Rain Screen

Rain and spirit was alone. Spirit walks up to Rain and says "Rain?"
"Yes" she answers.
"I am..." he clears his through,he was sweating all over.
"I am in 사랑 with..." he pauses.
"Who?" she asks curiously.
"Rose." he says softly.
Rain laughs and says "I am hearing things it sound like 당신 said 당신 where in 사랑 with rose. Now who are 당신 in 사랑 with?" she said.
"Rose." he said.
Rain had tears in her eyes.
"Rain.I..." he said but before he could finish rain runs away without a word. She couldn't even look back. Spirit was still standing where he was. Finally he walks away silently.
He went to sleep.
End of chapter 7.
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They got to the 상단, 맨 위로 of the 언덕, 힐 Rose hide her self in the shadows. "Spirit?" rain asked.
"Yes?" He answered.
"I want 당신 to meet my sister. Come on out sis!" she yelled.
Rose came out of the shadows. Then she stopped in the light. Her main and tail was flowing with the wind. She was beautiful. She had a rose in her main. Spirit walked up to her and said "Hi, I am Spirit."
"I am Rose." she said.
"So,you are Rains sister?" He asked.
"Yes." After awhile. Rose walks away and blushes without him seeing her blush.
"So, do 당신 like my sis?" Rain asked.
"Yes." he said.
End of chapter 4.
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"Rose before 당신 meet spirit,can 당신 tell me about yourself?" Rain asked.
"Yes,well first of all i have no herd.And i am single." Rose said. They both laughed.
"And i have been 의해 myself for 5 years." She added.
They where on the other side of the 언덕, 힐 getting ready. A mountain lion hiding in the bushes,and it was getting ready to pounce.Then it leaped and landed on Rose. She was fighting fiercely. She bucked,kicked,reared,she even did what spirit did, reared and fell on her back.Finally,the mountain lion gave up and ran away. Rose was tired.
"Rose are 당신 ok?" Rain asked.
"Yes just tired." Rose answered.
"Are 당신 ready to meet the one so special in my life?"
"Yes." She said.
They walked up the 언덕, 힐 to meet spirit on the other side.
End of chapter 3.
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Rain was galloping and looking for hours. She ran into many obstacles,like fighting a mountain lion. She had to take a break from looking so she fell asleep. The 다음 morning. Rain woke up and heard hoof beats. She looked around and sees nothing but she still hears it and it was getting louder. Finally she seen what it was. It was another mare! She was cantering gracefully. She stops in front of Rain. She looked like rain but different. She had Rains 코트 but her main and tail was brown. "Is that 당신 Rain?" the mare said.
"Rose?" Rain said.
The both neighed happily.
"Can 당신 come with me and see someone special in my life?" Rain asked.
"Sure." Rose said. They galloped together all the way home,side 의해 side. Finally they got home. "Now Rose i want 당신 to get cleaned up for us,ok?"
"You sound just like mom." Rose said.
"And yes i will." rose walks away and gets ready to meet rains boyfriend.
End of chapter 2.
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