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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Hello. I wrote this 기사 for people on this club that like 글쓰기 fanfictions, but have the feeling that they don't do good. This 기사 should help 당신 out, and it might also encourage others to start 글쓰기 fanfictions, if they haven't done so.

Again, this is for people on this club that feel like they want to do better, 또는 just don't like reading/writing fanfictions in general. If 당신 think you're good at writing, 또는 do like reading/writing in general, give me some feedback.

There are many important things to have in a fanfiction.

1. A setting.

This is very important. If 당신 don't have a setting in your story, the audience will be confused, and wonder where it takes place. 당신 must include where the story takes place, and/or when it takes place.

Often, when I write a fanfiction that takes place today, I don't add when it takes place, but I always write down when it takes place, if it's in the past, such as my Ponies On The Rails articles. 당신 can see the month, day, and 년 that each episode takes place in.

As I said earlier, it's important to write down where your story takes place. Since this is a My Little 조랑말 club, 당신 can have it take place in any of the towns for this show, such as Ponyville, Canterlot, Manehattan, Fillydelphia, 또는 Vanhoover. 당신 can also create your own towns like I have. Here's a list of towns I created for my fanfictions

St. Foalis - St. Louis
San Francisco - San Franciscolt
Norfoal - Norfolk
Chicagoat - Chicago

Other times, I use real city names for my fanfictions, like Cheyenne, Denver, Portland, and the town that I currently live in, Frenchtown.

2. Characters

당신 can't have a story without characters. Well... 당신 could, but it would be boring. If 당신 can't think of a creative 조랑말 name for your OC, try and use real names. That's what I've done with most of my OC's. Also, it's important to have a picture of your OC in the fanfiction so that the readers can understand what he/she looks like.

3. The type of story

There are many ways 당신 can write a fanfiction. 당신 can make a..

Comedy
Drama
Action
Adventure
Creepy 파스타
Clop fic
Crossover

Comedy is the best type of fanfiction to write if 당신 know a lot of good jokes. Keep your readers laughing as they enjoy all of the good humor in what you've written.

Drama is not a good type of fanfiction. From what I've heard, Drama is when 당신 have a ordinary activity, filled with anger, shouting, and sometimes, punching someone in the face. 또는 in this case, punching somepony in the face.

Action fanfictions can be very good, as long as 당신 don't make it too violent. Entertain everyone 읽기 your fanfiction 의해 adding...

Gunfights
Car chases
Huge explosions behind a 조랑말 walking away with sunglasses
A fistfight on 상단, 맨 위로 of a moving train
A fistfight on 상단, 맨 위로 of a moving plane

This isn't all 당신 need to fill your fanfiction with loads of action, but once 당신 get started, you'll find 더 많이 ways to add action into your fanfictions.

Adventure fanfictions can be about many things, such as treasure hunts, searches for 로스트 artifacts, 또는 huge ripoffs of the Daring Do 책 that 무지개, 레인 보우 Dash loves to read. I haven't written an adventure fanfiction yet, but I plan to start, 의해 creating an OC who turns out to be Daring Do's son.

크리피파스타 is for bronies/pegasisters that like 글쓰기 things about ponies being turned into cupcakes, 또는 about Big Macintosh raping the CMC while killing them at the same time. If you're going to write a fanfiction like that, don't do it on this website. That's the last thing we need!

Clopfics are loathed 의해 most people on this website. Basically, clop fics are about porn/rule 34. It may be perfect for Rarity, but not for us!

Crossover fanfictions are where 당신 make a crossover of My Little Pony, with anything your 심장 desires. Most of my fanfictions are crossovers, mostly of 영화 I like to watch.

4. The way to write a fanfiction

There are two ways of 글쓰기 a fanfiction. The correct way, 또는 the wrong way.

The wrong way is this.

"Hello." Said Vinyl Scratch

This is like watching a movie in black & white. 당신 get your readers bored, just before they finish the first paragraph.

The correct way is this.

Pinkie Pie soon saw Maud.

Pinkie Pie: Guten tag!
Maud: *Looks at Pinkie* Oh... Hey.

It's quicker to write like this, and it's 더 많이 popular. However, 당신 can't write like this in real life, unless it's for a play. However, this is the internet. Feel free to write like this, no one will stop you.

5. A plot

당신 must think about what's going to happen in your story. What's the goal? What's the conflict? How does it end? Here's an example from one of my fanfictions I wrote last year

Hedgehog In Ponyville Episode 8

On my deviantart, it's caleed Hedgehog In Ponyville: The Nazis Strike Back

The plot: Twilight Sparkle turns evil, and helps a scientist named Doctor Robotnik capture Princess Celestia. What they don't know is that somepony is disguised as Celestia. Spike, and Luna tell Sean, and Shredder about this, and have them try to rescue Celestia, while destroying the 성 she is being held in.

