nice. it would be funny if annabeth gave percy the evil eye wen his childeren come lol

AWESOME!!!! I LOVE PERCY'S KIDS!!!! Percy and Annabeth should do something special together to show that it's PERCABETH!

i tried to post how good you chapter was last night just after I finished my homework but my mom came down and yelled at me for staying up so late then i told her that i just finished my homework and she got mad that i had 4 hours of homework.

but anyway your cappy was Amazing!!

I like ur chapter and I agree PERCABETH should do something nice like Idk ur wmthe writer and also fix PERCABETH kthxbye
POST SOON!!!!

Dude can kids say there dad/mum is sexy cause that's just wrong

I love the chapter!!!!!!!!!!

Its still there.
Percy and Annabeth just fell for two-three othere people, but there still married.

keep posting! good chap.

Post soon!!!!!

working on chapter now give me an hour and i will post

hope you like it its midnight here so i only had time for a preview

Chapter 16- Samantha pov
When we heard the knock Artemis and Aphrodite quickly hid in the bathroom and took our bags and, in came Jake new Apollo camper and he was a flirter, he always flirts with us and Beauty said “what do you want?” “Chiron wants to see you three, bye” he replied and sent a flying kiss and then went away Mom and Lady Aphrodite came out and, Mom said “if they ask about us just say no okay” she said sweetly. We went to see Chiron and then when we went in we saw all 9 Olympians and out of all of them Apollo and Poseidon looked the worst yet happiest then they Zeus started “have you seen your mothers?” he asked we shook our heads and said “why what happened to them?” we asked and they showed us the letters then Jason said “we thought you might know as you are their favourite daughters” “well se ya and on the letter it says that they don’t want to be found” we said walking out then Poseidon teleported besides us and said “are you the daughters of Percy?” he asked and we said no and went back to our room. When we got back they were both ready to go but then I noticed something behind us and we all looked around and it was Simian the camps worst snake (Authors Note: snake means he always tells of anything he sees bad or good), he always tells everything to Chiron or his best friend, Simian ran off to tell them so mom teleported us to the casino where Percy had said but we were 35 minutes early so we went MacDonald's to eat.

Percy pov

Before going to collect them I was going to go to Annabeth and tell her about my 3 immortal children I had and I know when I’m gonna say Aphrodite and Artemis she is going to kill me but I have got to get something for our 16th anniversary because it is tomorrow and I have got to make our relationship better by promising no more children with anyone else except ourselves and I have been working on this ring that you can put in all your weapons and when you press one of the weapons it goes into your hand also I've made these swords and blessed them with my abilities, I had also made one for me, Nico and Bianca but I hadn’t added weapons in their ones as they would put their own weapons in theirs and theirs are in bracelets not ring like Annabeth's and mine was in a iPad but with some added apps like a tracking device to find Annabeth, Nico, Thalia, Leo, Hazel, Bianca, Isabella, Beauty, Bianca(my daughter), Hestia, Jamie, Lyanne, Bridget, all gods and goddesses on my side and Samantha along with everyone here at this camp I haven’t included, I had put secret tracking devices that I could find them if they got captured also my weapons would go there when I finish with them. So let’s get back to reality when I got to Annabeth to explain I was about to knock when I saw that the door was opened....., she had been attack I got my ipad out and found out it was time for me to meet my daughters so I had to take them on a quest even before taking them to camp, “Great” I thought I picked up the help note and teleported to Bianca and told her to take over me in my absence.

Annabeth pov
Great another plan where I’m the bait, I hate this always me being the bait then in came..........
DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUN

Wow, what is Percy going to say to Annabeth? What is going to happen to Annabeth? Dun,dun,dunnn!

i need atleast 4 more comments from different people and i'll post

i commet too, now you only need three more posts

also YOUR CHAPPY WAS AWESOME!

Post soon!!

I love the chappie!!!
It was really amazing!!

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i'm going gym in a bit so i will try to post if i dont i will post at 8:30
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Chapter 16- Samantha pov

When we heard the knock Artemis and Aphrodite quickly hid in the bathroom and took our bags and, in came Jake new Apollo camper and he was a flirter, he always flirts with us and Beauty said “what do you want?” “Chiron wants to see you three, bye” he replied and sent a flying kiss and then went away Mom and Lady Aphrodite came out and, Mom said “if they ask about us just say no okay” she said sweetly. We went to see Chiron and then when we went in we saw all 9 Olympians and out of all of them Apollo and Poseidon looked the worst yet happiest then they Zeus started “have you seen your mothers?” he asked we shook our heads and said “why what happened to them?” we asked and they showed us the letters then Jason said “we thought you might know as you are their favourite daughters” “well se ya and on the letter it says that they don’t want to be found” we said walking out then Poseidon teleported besides us and said “are you the daughters of Percy?” he asked and we said no and went back to our room. When we got back they were both ready to go but then I noticed something behind us and we all looked around and it was Simian the camps worst snake (Authors Note: snake means he always tells of anything he sees bad or good), he always tells everything to Chiron or his best friend, Simian ran off to tell them so mom teleported us to the casino where Percy had said but we were 35 minutes early so we went MacDonald's to eat.

