I am a harsh critic so apologies if 당신 are offended. 2 Study human anatomy, you'll benefit considerably. Add texture, shading for depth and details on the clothes. Add a 더 많이 interesting background, it looks boring and overly simplistic. as if it was drawn 의해 a little kid. Work on the face, that's a bit off as well. The arms are too short, the torso is too long. I am an artist too and I do not sugarcoat things, that cripples you. Practice, 당신 WILL get better.