Conflicts: Diamond Tiara, and Silverspoon 가입하기 them, but are double agents, working for Nazi Forces. 무지개, 레인 보우 Dash joins Sean, and Shredder, but loses to Twilight in a sword fight.
Diamond Tiara, and Silverspoon knock out Shredder, and attempt to escape from Sean. He needs to fight the two fillies on 상단, 맨 위로 of a cable car.

Ending: A very close friend of Twilight is on the plane that Sean, Shredder, and their team gets on board. He attempts to kill Sean, but realizes that his plan fails, then jumps out of the plane without a parachute.

Now that 당신 have seen the example, it shoudn't be difficult to make the plot, conflicts, and ending of your fanfiction.

That's all there is to it when it comes to 글쓰기 a fanfiction. I wish 당신 the best of luck on your future fanfictions. Everyone has their own talent, but anyone can write.

The end.
posted by Seanthehedgehog
When Dexter, and Octavia got to the office of the Flim Flam brothers, they saw it was empty.

Octavia: They must have escaped while we were shooting all those workers.
Dexter: We got to stop them. *runs down hallway*
Octavia: *following*

Outside the factory

Flim: We're almost out of here.
Flam: Which car are we taking?
Flim: Both of ours. 당신 drive yours, and I'll drive mine.
Flam: Why not the other way around?
Flim: Ok!

So they both hopped into their cars, and drove away.

Dexter: Quick, let's get in my car! *gets in*
Octavia: *Gets in*
Dexter: *Drives after the flim flam brothers*
Octavia: There's...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
 General Rosemeyer.
General Rosemeyer.
The helicopter passed us, but the pilot didn't see us.

At the castle

Nazis: *watching helicopter*
General Rosemeyer: *flying helicopter*
Nazis: *run out to greet general*
General Rosemeyer: *climbs out of helicopter*
Colonel Kramer: Hello General.
General Rosemeyer: Hi Colonel. I've got some good news.
Colonel Kramer: What is it?
General Rosemeyer: Twilight Sparkle got the changelings to 가입하기 us.
Colonel Kramer: That's good. How is Canterlot?
General Rosemeyer: Nothing has changed. Do 당신 like my machine?
Colonel Kramer: Seems a little dangerous.
General Rosemeyer: Well 당신 must try it.
Colonel Kramer:...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Percy flew along the streets of Cheyenne, and suddenly saw Jeff coming out of a pharmacy.

Percy: Jeff!
Jeff: Percy? What are 당신 doing? I'm not feeling well.
Percy: I know, but listen. Do 당신 know how 당신 got sick?
Jeff: My doctor said it was from a filly I accidentally bumped into. She had some kind of virus.
Percy: When was it?
Jeff: Near my house.
Percy: No, when was it?
Jeff: Last night.
Percy: Alright. Time travel away.
Jeff: Uh, Percy? I don't know any time traveling spells.
Percy: Great. Our only hope is Coffee Creme.
Gordon: *stops nearby* 또는 당신 can count on me.
Percy: Gordon? But you're...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Sean The Hedgehog presents

Based off the roleplay 의해 Applejackrocks1

Hedgehog In Ponyville, and the Grand Galloping Gala

Dedicated to Jade Gordon

I miss her so much :(

It was one of those days in winter where all the water was freezing. I had to stop Discord from one of his crazy schemes.

Discord: *enters building*
Sean: *waits 의해 door*
Discord: *pulls switch*
Sean: The building is going into the ground! *hops on roof*

I snuck into what seemed to be Discord's layer. It was underground.

Robotnik: Guten Tag Discord.
Discord: Dr! So good to see 당신 again!! How is everything?
Robotnik: Wunderbar, but listen....
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Rarity woke up in her bed, looking at her clock. And noticed she was late to take sweetie belle to the resturaunt. "Oh goodness! I have forgot to take sweetie belle to the resturaunt." Rarity swung out of bed, trotting to her make up room. The soft colored blue magic had occured to rarity's horn. She had lifted up fake eyelashes and straped it to her left eye. "Oh I really should have resisted sweetie belle's begging." Then she lifted up another eyelash, Strapping it to her right eye. Lied beside her, was a eyeshadow box and the eyeshadow brush. "I'm sure sweetie belle won't mind if we're late...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Sean The Hedgehog presents

Dr. Ani (A Con Mane Story)

In case 당신 are wondering, ani is korean for no.

