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this is an original song its called heart-broken please read

posted by hugebleachfan1

just the other 일 i saw 당신 키스 another girl i thought i was seeing things kept on thinking that couldnt be 당신 till i got the call and now i know i was so wrong

[chorus]
baby 당신 got me heart-broken im here lying on the ground crying oh how 당신 got me heart-broken my 심장 is in pieces can someone come and patch it up im layin here with a broken-heart

i havent drank a thing since that 일 everything i see reminds me of the things we used to do i see 당신 with her at the places we use to go i kept my kool but i dont think i can hold it in any longer

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baby 당신 got me heart-broken im here lying on the ground crying oh how 당신 got me heart-broken my 심장 is in pieces can someone come and patch it up im layin here with a broken-heart

i shouldve listen to my girls i shouldve stayed away from 당신 shouldve believed 당신 were a player but i guess i was dumb enough to believe everythin 당신 said to me so now this is goodbye

im gonna forget about my broken 심장 im gonna patch it up and be free from 당신 forever so this is the last time im ever gonna remember 당신 soo goodbye

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hugebleachfan1 thank you so much and i can give you permission to use it just dont take the credit for it and you guys inspired me and thank you soo much again

alicia386 It really is great. Can you make a video of you singing it? I would love to know how it goes.

hugebleachfan1 yeah sure but wen i get a video camer or camera thank you for ur opinion

tsunade360 nice one

hugebleachfan1 thanks for ur opinion

LidiaIsabel really talented, my friend!!

hugebleachfan1 thank you my awesome friend

sasuke106 love it

hugebleachfan1 thanks

NiallHoranReal NICE ONE. FELLOW POTATO

hugebleachfan1 thanks you

Raeneloves1D Cool song! i think i want to write my oun now ...

hugebleachfan1 kool u should dont let anything stop u

iloveprivate Wow. Great song. I'd love to see you sing it!

hugebleachfan1 i am wen i get a video camera and im soo happy im crying

hugebleachfan1 awh thanks i worked hard on it

hgfan5602 Great song...

kitty190123 I love your song! However, I think you may want to add a few more verses. Otherwise, it is awesome. Please post video!

hugebleachfan1 thanks i worked hard on it and i wen i get a video camera ill post a video of me singin it but i cant figure out wat the beat is

Sinna_Hime_chan Sad. T.T It is a very bad feeling to have, real or not, it can break our hearts, and I relate too.

hugebleachfan1 wat happened sinna wats wrong

1999jacko that is an amazing song and it even relates to what happened with me and some girl a few months ago kind of

hugebleachfan1 oh oh anywasy thanks for liking it i aprreciate all your kind words

Imyselfandme I loved ur song,and was inspired by you too...thx!

hugebleachfan1 aw thanks and good to know:)its sort fo how i feel atm

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posted by IlovePatch97

Thank 당신 the people 읽기 my work, it is encouraging to have 당신 read + comment. ;)

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Death Tells No Lies Chapter One

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posted by hgfan5602

This song that I wrote is dedicated to the Hunger Games.
------------------------------------------------------------------

I can't believe it
We were just in battle fighting for our lives
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But I guess we came out alive and that's all that matters

It was a cold night
We were keeping our eyes open
For a sign of any fallen warrior
Our eyelids were dropping, but we stayed awake through it all

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Wanting teenagers to fight each other to their death
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Life

posted by Annabeth788594

A time comes along when 당신 질문
- Your actions
OR
- Choices

A time comes along when 당신 lose

- Faith
OR
- An loved one

A time comes along when 당신 feel

- Betrayed
OR
- loved

A time comes along when 당신 have to face

-The Truth
OR
- The lies 당신 made

A time comes along when 당신 make

- A difference
OR
- stand up for what's right

A time comes when 당신 must

-Act
또는
-Be herd

A time comes along when 당신 realize

- how much 당신 have
OR
-how lucky 당신 are

These are some of the ups and downs of life
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posted by malmcd

HATRED

I am one of the Seven Deadly Sins,
And 당신 know what I am capable of.
For I am a human instinct,
And yet a daemon from the Pit,
And 당신 must beware of me,
For I can kill 당신 in the end.

I am the reason
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For I am the reason 당신 cannot forgive him,
And I am also the reason why 당신 murdered
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I am the reason
That Jacob and Esau fought so
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Fantasy

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Also thanks for fanning and commenting on my other one. Really appreciated :)
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Very moving

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*Genre: Fiction, humor, romance, :)*
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    The 일 after
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Nightfire

posted by dragonsmemory

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NIGHTFIRE

Winge beating,
Lungs heaving,
Black shadow
Torn from the sky.

Eyes glancing,
Alert and fierce.
불, 화재 dancing.

Wheeling,
Circling,
Nightmare
Incarnate.

불, 화재 dark as night,
Scales bright as gems.
Gleaming eyes,
Searching for a feast.

Wings furled.
Claws extended.
Dives down.
Death claims
Another victim.
Glides up.
Feasting begins.

The dragon flies off.
It is gone,
And the
Nightmare
Is done.

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posted by Problematic129

*Thanks for all the 팬 and 코멘트 :) Please read and review and please don't copy*
Chapter 16
        Remembering is hard for the soul
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Girl code:The Pamela Jones Way

posted by Problematic129

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posted by alicia386

Chapter Eight

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Can't Change Me (song)

posted by hgfan5602

당신 can't change me
I'm so being myself
I am not anyone else
Besides me

I'm standing here
Look how much I've changed
I'm so stubborn
Never being someone else

Look at the sky
Look how the world has changed
Look how the people chatter about
Can't change me

Everyone's changed
Everything but me has changed
And the world still rotates everyday
No one's gonna make me

I'm a rockstar
I'm so powerful
I'm staying myself
No one's gonna replace me

The world has changed
But I'm not going to change
I'm just as great as I am
Right now