True Writers Article: Feay: Wings of Flaming Hope Ch.3

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posted by Blitz359

Garren woke up to the faint smell of 음식 and yelling coming from downstairs. The sound of a door slamming rang through the house, and Garren slowly sat up, just in case his joints and wounds still ached. As he got to his feet, he checked how his body was doing. Surprised, nothing hurt, not even his cut.

Climbing downstairs, he found Kayleen sitting at a 표, 테이블 near what looked like a kitchen, fuming mad. Once she noticed Garren, however, she put on a small smile.

"Afternoon, sleepy-head," she greeted. "You know, 당신 snore REALLY loudly. Thought I'd never sleep."

"Sorry." Garren replied. "Nothing I can do about it though. Where's your sister? I heard arguing."

Kayleen blushed. "Sorry 당신 had to hear that. Told her I needed to take 당신 somewhere. She demanded to know where the hell 당신 came from. That sort of thing."

"Well, even I don't know where I came from. What'd 당신 tell her?" "That I had no clue. She didn't want a bum living here. Stormed out. Whatever."

"Sorry." Kayleen shrugged. "Things have never been the same between us after her parents died." Garren looked confused. "HER parents?" "Yeah, they took me in as a child. Never knew who my real parents were."

Garren looked overwhelmed. Why was she telling him all this so easily? Kayleen seemed to read his thoughts. "I feel like I can speak as if I've known 당신 forever. Weird, huh?" Garren gave a slight nod. His stomach grumbled. "Got anything to eat?"

Kayleen almost rolled her eyes. "Didn't get the hint yesterday? We don't have the food." "Then what's that smell?" "Last night's feast."

Kayleen picked up a nearby piece of 빵 and threw him it. "Eat that on the way."

Garren caught the 빵 with ease. "Where are we going?"
"The forest again. There's a test 당신 need to pass." She tossed him a sword in a sheath that she took from a case hidden under some hay. A plaque near the case read In memory of Aiden, our 메리다와 마법의 숲 and foolish brother. A hero.

Garren caught the sword in his other hand. Without thinking, he tied the sword in it's sheath around his waist as if he had done it all his life. It felt balanced with him. "If I fail?"

Kayleen looked at him with something that showed...pity?
"Then I'll have to send back your dead body to your world. I'll explain everything on the way. Let's go."

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SilverWings13 "If I fail?" "Then I'll have to send back your dead body to your world..." Touching, Kayleen. Moar now please!!!!

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Revamp of Vamp Out part 2

posted by Knowitall123

cover of the original Vamp out

part 2

****2 Weeks Ago*****
I woke up thinking how this was just another usual 일
"Sweetie, we need to talk." my mom said seriously while her dragon Vinictus flew around her head
"I didn't do anything wrong, 당신 don't have any proves."
My dad stopped me and put a hand on my shoulder.
"We kn..what proves?" He asked with a serious face.
"Nothing. What did 당신 need me?" I tried to change the subject, Dia who just stopped chasing Emmas dragon looked at me.
"Well..we got a latter this morning.." My mom started.
"And it's an Invitation." My dad continued.
"An Invitation?" I was getting interested in it,...

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Revamp of Vamp Out

posted by Knowitall123

half a 년 이전 my friend wrote a story called Vamp out ,but after receiving some mean 코멘트 she gave up on it and when I asked to do a revamp she agreed.

I have,a pretty much normal life, well not quite as normal as 당신 think.
You see I'm a Vampire. All of 당신 who just started running in panic 당신 can relax. I don't kill people, I'm Vegeterian. I almost never drink blood. When I need to drink blood I drink animal blood. I live in the UK, to be 더 많이 precise in London. Maybe 당신 want to know how I look like. I'm a normal girl, who's a Vampire. I have long curly brown-blond hair and blue eyes...

Inspiration

added by h3rmioneg

Bond--Chapter Two: Mico

posted by -SilverFey-

It's funny. We're so different. Me and Kein. He's so shy. Quiet. Introverted.

But I think I would die if I couldn't talk to people.

Even our mark. He is curious, true. But he's curious in a different way. He just need to know things, then he's fine. He just needs knowledge.

Me? I need to see those things. Be out in those places he reads about. I want to leave. Go somewhere else. See something no one's seen.

I wonder about the other planes. I want to see them. Travel there. Why can't we? The Faeries are clever. And magickal. They could let us.

Sometimes I don't like the Faeries. What they did. They...

I have no idea what to call this. O.O But it's chapter one.

posted by -SilverFey-

Just a few things before the story; one, if there's something 당신 don't like about it, please tell me! I want it to be as good as it can be. ^-^ Just please tell me in a respectful way, please. I would appreciate that. Thank you.
Also, this story will be a little (well, 더 많이 than a little) bloody and violent, and there may be some cussing later on. Just a warning.
That being said, I hope 당신 like it!
_____________________________________________

Gnarled branches. Green leaves grew from them—green leaves spotted with yellows and reds. They rustled dryly, talking of the upcoming season of autumn....