Three old blind stallions were walking alongside a 거리 to a club. They were all walking with canes making sure they weren't going to hit anything. They kept walking until they saw a 조랑말 get in a red sports car. Yes, the stallions were old, but they weren't blind. As the 조랑말 was getting in his sports car the stallions shot him. Then they got in a old hearse, and drove away. "One agent down two to go." the driver said. "Who are we killing next?" the 주황색, 오렌지 stallion asked. "Our 다음 target...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
 Sean's Canterlot GMO
Sean's Canterlot GMO
It seemed dark in the store, but soon a light appeared. Then it started moving.

Rarity: I'm scared!
Spike: Don't worry, a few sticks of dynamite are there, and it will blow a hole in the door.
Fuse: *stops*
Spike: Wait a minute
Fuse: *sets box on fire*
Rarity: Don't go there!
Spike: For crying out loud I can do it! Why do 당신 always act like I don't know anything?!
box: *explodes*
fireworks: *come out of box*
Rarity: *screaming*

Pinkie Pie: *flying upside down*
Fluttershy: If 당신 don't stop, I'll end up like Bartholomew!!
Pinkie Pie: At least 당신 can sleep!
control: Alright listen. It's important that...
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posted by NocturnalMirage
Wheels of Evil – Part 9


The Sun is still up, but the night approaches quickly. Four dark silhouettes sneak toward the edge of the Everfree Forest. Four stallions. They 옮기기 carefully. Veeeery silently. Like if they were hiding from somepony.

“Are 당신 sure this is the right way, Caramel?” one 조랑말 asks quietly.

“Yes, yes…” Bon-Bon told me precisely where is it.” he replies and gestures to the two others.

“Clover, Note, 옮기기 your flanks! We best be doing this before the Sun goes down!”

“Right behind ya!”

Ssshhh! There!” 캐러멜, 캐 러 멜 whispers and points to a large, weird object...
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posted by NocturnalMirage
Wheels of evil – Part 1

It’s summer. The night is warm. The soft breeze cuddles the 나무, 트리 branches. The full Moon pours its white light on the land. Crickets chirping. Countless fireflies circling in the air. Everything is calm. The glowing orb reaches its zenith on the obsidian sky. Flickering stars. Elongating shadows. The clock on Town Square shows 2 AM. The quiet sound of streaming water. A 분수 in the middle of the square. The regal, life size statue of Celestia observes the town restlessly. Ponyville at night…

The night is warm. Open windows. Billowing curtains. Sighs, snores...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Con, and his 프렌즈 found out that Mr. Sanchez smuggled drugs out of Svoboda into other places in the world, and the way he did it, was illegal.

Sanchez: *drives past S*
S: Rain, do 당신 copy?
Rain: I copy. What's the skinny?
S: Sanchez is in a convoy with two sedans, and a bus.
Rain: An actual bus?!
S: No, just a Vriendscoupe bus.
Rain: Oh, thank god.
Con: She's not used to cars. Just flying.
S: I'll keep that in mind.
Rain: *flies above cars*
Con: Why are 당신 carrying me again?
Rain: So we can go over the plan. We'll be disguised as tourists, and then we infiltrate Sanchez's plan.
Con: Great.
Rain:...
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 The battle that started it all
The battle that started it all
Before I start this story, let me go over some stuff that happened in the 이전 stories.

November 23, 2012

I arrived at Ponyville, and met the six main characters of MLP FIM. The 다음 일 was the beginning of the Equestria War. A 월 later Canterlot got bombed, and the 조랑말 Alliance was formed to fight against Robotnik's army.

December 24, 2012

Before his death Dr. Robotnik got Discord, and Blaze the cat to take over his army. Discord would take Ponyville, and Manehattan while Blaze would take Fillydelphia, Stalliongrad, and San Franciscolt.

December 30, 2014

The 조랑말 Alliance finishes...
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Pinkie took Twilight back to the place she was supposed to rob.

Pinkie Pie: Follow my lead, and don't screw up this time.
Twilight: I got it man!
Pinkie Pie: *walks into store*
Las Pegasus ponies: HEY! Shoot her!
Pinkie Pie: *kills L.P ponies*
Twilight: Wow.
Pinkie Pie: *bounces happily to cashier* Hi!
cashier: *shouts* What did 당신 kill those ponies for?
Pinkie Pie: They were going to kill me. 당신 also might've died. That's why I came here to offer 당신 protection.
cashier: If 당신 put it that way, I accept. *pays money*
Twilight: Is that it?
Pinkie Pie: Sometimes. There are places that have illegal...
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 Mike
Mike
When Scootaloo heard General Sky Night say this, she backed away from 무지개, 레인 보우 Dash immediately. "Don't 당신 walk away from your big sister!!!" Dash shouted at the little 주황색, 오렌지 filly. "You stay away from Scootaloo!" A voice yelled as it came closer Sky Night recognized the Pegasi that flew down a few feet from RD. "mike?" Night asked. "Yes Sky it's me" he said as Scootaloo got behind him. "Rainbow, 당신 aren't well" Mike said to the cyan Pegasus. "I remember you!" The 무지개, 레인 보우 조랑말 angrily replied. While these two were arguing Pin Tail grabbed his pistol and Green Flame revealed a flint-lock Musket.....
 "Don't walk away from your big sister!!!"
"Don't walk away from your big sister!!!"
posted by Seanthehedgehog
Welcome to another story about a spy named Con Mane. We begin at a Mexican nuclear base.