Percy pov

Before going to collect them I was going to go to Annabeth and tell her about my 3 immortal children I had and I know when I’m gonna say Aphrodite and Artemis she is going to kill me but I have got to get something for our 16th anniversary because it is tomorrow and I have got to make our relationship better by promising no more children with anyone else except ourselves and I have been working on this ring that you can put in all your weapons and when you press one of the weapons it goes into your hand also I've made these swords and blessed them with my abilities, I had also made one for me, Nico and Bianca but I hadn’t added weapons in their ones as they would put their own weapons in theirs and theirs are in bracelets not ring like Annabeth's and mine was in a iPad but with some added apps like a tracking device to find Annabeth, Nico, Thalia, Leo, Hazel, Bianca, Isabella, Beauty, Bianca(my daughter), Hestia, Jamie, Lyanne, Bridget, all gods and goddesses on my side and Samantha along with everyone here at this camp I haven’t included, I had put secret tracking devices that I could find them if they got captured also my weapons would go there when I finish with them. So let’s get back to reality when I got to Annabeth to explain I was about to knock when I saw that the door was opened....., she had been attack I got my ipad out and found out it was time for me to meet my daughters so I had to take them on a quest even before taking them to camp, “Great” I thought I picked up the help note and teleported to Bianca and told her to take over me in my absence.

Annabeth pov

Great another plan where I’m the bait, I hate this always me being the bait then in came Gaia, that dirty little scumbag “we will defeat you and you know that with Percy on our side it like playing with little kids” I said and then I noticed why she captured me, she is going to make a giant for Seaweed Brain matching his abilities then I remembered that Percy can find me with his Find Friend tracker or Find Wise Girl apps which he somehow made and another thing is that it’s our anniversary tomorrow and I haven’t bought him anything yet so I better buy him something or just make something while I'm here.

Poseidon Pov

I already knew that Beauty, Bianca and Samantha were my Granddaughters I could smell Perceus’ on them I miss him and the fact that he told me not to join him because I was 1 of the big three was a good thing because I was about to join and when I told Hades that Bianca still lived he was happy but when I told him that “a God and a Goddess had banish her but Perceus told me not to tell you who it was because you would just think it was Zeus and Me and I think he was right because we always blame each other and you know that’s true Hades” I told him “yeah he is true I have lost all of my children and I'm really angry so if you tell me who it was I would probably start a war that would never end” he replied and went away. I went into Beauty’s thoughts and I told her “hey, it your grandfather Poseidon and I and Hades are the only ones that know where you are as we met Perceus there once he said if we need to meet him go there we won’t tell and your mother and Aphrodite that I said hi” I went out of her thoughts and went away.

Beauty Pov

I was eating my Triple Big Mac and then suddenly I heard Poseidon’s voice he told me that himself and Hades were the only ones that know where we are as they met Perceus here once he also said he said if we need to meet him go there we won’t tell and your mother and Aphrodite that I said hi. When he went out of my thoughts I instantly told them everything and then said “he also said to say hi to you, mom and Lady Artemis” when I said that they got happy and I wondered why, I turned around to see a hot man with sea green eyes and jet black hair with streaks of gold and silver I then found out that it was my Father but I was to slow Samantha and Bianca had already shouted father and ran to hug him and I followed straight after and said “hi dad nice to see you” “good to see you to but I have to ask have you been on a quest yet?” he replied “well no not really we were always thought of like people who don’t like to fight because we are rubbish but Samantha showed all Apollo, Ares, Athena and the strong cabins how to fight and to get a bulls eye 30 times without getting tired” Bianca replied before any of us could say anything then Samantha continued “being children of you we also kicked their asses at swords fighting in less than 10 seconds” she said and he said “I should speak to Chiron, anyway so I'm taking all 5 of you on a quest to save my real wife Annabeth I'm choosing you because I think you might be stronger than my other children and plus I want to see you fight” he said and we went and Percy went to pay and unfortunately it was a girl and she started flirting with him which I thought was disgusting but being god of male beauty he was a magnet and the girl let him go without money and he started walking towards us when...........


