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Here's chapter two! It's a little different, I liked how it was turning out... but then the ending was a little tricky to plan out. I'm hoping to get Chapter 3 released sometime soon, but I'm trying to focus also on my other fanfiction, so please bare with me :) hope 당신 guys like it!
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Duncan’s POV
I stop in front of an apartment. I look down at my phone and at the most recent text from Bridgette. “Floor 9,” I read.
I gulp and walk towards the apartment door. I see a group of multiple buttons, and press the one marked “9.” I wait to hear her voice, oddly enough... I haven’t stopped thinking about her since we met this afternoon.
I’m not going to lie, I actually kinda want to make an impression on this girl... luckily, I have Bridgette’s help. With everything that’s been going on with Gwen, I need a distraction.
Apparently Gwen’s been under the radar from everyone, she’s been gone for a few weeks now, but hell, she’s none of my concern anymore.
“Who is it?” The voice says from the speaker.
I smile when I hear it. “It’s me princess,” I speak. “Care to open up?”
The red-headed hottie walks down the stairs from inside, she opens up the door of the building. Her hair is down, and she’s wearing a short, almost slutty, black dress with heeled-sandals.
I look at her, almost baffled with how amazing she looks. “Wow... 당신 clean up good!” I exclaim.
She shoves her 지갑 towards my chest and hisses, “Let’s just get this over with.”
I smirk, “Fine... follow me.”
“Where are 당신 taking me?” She asks; her eyebrows rose.
I chuckle, “You’ll see.” Then I turn back to her, “Do 당신 not trust me?”
She laughs, “Of course I don’t. 당신 are Duncan, after all.”
I face her, “You’re just going to have to wait.” I grab her hand and pull her to my vehicle. She rolls her eyes at me.
I begin driving with her in the passenger seat.
“So, 당신 live in an apartment... 당신 teach swimming lessons... anything else I need to know about you?” I question.
Steph chuckles, “My life is of no concern to you.”
I chuckle in response, “You also are a bitch.”
“Rude much?”
“Just stating what’s true...” I protest.
She glares at me again.
“I hope 당신 like Italian,” I add.
“Italian?”
I nod.
Steph smiles, “I 사랑 Italian food.”
“That’s one thing we have in common then, I 사랑 Italian too.”
We pull up to a restaurant. Steph opens the door the vehicle and walks out.
“Oh my god...!” She exclaims. She looks at the building of the fancy, expensive, Italian place. “Duncan...”She turns towards me. “You do realize that this is our first date.”
I smile. I knew this would impress her. I glance towards her, “So now this is a date?”
Steph turns from me almost instantly, “It’s a night out... together, as FRIENDS. Besides, expensive restaurants are cliché and tacky.”
“You know... we could make this 더 많이 fun than just sitting there and talking...” I propose.
She raises an eyebrow and edges her face closer to mine, “How do 당신 figure?”
“We could simply... “borrow” some food.”
Her eyebrow rises higher, “You want me... to steal some expensive Italian food?”
I nod. “Unless you’re too scared you’ll get caught,”
“Our relationship may be like 당신 and Courtney, but I’m not a wimp like she is.” Steph responded. “I’ve been stealing things since I was seven. I’m in!”
I grin, “That’s the spirit!” I grab her hand and pull her around the building, to the back door. “The easiest way to get into the 부엌, 주방 is through this door...”
“Then what’s the problem?” She asks.
“The fact that we can’t get in without being an employee,” I answer. “We need an apron, 또는 a chef hat, 또는 a uniform...”
Steph laughs at me, “Easy enough. Sit back, relax, and let me take care of things.”
I raise an eyebrow, she looks at me. “Do 당신 happen to have a scarf in your car?”
I run to my car and open the door; I pull out a blue and white striped scarf. I run back to her and toss it.
She wraps it around her neck and I notice something... her dress is all dirty. When did that happen?
“Your dress...?” I begin to question.
“I need it to look like shit for this,” She answers. “Go! Hide!” She calls to me.
I wander out of sight and hide behind a truck in the staff parking lot. I make sure to give myself enough room to watch whatever Stephanie has planned. Who knows what she’s planning? But whatever it is... it seems interesting.
She sits down on the ground in front of the door; she dramatically knocks... the door opens to reveal a worker from the restaurant. “May I help you?” He asks. He wears an apron, a hairnet and is holding a spatula.
