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Blue Bolt- The new resident of Ponyville

posted by Dragon-88

Blue Bolt, the newest resident of Ponyville

Last story was halfway good, so this time I'm making it to where Blue Bolt's personality is fully revealed in this story. It all starts with Bolt arriving in Ponyville. He is new here, so he doesn't know much about the town 또는 the residents. He is very shy, so he was nervous to talk to anyone. He thought his way of speech would make him appear weird. So he enters the house he was promised 의해 some 조랑말 who had blue curled hair and wore red glasses. He doesn't know who she was, but he will learn soon!

Bolt: This is a nice house. Who was she anyways? I just hope the residents are nice...

It is daytime, and he nervously looks outside, seeing many different ponies walking around and socializing. Pinkie Pie, who wants to find someone new to play with, goes to the house that used to be empty.

Pinkie: Hello? Anypony home? Can I come in? OK!

Pinkie opens the door(which was surprisingly unlocked) and walks around. She spots several pieces of paper on the ground, followed 의해 several drawing utensils. She is amazed 의해 this.

Pinkie: Whoa! This guy 또는 girl must be quite the artist! Rarity wouldn't believe this!

Bolt is hiding from her, because he is shy around girls. He watched her pace back and forth, and accidentally blasts out a 레이 from his horn.

Bolt: How do they control these things?

Pinkie: Huh? Someone there? I coulda sworn I heard a discharge of magic. Maybe he 또는 she is a unicorn! Would 당신 like a cupcake? You're a shy one...

Bolt: Yes...I would like one....

Pinkie: YIKES!! Who are you!?

Bolt: I'm a new resident. I'm B-Blue Bolt. Please don't hurt me.

Pinkie: ? Your'e just like Fluttershy! I'm Pinkie Pie! 당신 like parties?

Bolt: I'm not into parties. People might think I'm weird.

Pinkie: 당신 need to get out more. I like your name! Cool cutie mark. See 당신 later, Bolt!

Pinkie leaves, leaving Bolt to make a decision. He chooses to go walk around town and see what it's like. He is still nervous about talking to anyone. He heads for Carousel Boutique to ask for help, but isn't sure how to present the question.

Rarity: Thanks, come again, darling! (notices Bolt) Hello, can I help 당신 with something....Aren't 당신 that shy unicorn I gave that house to? It's 다음 door to mine.

Bolt: Um....I suppose so. I didn't see your house, I'm new here...

Rarity: Something wrong, darling? I can show 당신 around.

Bolt: (blushes) My, your beautiful....whoops!

Rarity: (blushes) Goodness, how kind of 당신 to notice. 당신 should go see Fluttershy. She's shy too. I'm sure she'll be great 프렌즈 with you. That's what we're all about. Friendship!

Bolt walks outside, still blushing. Rarity was a beautiful pony, and he almost embarrassed himself. He just hopes he didn't look awkward in front of her! As he is walking around getting to know what's what and where, a blue pegasus with 무지개, 레인 보우 hair runs into him in mid-flight. It was 무지개, 레인 보우 Dash. Uh-oh...

Bolt: Excuse me....

Rainbow: Hey! Do 당신 mind watching where your'e going? I almost broke my wing again...Huh? Are 당신 that unicorn who lives in the house 다음 to Rarity's?

Bolt: Um....

Rainbow: What's the matter? Can't 당신 talk? Your'e weird! (takes off)

Bolt: This isn't going well. She sounded like she wanted to kill me!

Bolt goes around shyly asking where Fluttershy's house is. He goes to her house, not knowing whether she was like 무지개, 레인 보우 Dash 또는 not.

Bolt: (rings doorbell) Here we go...

Fluttershy: (opens door) Hi....Who are you?

Bolt: Uh...I'm Blue Bolt....Sorry, I get nervous around girls.....

Fluttershy: It's fine. I'm shy too.

Bolt: No way! That's awesome! 의해 the way, 당신 know the 조랑말 with the blonde hair and wearing a cowboy hat?

Fluttershy: Applejack?

Bolt: So that's her name...Well, I caught myself looking at her, and when she looked at me, I blushed and ran.

Fluttershy: So 당신 like her?

Bolt: (blushes) Y-yes. It's my secret.

사과 브랜디 walks in, bringing in a look of surprise.

AJ: What the hay? Are 당신 that unicorn who was lookin' at me? 당신 ran off without sayin' anything!

Bolt: Oh no, another violent one...

AJ: What? I'm not like Dash, not one bit. Do ya like me sugarcube?

Fluttershy: Oh, my....(looks at Bolt)

Bolt: (blushes) Um...oh gosh..yes.

AJ: Well, aren't ya' sweet! (kisses Bolt)

Fluttershy is stunned.

AJ: Congrats, big boy. I'm your girlfriend. See ya later!

Fluttershy: Um, what just happened?

Bolt: 사랑 happened. She's so cute! I'm off to see more.

Bolt sees a purple unicorn being followed 의해 a small purple dragon. It was Twilight and Spike.

Twilight: Spike! I told 당신 to not eat the ingredients like a thousand times! We haven't even gotten 집 to start cooking....

Spike: Sorry, I was hungry....

Bolt: Hello....

Twilight: Hi! I've never seen 당신 before. 당신 new here?

Bolt: Yes, and so far only 무지개, 레인 보우 has me at a distance.

Spike: Hey, he wears glasses, and he's a unicorn. He can help 당신 with spells.

Bolt: If I knew how to control this stuff....I almost zapped Pinkie 의해 accident!

Spike: Can I try on your glasses?

Bolt: I need them to see.

Twilight goes to tell Celestia about Bolt, followed 의해 Spike. Meanwhile, 무지개, 레인 보우 is flying and sees Bolt.