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Awesome!

coolio!!

is there gonna be anything with jason and piper? cuz i love those 2!

post!

Post soon awesome story!!!

post soon! that was awesomeness!

Love the chappie!!!!!
And post again soon!!!

awesome! Keep posting!

please post!

omigosh! post! i luv these... there should be jason and piper... I <3 THOSE 2!

yh there are going to be some jason and Piper povs but they will not stay as Jason is Loyal to his father and Piper is loyal to Jason

hello here's a preview for the next chapter

Chapter 17 preview- Artemis Pov

When Percy started walking towards us I suddenly sensed a monster behind us and Percy knew to but said “Artemis let the children fight they have been in training since they were born and as they are my daughters, they will handle it” daughters of Perceus and seeing him fight makes me think, how is he that strong he never actually told us his powers but I knew one and that was Male Beauty because he can’t change like that by becoming a god so we just relaxed and watched them and then I realized what they were fighting....................

i was going to post a full chapter but cant think of any monsters for them to face please send me some monsters that you think would be a challenge for them to face please i cant post until someone gives me some ideas

Unmmmmm uhhhh maybe ummmmm minatour? Nooo
Ummm maybe the crab thing u know that blue crab that's in umm I think the
last olympian or maybe ummmm I don't have a freaking clue

Awesome! Keep posting!

aww! what are they fighting is it a drakon! plz post soon so i can find out!

drakon

i will make them fight typhon's strongest son quater lion, quater cheetah, quater drakon and quater manticore it can run full speed and flies also spits out poision acids/alkali's and is really, really tall his muscles are larger than ares and hercules's put together.

is this a good idea because if its not then i cant post till i come back from the holiday im going to go at 12:00 so post as soon as you can before 2 hours so i can post.

meanwhile 5142 views love everyone that reads this

Post soon plz :)

Nice monster.
Post soon please.

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me too!

I LOVED THE NEW CHAPTERS!!!! Although Annabeth getting kidnapped is soooooo unlikely...

hello im still on holiday i just got to go on the computer after coming back from swimming im sorry im starting to post right now and remember energykid that hera got captured and no one knew that would happen also it is gaia who kidnapped annabeth herself and she got some help from this son of typhon i mentioned earlier i am starting right now i need a name though, for the monster.

i have got the chapter typed up i just need a few coments like 3 or 4 please comment so i can post soon

post it please

As I'm on my blackberry and its half term I will post the chapter now
ENJOY

Chapter 17- Artemis Pov

When Percy started walking towards us I suddenly felt a familiar presence nearby Percy also knew I know this because he was looking scared but also happy then he said “Artemis let them fight I want to see there skills, if they start to lose then I will help them also as they can charm speak they will surely distract it and also they have powers that no one except myself know about which they need to be taught” he said grinning, I knew this also but if anything happened to them I was going to go and fight him and kill that freak, also having seen Perceus fight I know that he is a good fighter and now he is a god he should be a lot better. Although he never told me his powers I knew one thing he was god of and that was male beauty because you don't change into a really, really beautiful god even more beautiful than Aphrodite herself then I looked back and I realised what they were fighting. They were fighting it was Typhon's eldest and strongest son Typhios, they couldn't fight him he can outrun a cheetah and kill all of the titans and it would be really easy for him to kill 3 demigods. “Perceus do you think it's wise to do this” I said “it might be to hard” I explained how he had almost killed all of us for imprisoning his father in the titan war 16 years ago “anything happens I will just finish him off if they get touched and remember they have a powerful gift” he said “and what is that?” I questioned “you've never told us about there gifts” I said. He then started to speak but Typhios started to attack them


Annabeth Pov

I was getting my injury drained out by the second. All my energy had gone and I knew Perceus was on his way to save me. but I had the feeling that he is fighting Typhios, the person who helped Gaia capture me then I heard Gaia was talking to someone then came in here and said “Join me Annabeth we could make an army an be undefeatable” she said, then I replied “lies,lies you just need me on your side to kill Percy and I will never join and he won't either.” She hesitated at Percy's name, it was obvious that she was scared of Percy “you're just scared of Percy and I can see you hesitate every time I say his name you idiot,he will defeat Typhios easily and when he comes here you will be killed not put back to sleep and that nonsense but killed and you will never ever rise again ” I said with anger in my voice yet again she flinched or hesitates when I say his name...............

please keep posting

I will post tomorrow or wednesday. And percabeth is going to be fixed and there is going to be a fuNny scene if the chapters are short I'm sorry it because I'm on my blackberry its really hard to post really long chapters but I will try to make next chapter really long

Kk just be sure to post and get to the PERCABETH parts