She looks at him, batting her eyelashes. “Oh PLEASE sir!” She begs. “You must help me... I haven’t eaten in days... I have no money for 음식 또는 clothes 또는 anything of the sort. I’m starving. 당신 don’t know what it’s like! Not eating for days... and days on end... it’s tragic, really. I 로스트 my home, I 로스트 my family, I 로스트 my friends, I 로스트 everything... I may lose myself! I’m on the verge of death...”
I raise an eyebrow and give a look; she’s really good at this, like, REALLY good!
She grasps the man’s uniform, “If you... could even bring me even a bit of food, I don’t even care if it’s from the garbage.” She pulls the man’s lips towards hers, “I’d make it worth your while...”
“Um... I’ll be right back...” The man says.
I wander up to Stephanie. “Holy shit! Where did 당신 learn to act like that?”
Steph turns her head towards me, “I took a few drama classes in my high school years.” She gestures to behind the building, “Do 당신 know if 당신 have a 칼, 나이프 in your car?”
I hold up a hand, “Wait... 당신 want us to steal 음식 from these guys, AND threaten them?!”
Steph walks towards me and puts a finger on my chin, “Duncan...” She says, her voice in a seductive... deadly whisper, she pulls my face closer to hers. “I thought someone like 당신 would enjoy a little fun in this crime...”
I glance into her eyes, almost as if I’m staring into the eyes of a snake. I don’t know what she’s thinking... earlier, it seemed as if she wanted nothing to do with me... but now, she’s 연기 all seductive and sexy... I don’t understand what’s going on with her.
She drops my head, “But... I suppose I was wrong.”
I stare at her again, she really is something... I might actually have a shot with her. I reach into my pocket and pull out my pocket knife.
“Perfect,” She grins as she snatches the blade from my possession.
The door opens and Stephanie stands there, the man from earlier holds a cookie in his hand and holds it out to her, I hide behind the truck again.
“That’s it...?” Steph 질문 the man, “That’s all 당신 can give a girl like me?” She hides the 칼, 나이프 behind her back.
He nods, “I apologize...” His eyes then get hopeful, “Will I still get it “worth my while?”
Steph chuckles, “I just need 당신 to do, one more... simple thing...” She whispers seductively.
Damn, I don’t blame that man for finding Steph hot... she’s incredible...
The man nods weakly, “Anything...”
Steph smirks devilishly, “I’m gonna need 당신 to remove your 앞치마 for me...” She pulls out her 칼, 나이프 from behind her back, “Or I kill you...”
The man’s eyes widen, “You wouldn’t, and 당신 couldn’t!”
I walk out into view from behind the truck, “Wanna bet?” I smirk at Steph. “Nice job Steph,”
She grins, “Take your 앞치마 off, 또는 당신 can guarantee certain death...”
The man nervously gives us the apron... “I’ll call the cops,”
Steph laughs a low, hollow laugh. She mutters to the man, “If the cops EVER find out about this... you’ll be the first person I’ll find,” She breaths in the man’s ear, causing him to go stiff and stay silent.
Steph tosses the 앞치마 towards me, “You put it on... I’ll go with the simple stealth approach.”
I nod and put on the apron, we open the door to the 부엌, 주방 and I walk inside, Stephanie following behind me 의해 crawling.
The 부엌, 주방 is filled with voices; chefs are working at preparing different things, while waiters enter in and out to bring the 음식 to the customers. I glance down at Steph, who is silently giggling.
A man points to me and Steph nervously hides behind my legs. “You!” He calls. “Two lasagnas, 표, 테이블 4.”
He walks away and continues preparing. I look down at Steph, “You up for lasagna?” I whisper.
She nods her head, “Wait till its done being prepared, and then pass it to me.”
I nod back. I wait until the lasagna is done being served onto the plates; I pass both plates to Steph.
“Now... RUN!” I say.
She slides out from under the table, causing a few of the chefs to notice us. “Let’s go! Let’s go!” She hollers to me.
We run outside, clutching the lasagna-plates. I take off the 앞치마 and toss it back at the terrified man, who luckily, was still outside. We hear screams and shouts.
“THIEVES! THIEVES!” One chef calls at the 상단, 맨 위로 of his lungs.
Steph laughs and laughs and clutches my hand as we pull each other. We run around the building and into my vehicle, we hop inside and I drive away as fast as I could.
Stephanie looks at me with a huge grin; she is laughing almost hysterically, “That was too fun! WAY too fun!”
That... is the moment I realize... I wouldn’t mind a 초 날짜 with this girl.
Courtney's POV: It's finally Summer!!! NO 더 많이 SCHOOL!!! School is an ass, I'm glad it's finally over. And I'm a senior, so I'm FREE!!! I'm finally free to go to college and live my life.