Con: *runs onto dam*
pilot: *flies past Con*
Con: *ties himself to guardrail*

Con jumped, as the rope slowly let him down toward part of the base. A few 분 later he was inside.

Mexican pony777: *watches T.V.*
Mexican pony484: *goes to bathroon*
Mexican pony556: *leaves bathroom*
Mexican pony484: *reads newspaper*
Con: Beg your pardon. Forgot to knock *K.O's mexican*

From there Con walked into an unlit room when he ran into another 조랑말 named John.

John: ¡Señor! ¿Estás solo?
Con: Yes, I'm alone.
John: You're...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
 Frank
Frank
Con woke up to find himself in a warehouse. He was tied to a chair, and Der cheif was with 15 of his goons.

Con: What do 당신 want?
Der Cheif: The money 당신 스톨, 훔친 from me!
Con: It's not stealing if 당신 win the money.
Goon 5: *hits Con*
Der Cheif: Ok listen. We can't get the money out of your car, so 당신 gotta use your unicorn magic to fix the car, and get the money out for us.
Con: Sure.
Der Cheif: Bring the car in!
Goon 12: *backs tow truck up with Con's car behind it*
Der Cheif: Such a shame that we had to destroy a luxorious car. Then again, no one makes another person crash a Coltillac into a...
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 Shredder, singer, and guitarist of Green Hay.
Shredder, singer, and guitarist of Green Hay.
Dash made it up to me 의해 making out with me, then we went to a Green 건초 concert. Shredder just joined as the lead guitarist, and singer.

Rainbow Dash: This is the best band ever.
Sean: No kidding.
Green Hay: *playing instruments*
Shredder: Shut your mouth 'cause 당신 talk too much and I don't give a damn anyway
You always seem to be steppin in shit and all 당신 do is complain
Hitch a ride tell 'em all 당신 like. Small minds tend to think a like
Shut your mouth cause your talking too much and I don't give a fuck anyway
Let yourself go, let yourself go, let yourself go X4
Rainbow Dash: What'd I say?
Sean:...
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When the troops saw that there was one loss. their leader, General Sky Night, wanted a remedy in the air since most Pegasi were having conflicts at the time. The General thought that if air balloons have been used for travel, the Ponyville military should find new air machines that could be used for battles. Pin tail and Green Flame were excited when they heard about the general's idea. Both the scout and infantry 조랑말 had joy showing on their faces and wanted to begin immediately on the inventions....
We got to the train, and saw some griffons wiith 더 많이 unicorns.

Vinyl Scratch: Where are 당신 taking us?
Griffon 3894: None of your business! Uh Gilda where are we taking them again?
Gilda: Across this bridge into San Francisco. Don't kill all of the ponies we need one unicorn to get back into Equestria.
Griffon 3894: Allright.
Griffon 3987: What about the bomb?
Gilda: Detonate it once 당신 get the train across the bridge.
Rainbow Dash: A bomb?
Sean: This can't be good. We have to prevent that train from crossing the bridge.
Twilight: How?
Sean: 의해 derailing it.
Celestia: But what about our horns?...
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"I can't believe it is 크리스마스 Eve,YAY! I can't wait to decorate your house,Cotton Swirls!"said Azura Alor. "We can go decorate right now,let's go!"said Cotton Swirls. When they all arrive at a her house,they started taking out all of the 크리스마스 decorations. "We should decorate tommorrow,you know. Because...it is 크리스마스 tommorrow."says 사과 브랜디 as she looks around the room. "I do not think that is a very good idea,since 크리스마스 Eve today."said Score Heights.

Meari Otenbasan saw a video game console so she ran to it as fast as she can. "Hey,Score Heights! I found some Video Games!"she...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
"About time." Dash said very angry. "I wanted to make it look like they killed us." I explained, "but they'll probably find out were alive soon." As we drove to the apartment where Dash's 프렌즈 were the car ran out of gas. "I've got 더 많이 gas in the trunk." I said going to get the car refueled. When I started refueling the car, snow fell. "How did Robotnik get his army?" 무지개, 레인 보우 Dash asked. I knew she would ask me about Robotnik, but not about his army. I started telling her, "Robotnik came up with a bunch of badniks in his factory. Then there is his nephew, he doesn't do much, but he is smart....
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