My song-writing "lyrics" ..please read and tell me what u think!

Steady steps and fast heartbeats
look around, there's nothing but empty seats
trying to hold on , to stand on my feet

it's getting dark, closer to the edge
broken hearts, on a broken bridge
where we are, is closer to the end

Chorus
they're all gone, everything's gone
everything is closer to goodbye
bullets in there, blood everywhere
everything is closer to goodbye
Wishing this whole thing ends tonight

New hope, with every prayer
From the ones who really care
to someone's fighting somewhere

The World Will BE Better Than Before
When We Create 사랑 Not War
When We Realize What We're Fighting For


Chorus
they're all gone, everything's gone
everything is closer to goodbye
bullets in there, blood everywhere
everything is closer to goodbye
Wishing this whole thing ends tonight

I Just Wanna Go Back To The Time
When Everything Was Fine
When There Was nothing Called Mine
It Was All Ours


Chorus
they're all gone, everything's gone
everything is closer to goodbye
bullets in there, blood everywhere
everything is closer to goodbye
Wishing this whole thing ends tonight

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woooowwww preettttyyyy goooddd
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Thaaank Yooou Sooo Muuuch :D
smsooom posted over a year ago
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Would 당신 guys like me to post another song?
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jessy_an said:
Pretty nice I am guessing it's about war,Great subject, In third stanza why did 당신 just wrote 4 lines? There should be also 6? I would like to listen this lyrics 당신 know a lyrics doesn't seem a song until listener listens the tune so I would like to hear it while I was 읽기 that it was like I'm 읽기 a poem.
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Yeah, it's about war :) Because that was the bridge ;) Hopefully, someday I'll record it maybe :) and I'll post it here for sure
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Darkus-eliox said:
Beautiful 사랑 it best song ever I would 사랑 it if u sang it and 게시됨 it here
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Thaank 당신 so much :D :D As soon as I record it, someday!
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joanzark said:
Oh it is wonderful!!!! Best song i've seen in fanpop! You've got a huge talent and a big soul!!! What kind of 음악 당신 listen to?
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Thank 당신 so much :D :D :D :D :D ADELE, Avril Lavigne. MIKA, Queen, Taylor 빠른, 스위프트
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Oh good! Perfect...!
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:)
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Yuzuri said:
Awesome! Whats the title? Its a really good one!
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Thanks! Closer To Goodbye :) Thanks again!
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celia-chan said:
it's Awesome! (y)
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Thanks :D
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