It's been clear for a while now that Duncan and I have a slight thing for each other but we're not getting serious 또는 anything. I care for him, he cares for me, and that's it. The only thing I don't like about him?

His smoking habit.

Yes, he smokes cigarettes, and I worry a lot for him. I asked him recently if he knew what cigarettes to do him and he said yes and who cares? I'm like WTF! I surely don't want to...
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HEATHER'S POV: Uh, another BORING 일 of school. I walked to the main door with my BFF, the dumb, pretty blonde, Lindsay. "Who is that?!" she asked me, "How the hell am i meant 2 know? Go and ask HER!"
COURTNEY'S POV: I cant believe how scary this school is. I, i know im the "new" girl and everything but..."Who are u?" a blonde came running ova 2 me, shouting. "Im courtney," i introduced myself "the new girl", "ok, bye" she ran off.
HEATHER'S POV: "She's Courtney, a TOTALLY new girl" lindsay said
TBC...
posted by rose35
Dear diary,
I wouldn't say today was the strangest day, except for Courtney threatening to sew me because she "thinks" Duncan likes me which I really do think isn't true. My parents decided to drop the charges for the little "problem" that happened at the movies. But anyway we should enjoy our little 일 out with out any disturbances, hopefully.


~Episode two~
Today was pretty fun, I got to hang out with my 프렌즈 but I am exhausted! I am ready to go home, I kinda miss my parents.
Lindsay: That was fun we should do this 더 많이 often!
Noah: We DO do this very often.
Lindsay: Oh.* turns around and...
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posted by potterandtdi
Duncan

I gazed into Miranda's beautiful green eyes. "Where's this going?" she asked me."Nowhere.Unless 당신 want it to." She playfully slaps my arm. It actually hurt. But at least it was HER kind of hurt. She gripped my hand tighter, not to hard, not too soft. "OK, I'll go out with you." She said. When we reach my house, I opened the door for her and we stepped inside for dinner.

Miranda

I walked into the warm house. I could see Duncan was still holding my hand. When I looked in the kitchen, I could see Duncan's parents looking at us, whispering. I walked into the 부엌, 주방 as Duncan's dad walked...
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*IN THE CROC'S CHAMBER* phil:ok, it seem's we gotta jump over that pit,swing on the vine over the other huge pit,and finally pull that switch to reveal the treasure. alex:okay,so are 당신 gonna do it,man? phil:yeah. *ON THE SQUIRRLES SIDE* violet:ok,so apperantly i have to lower myself into that hole,get the chest,and hope to god the pirahnans dont chew off my leg.get me some rope. *JACKI BRINGS ROPE* violet:thanks.*TIES IT AROUND WAIST,GIVES OTHER END TO JACKI,LOWERS HERSELF INTO HOLE,GETS CHEST AND.....* *MEANWHILE* *PHIL PULLS LEVER* *TREASURE CHEST FALLS IN THE MIDDLE OF THE CHAMBER* phil:WOO-HOO!!!...
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posted by amylina123
 raynie looking at gordon
raynie looking at gordon
nelly: well those are all the contestants now u guys will kno the rules

nelly:rule 1 each week 1 of the contestents from the cast will get pampered at their fake wedding with their 작은 잉꼬, 모란 잉 꼬 yep rule 2 every1 gets a part of a wedding thing and the team that wins will get something speical with their 작은 잉꼬, 모란 잉 꼬 rule 3 last of all the thing that u get asigned 2 is going 2 get graded any 질문 first wedding is 4 raynie

raynie:yay i'm the 1 person

nelly:lets throw in a suprise oh gordon


raynie:gordon is here?


nelly:yep

raynie:ehhhhhhhh

gordon:raynie is that u?

raynie:u bet its me
 raynie still looking at gordon
raynie still looking at gordon
Duncan's POV: Halloween? Yea, it's my fave holiday. Why? 'Cause I get to scare the piss out of people. Haha, that's what I'm good at, isn't it?

I'll probably go as myself...

