Can somone please let me know what they think of my poem! I would really apperciate it! Thanks! Here it is!

I can pick out your voice a mile away
Its weird how 당신 seem so unique
당신 can always put a smile on my face
No matter how down I'm feeling 당신 find a way
The things 당신 say are so crazy
But I know 당신 mean well in your own way
But just know I never want 당신 to change