I Know it Sucks Dx but What Do 당신 Think?

Of these lyrics I wrote, obviously they aren't done yet but I just want to know if it's still good. I think it sucks because I cannot write lyrics for my life.

"It's time to face the destiny. just stand in time, release the flames. Every 일 당신 just see the sights,


Chorus

Stand tall, stand now and see what we're fighting for. Die now, die trying. We all just live in big shame, incomplete history. Listen to those who care."



 16falloutboy posted over a year ago
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BlondLionEzel said:
Nice :)
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THank 당신 :)
16falloutboy posted over a year ago
sieluvzsoul said:
Very good
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thanks! :)
16falloutboy posted over a year ago
pokemonfan909 said:
Its nice. Why do 당신 think it sucks?
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Because I never wrote a song before and I know I suck at it
16falloutboy posted over a year ago
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당신 don't....
pokemonfan909 posted over a year ago
misscrazel said:
It's great, if 당신 want any tips on songwriting message me. ^-^
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Alright will do ^^
16falloutboy posted over a year ago
True-Finn-Fan said:
i can dig it... 당신 know what's so weird? i wrote a song earlier today for a completely different reason and was just thinking "somebodies gonna post something and show me up" XD

coincidences.
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*somebody's
True-Finn-Fan posted over a year ago
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I want to hear your song! ^-^
misscrazel posted over a year ago
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^ :)
True-Finn-Fan posted over a year ago
x-Yumi-x3 said:
Sounds like bvb.
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really??
16falloutboy posted over a year ago
luv_warriorcatz said:
it sounds kinda preachy though idc much for lyrics anyways, i just listen for the actual song
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