HA! I scare Courtney half to death every 일 !!

Danny's going as a male version of Bloody Mary... maybe I'll go as a ghost...

No, not as the kind with the bitchy lame sheet with two cut holes in it. That's for three 년 olds. I think I'm ready for face paint and fake blood.

Ha, I use that stuff nearly every day, are 당신 kidding?

I flipped my phone open and dialed Tiannah's number.

"'Sup?" Came her voice on the other line.

"Hey,...
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Courtney's POV: Soon we got there, and once I stepped onto flat ground I nearly doubled over.

"You alright?" Duncan chuckled and reached down an arm.

I looked up at him, slipped my hand in his for him to pull me up - but instead I yanked down as hard as I could, sending him to the ground 다음 to me. I stood up, perfectly fine, with him at my feet on the pavement.

"What the hell?" Duncan looked up at me and smiled a bit.

I rolled my eyes and started walking up to the school doors. Duncan got up and brushed himself off, and followed me.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

About half an 시간 later, I sat on a 담홍색, 핑크 콩 bag chair,...
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Courtney's POV: Everyone is always excited about Halloween. Egging people's houses, ding-dong ditching, getting and eating plethoras of 캔디 until 당신 vomit, dressing up in hopes of freaking somebody out. All... but me. 할로윈 means the school talent show, but it also means I have to deal with you-know-who scaring the piss out of me.

I requested a costume online. Well, not exactly requesting, per say. I was looking in an online Kohls catalog, and found a costume and I called in and requested one be put on hold for me. Turns out, it was the last copy of the costume. :)

The costume was basically...
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posted by wetts2
chrissy:ok lets vote some one of the island
ben:i vote for cory because he got the plain on fier
cory:i vote for ben because he said he is going to vote me off
tyra:ben told cory he is going to vote him off i have to do it
dain:hector called me a b****
hector:dain flirted with me i dont like bad girls
luke:ben said im with luke i dont relly know what that means but i think it means hes gay
elly:i vote of ben cuz he is a nerdy boy nerds are smart and might win so im not tacking eny riscks
grace:um ben i gousse nerds stop the party and im not feeling the party whrite know
luis:cory he mesed up the plain...
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kari was polishing her motorcycle when trent ran in her 차고 screaming:HELP!FANGIRLS!
(he hid behind kari)
kari was his girlfriend.
sam laughed 'ARE 당신 HIDING YOUR BOYFRIEND?!
HA!
kari looked pissed 'SUE ME!'
sam was her very cousin.
fangirls:EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!
kari let out her pitbulls 'butch and pudgy'.
the fangirls ran.
but trent's biggest 팬 was still there and recited the poem 'your hair is black my 심장 is blue, I will stuff 당신 with rags and sew 당신 in two!'
kari blocked trent from her
dont make me hurt you!
she cracked her knuckles.
and the girl peed her pants.
trent was parayzled kari...
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Courtney's POV: I awoke the 다음 morning, and I was having the WORST hangover ever. But it was rather odd; I didn't drink last night.

I sat up and pet my hair. My cell phone rang on its night stand, and I flipped it open and answered it. "Hello?"

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!" came Bridgette and Gwen's high-pitched shrieks.

"AHH WHAT THE HELL?" I laughed.

"OMG we know about last night!" Gwen gushed.

"Yea, I went to a party, had soda, and danced and sang. Get over it."

"No, we're talking about Duncan." Bridgette put emphasis on his name. "Ya know, between 당신 and him...."

"What?" I giggled. "All we did was...
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Coutrney's POV: I sat on my 침대 the 다음 morning, brushing my thick brown hair. I had a bad headache from screaming at Duncan and crying like a maniac, but I don't know if I can trust him. I mean, I've hated him since we met, but there was a small sliver of trust, and now there's none.

I tossed the brush across the room and grunted. Stupid Saturdays. Wait, at least I don't have to school with that vampire. Yea, being a vampire and doing a 신고 on them is very smart. Smooth move, Duncan. At least I picked a historical book author.

