Does this 망가 I want to write sound interesting?

AVW is a school for all AVW students at ages 7- 20. AVW (Animals voice whisper) is a society of people that can turn into 동물 and train to become the leader of their packs. This year, 5 students are grouped together are told to work together to see who will become the leader of their packs. The first student to win 200 battles is the group leader of their animal pack, and the rest are left to be in the group of their pack.
This year, the Tiger, Rabbit, Snake, Hawk, and 늑대 have all been chosen to see who will lead their pack.

Sorry if it sounds childish.