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poem i wrote:)
it sucks but oh well..ill take constructive criticism. plzz rate it between 1-10
here it goes:
shooting star( the title)
i look up at the sky at night
even when its dark its bright
and if i where to crinqe in fright
i know 당신 would hold me, tonight
your kinda like my shooting star
your not near but your not far
i wait for 당신 일 and night
i want 당신 to say its allright
당신 are there
당신 arent far
당신 are my
shooting star
mm. i hope thats how it went. well..im not really into 시 and thts my first poem ever!
here it goes:
shooting star( the title)
i look up at the sky at night
even when its dark its bright
and if i where to crinqe in fright
i know 당신 would hold me, tonight
your kinda like my shooting star
your not near but your not far
i wait for 당신 일 and night
i want 당신 to say its allright
당신 are there
당신 arent far
당신 are my
shooting star
mm. i hope thats how it went. well..im not really into 시 and thts my first poem ever!
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