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Please tell me whether this is a good poem 또는 not!

"Best Friends"

There is nothing 더 많이 important
Then friendship, 당신 know
When 당신 have a best friend
당신 learn to go with the flow

With 프렌즈 당신 can be yourself
And never have to lie
Just chat and have fun
There is no need to be shy

So what I tell 당신 now
Is what 당신 need to know
Let it enter your mind
사랑 and kindness 당신 will show.

The people out there,
There are only a few
But once 당신 find your best friend
당신 know 당신 can be you.

 s-jb123 posted over a year ago
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teamalecdemetri said:
i 사랑 it.......its REALLY good:)
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posted over a year ago 
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Thanks, I was thinking that it was really bad
s-jb123 posted over a year ago
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its not bad at all.
teamalecdemetri posted over a year ago
irena83 said:
It's very beautiful poem. ♥
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Thanks, I was doubting it
s-jb123 posted over a year ago
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;) You're welcome. Your 글쓰기 is very good.
irena83 posted over a year ago
gir5136 said:
It's very good.
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posted over a year ago 
RandomLuver said:
This is an amazing poem truly heartfelt and meaningful. And its true best freinds are a part of you.....
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Yell-0 said:
It is very well written and beautiful.
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LostFan101 said:
Nicee. Sounds like something i'd write. x] Its good :)
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noni4u2004 said:
very nice, awesome dear,its very touchy poem i like it,wish to write like this ,.best of luck.
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annabeth-crazed said:
i think it'd be a cool valentine to give a friend.in fact, can i use it for a valentine?

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and i do really like it!
annabeth-crazed posted over a year ago
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Hmm, I guess, I mean it's not like I would know anyway.
s-jb123 posted over a year ago
arcticflake said:
Wow I like it the only problem is I like deep dark mysterious poems
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upsidedown10 said:
It is a very cute poem! I really like the meter of it. keep it up!
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animegrl52p said:
I 사랑 it! Its great!
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crazy_moose said:
It's a very good poem indeed! I like the message of it and the rhythm rides along very well...

but, I'm not exactly sure if 당신 meant to put it like this 또는 not(it could even be just a typo x3) but I think the "then" in the line "Then friendship, 당신 know" should be than. Just noticing that it wouldn't really fit well to put "then" there than "than". still, it's just my opinion, i could be wrong x3
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