hello people

Remember when i asked for help with lyrics? well i came up with a song and i want your opinion on it please!
Ready? here it is:

My bloods pouring to the ground
And 당신 dont even care.
I look at 당신 pleading
And 당신 just walk away.
당신 ripped out my 심장 and soul
burned them to ash.
Now 당신 say your sorry?
당신 say 당신 want me back?

Get the hell away from me
Youve hurt me
Get out of my life
Youve scarred me
당신 were the best thing in my life
Then 당신 turned and walked away
당신 said 당신 loved me,
And still 당신 walked away

당신 made me hate my life
Made me hate myself.
Youve driven me to all the things
I swore i wouldnt touch.
Im not some punching bag
For 당신 to pound.
Im my own person
Not just someone in the crowd.

Get the hell away from me
Youve hurt me
Get out of my life
Youve scarred me
당신 were the best thing in my life
Then 당신 turned and walked away
당신 said 당신 loved me,
And still 당신 walked away

Im not afraid 또는 당신 anymore.
Im gonna make my stand
Stick up for myself.
Im gonna make my stand
당신 cant hurt me anymore.

Get the hell away from me
Youve hurt me
Get out of my life
Youve scarred me
당신 were the best thing in my life
Then 당신 turned and walked away
당신 said 당신 loved me,
And still 당신 walked away

당신 Said 당신 loved me,
And still 당신 walked away