The Brain Game (short story)

posted by alicia386

I ventured out into the forest. My mission is simple. I must find the woman who gives out free wishes. It was a long journey but the mere thought of what is to come kept me going.

The 더 많이 I kept walking, the stranger the path got. The trees became short and pink, the sky turned a light pink, and the 잔디 turned soft as silk. I was near her cave.

"Queen of beauty, luck, and love, show your face to me!" I shouted at the heavens hoping she would come out.

"Who's there?" A whispery voice asked me while I searched for the keeper of the voice.

"It is me, Jason Hills," I said to the sky. "I have come...

Feay: Wings of Flaming Hope Ch.6

posted by Blitz359

The light dimmed, and the first thing Garren notices is the cold, hard ground. Then he notices the howling wind. Then there was the 800 foot drop in front of him....Wait, what?

Garren scrambled back, trying to put as much distance in between him and the cliff edge. Once he was no longer in danger of falling and splattering his guts all over the rocks, he noticed one 더 많이 thing. His wounds no longer hurt.

Garren lifted his shirt. All of the cuts and bruises the gryphon had given him had all magically healed. He wondered if the voice had anything to do with this. As if on cue, said voice began...

2115 chapter 2 - All Innocents

posted by SilverWings13

"Sethus!" William shouted as he neared the double doors of the sky-scraper. Militiamen stood in a line at attention, modified rifles in their hands. They were garbed in the same black uniforms, armor, and helmets as William and his troops. One of them stepped out of line. He wore a red band around his upper arm.

"Sir?" the youth said.

"Command your men to stand down and retreat."

Without arguing 또는 hesitating, Sethus shouted the orders to his men and ran through the double doors. William waited until every man was inside before he followed.

Civilians in business 슈츠 were rushing out the back...

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This is an origional song. Please read,It's a 사랑 song (obviously) called "La-la love" Enjoy!

posted by Imyselfandme

When I see you,I don't know what to say
I think of you,just about everyday
When your around hysterical,it's unpredictable...with me,I try to be serious,buts it's no use...

(Chorus) When I look at you,I turn away,When I hear your name,I try a different way, (fast) Your smile is alluring,and your eyes always occuring on my mind, If I explain I'll go insane,so I'll keep my mind blank,The 천사 are jealous about 당신 from up above,and though 당신 dont know it;you always give me La-la love,yeah,La-la love

When I sing,to me,you play the music,Im intrigued-sing with me,oh oh
When I dance 당신 당신 dance too,In everything I do,To me,Your here,so what Im having fantasies,who cares?

(Chorus)

My 심장 is pounding,No sound surrounds me,exept your velvety voice...I'll say it once again,Your the 음악 in my head,I can't build up to it any other way,Ive already done as much as I may...

(Chorus) LA,la,la,la,la 당신 give me...love

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Kind stranger, I am free (poem)

posted by Problematic129

*So I really don't know where this came from, it just popped in my head. It's a bit sad, but I hope 당신 enjoy. I dedicate this to all kind people and people who are having hard times. Please don't copy, 코멘트 and 팬 would be lovely*
These are tears, tears that I cry
    They leak down my face, from my raining eye
    The pain, how it hurts, oh if it wasn’t so
    My life could be easy, my life could be nice
    But yet I’m still writhing, stuck in the ice
    I feel so cold, as I scream and...

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The Deadly Truth Ch. 11

posted by alicia386

Chapter 11: When It All Comes To An End

Senior Year
This was the most legendary party ever. All of the seniors were invited to meet up at Glynn Academy. They was going to throw the wildest and most illegal party ever and it was all thanks to Jason Rivers, Jena Ross, Joseph Knight, Marco Martinez and Carter Stone. They all were in the D.B.E together 또는 Drive 의해 Enterprises. Sammy Mitchell had chosen Jason who chosen his 프렌즈 to be apart of this business.
This business was to help make the world a better place. If someone has a problem with somebody else, 당신 have to kill that...

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Everything Eden #2: The Final 책 of the Eden Chronicles

posted by dragonsmemory

Welcome all to the 초 issue of Everything Eden, your 출처 for…well, everything Eden. In this issue, we'll be looking at the finall six 책 of the Eden Chronicles. These six volumes tell of love, life, death, and hatred. Let's have a look.

A LITTLE BIT 더 많이 THAN LOVE
As this volume has been discussed many times, it is not necessary to reveal anything here.

RISE OF THE DEMONS
Young Areana grew up sheltered from the battles her parents fought. Now, with the demons rising, new threats will make themselves known.

