version of Bella's cliff diving experience in New Moon:

Plummeting through the air at a million miles an hour. I was soaring, cutting my path through the low hanging clouds. I was on 상단, 맨 위로 of the world, I was queen. I could see nothing but blue. Suddenly, the air was gone. I was covered in liquid, submerged in a pool of terror. I would have swum to the surface, I could see it, but my legs were failing me. I was going to die if I just stayed here, frozen. I started...
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No one is staring at you, I promised myself. No one is staring at you. No one is
staring at you.
But, because I couldn’t lie convincingly even to myself, I had to check.
As I sat waiting for one of the three traffic lights in town to turn green, I peeked
to the right—in her minivan, Mrs. Weber had turned her whole torso in my
direction. Her eyes bored into mine, and I flinched back, wondering why she
didn’t drop her gaze 또는 look ashamed. It was still considered rude to stare at
people, wasn’t it? Didn’t that apply to me anymore?
Then I remembered that these windows were so darkly tinted that...
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Every shade of green – jade, olive, 에메랄드 – looked dull. The trees held no interest for me. I expected, as I let my vampire senses took over me, that everything around me would burst in color, would awe me as they once did. I could see every spectrum of light, every tiny grain of soil and sand under my feet, I could hear every sound –the frantic 심장 beats of the small 동물 cowering in fear, the slithering of the insects beneath the ground, the muffled cries of the birds as they flew away, the gentle whoosh of the breeze – I once found beauty in all these. Today, I found none....
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posted by twilight-7
It was very quiet. I didn’t want to be the first to break the silence that enveloped us. 의해 us I meant Alice, Jasper and me. Jasper was driving somewhere. They hadn’t told me. I was particularly worried; I knew I could trust them. Also because Jasper was working his magic on me so it was hard to feel worried. So I was left with my thoughts to keep my company. It was hard being away from Edward. I had spent so much of my time with him that it felt wrong that he wasn’t 의해 my side. My 심장 felt like it had been ripped into tiny pieces and scattered across America. It would take a lot of...
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"Bella, I"... I didn't know what to say. In that moment, my no longer beating 심장 was torn in two. It was like she tore it from my chest, stuck it in her mouth, chewed it up and spit it out on my feet. I couldn't believe she chose that dog over me. But it was her decision. I looked down, I knew this was coming, I could see it in her eyes.
"Bella, if that's what 당신 want, I'll leave now."
"Of course it's what I want, 당신 left, I tried to deal with it, but now I realize that Jake is the one that I want."
"Yeah bloodsucker, I was always better for her."
I turned and started walking, but I just...
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posted by dinosteph
저기요 guys. I just wanted to let everyone know that I really enjoy that 당신 guys enjoy the story this far. I'm also wondering if 당신 think it's going a little slow. I tend to explain things a lot, when it comes to scenes and other characters. I'm trying to include everyone in the family, so you're not wondering where everyone is.





I watched him, laying beside me, not moving. It had been a little over an 시간 and I couldn't ignore the noises coming from my stomach anymore.

“Edward?” I whispered, tapping his arm lightly, unsure if I should bother him 또는 not. I watched as he closed his eyes, lines...
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posted by twilight0girl
a hunt to remenber
today, the sun was shing bright,so today were staying 집 to hunt.it was just a normal day.at least thats what i thought.just as i was just about to pounce on a mountain lion,i heard a screech of pain and terror."edward!"i called."what!whats wrong!"he shouted"did 당신 hear that,someone's screaming."his expresion changed from concern to concentration."edward,edward"i said"shhh,im concentrating."on what?"i hear it now,"he said "im going to check it out."what!why does edward get to check every thing out?!"no!i'll do it."i blurted."o.k if 당신 say so."i started running to the...
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This is my first Twilight 팬 fiction. I started 글쓰기 it a bit after I read Eclipse. So it's set after that, and does not mesh with Breaking Dawn. Anyway, I got the idea while listening to the song Unchained Melody, hence the title, and started 글쓰기 it. I'm looking for a beta reader, btw! Feedback is much appreciated.


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Unchained Melody

“Cold feet?” I heard his voice whisper into my ear. I would have jumped 또는 screamed if it wasn’t for the fact I seem to be in a catatonic state. I knew it was Jacob’s voice, but I couldn’t see him. Even if he were to walk up in front of my wide...
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posted by Twilight597
Chapter Two-The Party

    Charlie and I ate at the lodge than we left to Edward’s house. Edward was waiting on the porch. Charlie left and Edward and I went inside. The inside of the Cullen’s house looked like a dance club, but so much better. Alice must have gone way overboard again. It was almost eight o’clock, so guest should be joining us soon.
    Jess, Angela, Mike, Ben, Lauren, and Eric were the first to come. I found out I barely knew anybody here.
    “The mutt is still not here, but I cant see anything” Alice said...
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posted by twilight-7
Chapter 13 Guys, I wrote as fast as I could.

Jacob’s eyes refused to open. My eyes filled with moisture and tears rolled down my cheeks. I had probably killed him. I had my mind focused on his so I would be able to hear even the faintest of his thoughts, so that I would know he was ok. I was going to call Charlie but I realised that Jacob didn’t need the police. He needed a doctor. And what doctor could get here in less than three minutes?
I patted myself down, searching for my cell phone. I knew I had it when I left the house today so I must have on me somewhere. I found it in my jean pocket....
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posted by mikaela_isabela
저기요 guys, this is a loooooooong chapter, i had a lot of inspiration...so enjoi!

As we pulled into out drive-way, I was pretty much on the edge of my seat.
We were finally home, and I needed to see Bella. Carlisle could feel my tension.
“Edward, there’s no point going to her now, she’ll be fast asleep. It’s almost 7 in the morning.”
You’ll need to give her sometime, Edward. Let her cool off. Esme, always the logical thinker. But she has had over three months to cool off, and if I don’t see her now, I might just explode.
As soon as the car pulled to a stop, Alice said, “Have fun…”...
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Let me start off 의해 saying that I think Dakota Fanning is a fabulous actress. That being said here are my reason why I don't think she would make the best Jane. Their are a bunch a little problems and one big problem with her playing Jane. The big problem for me is her age. Dakota Fanning was born on Febuary 23 1994. That would put her at 15 years old when she starts filming in March. Thats only 4 years younger the Kristen(Bella) who was born in 1990 and only 2 years younger the Taylor(jacob) who was born in 1992. Jane is ONLY surpost be 12-13 years old and NO WHERE near Bella's age.