Hey! I wrote a beginning of a song.. I didn't like it that much.. so do u think I should continue it?

It's shitty. and kinda of,bland.

It's really flat,it needs depth to it.

It honestly up to you.

nahhh it's too boring and unoriginal tbh but if 당신 want to be a pop 별, 스타 it's no worse than everything else on the radio

I don't want to sound mean, but I think there are too many platitudes - stringing cliches together isn't good song writing.

Something else I'm wondering is: why did 당신 choose to write about a break up?

I've never written a song before, but if I were to give 당신 some 조언 then it would be to come up with an original subject. Everybody writes about break ups - be unique! I'm sure you've had plenty of meaningful life experiences that are far 더 많이 interesting. :)

Hope this helps a little.