ROKUJO'S REVOLUTION
This book deals with the Failed Revolution. Crown Prince...

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The Deadly Truth Ch. 10

posted by alicia386

One 더 많이 chapter left!

Chapter 10: Do 당신 Swear to Tell the Truth and Nothing But the Truth

Simone stared wide eyed through the bars locking her into the cell. It was the only thing that kept her from snapping everyone's heads off. The guard was gone but replaced 의해 another man. He was tall, muscular, and had the most unscrupulous grin on his face. It made Simone feel extremely uncomfortable. He had jet black hair and light green eyes. His eyes were sincere at time when he looked at her, but other times he made the hairs on the back of Simone's neck stand up. She didn't like this guy...

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Inspired:Embracing hope

posted by Problematic129

Part 10!!! I'm so sorry for the delay, but I had school, I'm now in high school! Freshman! So it was really time consuming, but I couldn't let 당신 down, I own nothing, all these pictures are not mine. There here fro the main purpose to inspire 당신 and put that smile right back on your face. Renew your faith, laugh at the sky, smile forever, and never cry. I believe in 당신 guys, I 사랑 당신 guys, 당신 are awesome, beautiful, amazing, cool, and you. And I don't need a picture of 당신 to know that, don't let them take 당신 down. In the end be the one standing and never lose hope. I won nothing. Enjoy!

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Awkward Situation #3563

posted by alicia386

(i thought this would be a very interesting teenage short story to tell. FYI i completely made this up on the spot. i have a very creative mind)

It was that perfect moment. My boyfriend, Liam, and I were just causually on the 침상, 소파 watching another episode of America's 다음 상단, 맨 위로 Model. I was watching it for the fashion and he was watching it for the girls although he would never admit it. We were just sitting their having fun and sometimes makeouting but 당신 dont need all the details.

His tan arm was around me and i was laying my head on his chest. I thought nothing could possible ruin this moment...

Change 또는 be Changed: chapter 3-4

posted by IlovePatch97

im gonna be away so here is 2 chapters for you. please comment, it will make me a better writter. Thank 당신 :D

CHAPTER 3

I woke up to an extremely bright sun in my face and hot sand in my hair. I must not have been in the sun for long because I hadn't burnt yet. I could hear the sound of human laughter but it felt like it was coming from the inside of my head, all I could smell was smoke from a camp fire. I rolled over and pushed myself up off the sand and I looked around, still trying to figure out what happened. All I remembered was the egg, the flash of colour, and feeling I was falling from...

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Absolutely Wicked Ch.11

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
11
    Terry
    “Just tell us!”
    “I already told you! I don’t remember!” Stilere yelled. “All I remember is having this headache and something and then when I was walking this weird feeling and then I opened my eyes…but I know something happened, I just can’t remember!”
    Zaria opened her mouth to say something else but I cut her off. “If she doesn’t remember, she doesn’t remember. Were just gonna have to…jog her memory back, yeah, that’s it.”
    “And...

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My Dreams Are Heard (rock song)

posted by hgfan5602

Sometimes I have this feeling
Right here deep in my heart
A feeling that is steady, pounding against my soul
A feeling that I write but can't complete

Oh, I want my dreams and hopes to be heard
I can't hide my feelings any longer
No one's gonna stop me from doing what I want
They will not be pushed aside

Now I'm done believing what 당신 told me about
I have no trust 또는 faith in 당신 anymore
And it's time for me to follow my dreams
To stand tall and scream out my lungs

Listen to me and the story I will tell.....
I was just sitting 의해 the bedside
Staring at the world outside of my home
And it changed my life,...

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참드 and Dangerous Ch. 4

posted by alicia386

Chapter Four: Do All Teenagers Go Through What I Go Through

Raven Millan was the daughter of the double agent Marcus Millan. He is notorious for sending information to Germany while pretending to be loyal to the U.S. He told Germany all about what was going on in Area 51. Germany learned how to use that information against us and we almost went into a World War 3. Last I heard, he was going to be given the electric chair. My dad was supervising Millan when the government found out about the betrayal. My dad had told me everything because we have this open relationship and he tells me...

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The Story Of A Hero Named Kyle Part 2

posted by GirlzRule312

They all rushed to the hospital. "Kyle." they gasped. Kyle, with his blonde hair, scratches, bruises and broken 본즈 lyed under the white, soft, hospital blanket. The only sound that could be heard was the soft, quite sound of the 심장 monitor beeping. They all went and sat 다음 to his hospital bed. They all tried to hold back the tears. Summer gave in and tears streamed down her cheeks and on to the floor. Tiffany, Angus and Mariah burst into tears as well. James didnt, he didnt like to show emotion, no matter how sad he was. Even though he wasn't crying on the outside, they knew there were...