I laid on my 침대 and played through the list of contacts on my...
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*its about 3 pm at macks house*

*somebody knocks on the door*

Mack: doors open

*harold and owen walk in*

Owen: 저기요 whatcha doing
Mack: playing wrestling on PS3
Harold: sweet whos fighting
Mack: its Matt 모건 vs. Mick foley vs. Suicide
Harold: Sweet can I play
Mack: yeah ok
Owen: I call matt morgan
Harold: Im freakin awesome as foley
Mack: fime I guess I get suicide
Mack: oh and its anything goes
Owen: just great 당신 always win
Mack: yeah
Harold: I remeber 당신 pinned me in like 2 minutes
Mack: yeah

*the video games starts to play*

Announcer: the folloring contest is a no holds barred triple threat mach scheduled...
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Omigod. I probably went to www.totaldramaaction.com ten times to vote for Duncan... ^^ So, please. If 당신 would please do me a favor, would 당신 –if 당신 haven’t already- vote for Duncan...? Please... it would make me so happy if he won!
If 당신 still aren’t convinced, this is my 시 at its special...

“It’s been the whole season...
It’s passed so fast.
But there is a reason...
We should make TDA last.

It’s TDA I love, TDA that I’ll miss.
As long as I can think of...
If 당신 don’t know why I’m saying this
READ THE VERSE ABOVE! ^^

The episodes are all exciting
All twenty-five; agree?
TDA’s...
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posted by KARIxTRENT
kari was snowboarding waiting for everyone else to wake up.
trent:woah gnarly moves.
kari:heheh thanks.
chris had a meghorn:EVERYONE MEET ME IN THE MESS HALL!
kari fell:GAH!
groan
(she rubbbed her head)
in the mess hall:
kari dumped her tray:SOMEDAY BUT NOT TODAY!
trent:you can have my 토스트 kari.
kari smiled at him.
duncan:how can ANYONE eat this slop?!
leshawna:dont know about yall but I aint eating this.
lindsay:me neither.
confessions of kari:
peh todays challange:EATING CHEFS SLOP!
ha!
posted by potterandtdi
Duncan

'Her eyes. It hit me. The girl I was on had the most beautiful eyes I'd ever seen. Now she's holding on to my waist. On my motorcycle.MY motorcycle. Not Geoff's, not Trent's. MINE. I wanted to stare into those eyes. I really do. I hope she feels the same way.' I thought in my head. I peek out of my daydreams and see my house. I park behind my dad's car. I get off my motorcycle. She sits there. She stares beyond my house. To the graveyard nextdoor. "Oh, don't mind that. It's not that spooky." I tell her. I try to get her to focus. She looks like she's possessed. I wonder what's wrong.

Miranda...
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posted by KARIxTRENT
chris:last time on tdd..
sadie got voted off!
rayentte was listening to music.
gordon:hey watcha listin to?
raynette showed him.
gordon:I 사랑 this song!
rayntte:so do I.
(they both smiled and inched closer and kissed)
trent was massing karis shoulders.
confessions of trent:
on a scale of 1 to 10.. the chick is a 20!
smart,cool,hot,pretty and indpendant, I think I am in love..
(he 사랑 sighed)
rayennte and gordon were holding hands.
lindsay:aww...
they are so hooked up!
trent:lindsay they were already hooked up.
lindsay:ohh..
kari:nice rayntte.
(they high fived)
posted by bubblegum05
 Duncan and Courtney in the bar
Duncan and Courtney in the bar
Chapter 1- Crazy Crooked Car

I was in my car when it all started. It was freezing outside, and the sun was down. Something wasn't right. The 트렁크 started shaking 의해 its self. Something had jumped onto the back of my car and was going through the window. In a flash he jumped up at me. "AHHHHHHHHHHHH!" I screamed. "Duncan! 당신 nearly gave me a 심장 attack!" He was laughing so hard his nose piercing looked like it was about to come apart. That would of been funny. "Oh!" He laughed," Did i scare 당신 princess?" I gave him the look i always did when i was mad at him. "No." I sighed, "If 당신 need...
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posted by potterandtdi
I walked down the 거리 with my black 컨버스 clopping on the pavement. I hear a faint bang but ignore it. I hear it again, but a little louder. Someone pushes me off the sidewalk and into a nearby alleyway. I open my eyes and see a handsom man on 상단, 맨 위로 of me. He has a green mohawk topping his jet black hair. His skin was a nice
in-the-middle color, not too pale, not too tan. And his eyes, oh, those 물오리, 청록 blue eyes got me. They were rich and smooth. They had a touch of green, only a faint one. Those eyes were what got me. "I'm sorry I tackled you. I hope it didn't hurt." he said. He reached...
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