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The Reverie of Music

It Takes 당신 to a place nobody has ever seen, but you.
It can make 당신 feel a way that nothing else can make 당신 feel.
It can make 당신 weep 또는 giggle.
This is a place where no one will understand it but me.
It’s a place free of sorrow and pain.
A blanket of joy and nothing but 사랑 wrapped around you.
This feeling can’t be described.
It’s like medicine to cure an illness 또는 a bandage to heal a womb.
As I lay with my headphones in my ears, it’s like im drifting somewhere above the sky and the stars that no one has control over but me.
I sink into a pool full of fantasies and dreams full of no ones thoughts but mine.
I’m in a place where there’s no such thing as impossible and cant.
I’m in a place where reality doesn’t live and life is forever.
And when that track ends, anything that was something falls,
But who said it had to end.

 alexmswann posted over a year ago
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RuEbAn said:
excellent
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StarGirl1721 said:
Try to make some words rhyme that way it would make it 더 많이 interesting, I understand if 당신 don't want to, 의해 the way its really nice, good job XD
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