Rainbow: I hope he doesn't hate me for what happened earlier. I can be so stupid sometimes! Hey, new guy!

Bolt: Oh, it's you. Are 당신 going to yell at me again?

Rainbow: It was just an accident, I get carried away sometimes. I'm 무지개, 레인 보우 Dash, the fastest flyer in Equestria! What's your name? I see 당신 have quite a unique cutie mark. 당신 fast?

Bolt: I'm Blue Bolt. I'm one of the fastest among unicorns, probably. The thing I'm truly good at is drawing. Gaming is just one of my activities. Drawing is my main hobby.

Rainbow: Cool! We should hang out sometime, Bolt. 당신 got yourself a friend.

Bolt: 초 friend. Fluttershy's my first friend.

Rainbow: No problem. I'm ok with it.

Bolt is now becoming 더 많이 confident after taking a walk around Ponyville. He met the mane six (he met Pinkie at his house), and had a good idea what was where. He is still shy, but is also confident. He is in 사랑 with Applejack, who loves him back. His personality is shy, cool, and admires girls, not to mention secretly competitive. Maybe at some point he'll have ground races with 무지개, 레인 보우 Dash! This is about Bolt learning about Ponyville, what everyone is like, ad where everything is. I tried making it sound like Ponyville didn't revolve around him.

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NocturnalMirage Hmm, it was much better. It felt more "real" than last time. Yeah, I just realized I'm speaking of reality in the world of technicolor pastel ponies... haha! Anyways, nice job! :) Just one thing: it felt to me like you've rewritten the story in a way to show what I had in mind. It is always a good thing to try to fulfill the desires of your readers, but it is also important to keep your own writing style at the same time. But most importantly: enjoy yourself while writing something. Oh that reminds me. Do you consider a sequel? Cos now that you've established your character, the possibilities are limitless. :)

Dragon-88 Good idea! I'l make a sequel! I just don't know how to fulfill the desires of those who read my articles. Do they want the sequel to be more awesome? More Rainbow Dash/Pinkie Pie? Princess Celesia spending time with Blue Bolt? What more ideas could they want? Maybe in the sequel, Applejack and Blue Bolt will take their relationship to the next level! Or Pinkie will show him how to party!

NocturnalMirage Two things... 1. write what you wish to write, the ideas you said above can all be the foot-stone of your story. 2. I can understand it is hard to know what your readers think when most of the people don't reflect to the story. Only a few people here take the time to make a comment. But that doesn't have to be a reason to become discouraged. I don't know about you, but for me, writing is a hobby... gratification. It's a good way to enter the magical world of ponies and get away from the complexities and ugliness of life for a while. If people like your work, that's a good extra. One pretty basic tip I always find useful. One of my teachers said in Creative Writing class: "Don't tell the reader, show it to them!" It means you manage to create a certain atmosphere to the story. There are different writing styles and each writer has to find their own way to convey their thoughts to the reader. In your case, the dialogues move the plot forward. You've done a pretty good job on that already, so I'm looking forward to read form you in the future. Oh and if you need any help, you can almost always find me here on fanpop. :)

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The Problem in Sweet 사과, 애플 Acres: Part 2

posted by soomin1208

30 분 later, The Mane six were all sitting in a 원, 동그라미 at Twilight's library. Pinkie Pie, who always had a smile on her face, was now with a frown, crying.

AJ: Am sorry guys...
Rarity: Darling, maybe there's a way to fix this!
AJ: Its too late Rarity. Now, the 사과, 애플 farm belongs to Flim and Flam
Pinkie: *sniff* Please dont leave us AJ!
AJ: *hugs Pinkie* Ah need to.
Twilight: What about the elements?
AJ: *shrugs* Ah dont know...If something bad happens, just give me a call, and Ah'll arrive in a train 72 hours later.
RD: Those sons of Mare!
Fluttershy: *tear rolls* We are really going to miss you....

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The Problem in Sweet 사과, 애플 Acres: Part 1

posted by soomin1208

It was a glorious 일 in Ponyville. Twilight was 읽기 some books, 무지개, 레인 보우 Dash was practicing some new stunts, Pinkie was Celebrating a Colt's Birthday, Fluttershy was feeding her animals, Rarity was designing a new dress, and Applejack.....well, she was sitting on the 잔디 meanwhile tears rolled down her face. Her sister AB, sat 다음 to AJ with a frown.

AB: *hugs AJ* Isnt there anything we can do sis?
AJ: *sigh* Am afraid not sis. *looks up* Its already too late...
AB: Even though the contract expired, we can still fix it!
AJ: Ah wish we could. *sniff*
AB: Should.....we tell the others?
AJ:...

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Secret of the Crystal Ponies Summary

posted by Coolblue123

Secret of the Crystal Ponies

Twilight Sparkle and 프렌즈 wake up to a horrifying discovery. All of Equestria has turned into Murderous Crystal Ponies! They have to find a solution. They discover the horrible truth of how Crystal Ponies are made. Who should they trust? If they don't find a solution soon there might not be an Equestria left to save. But are they willing to do what it takes to find the solution?

Should I write this story? Please 코멘트 on my 벽 또는 코멘트 down below if I should. If I write it and 당신 read it I will give 당신 a prop of you're choice and I will 팬 you. Please tell me!

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Hedgehog In Ponyville One Last Time part 6

posted by Seanthehedgehog

We now had to time travel to when King Sombra was making his time machine, and prevent it from being finished so none of this would happen. Discord's plan however would screw things up for us.

Sean: Are we clear?
Pinkie Pie: All clear!
Discord: *sets up rifle*
KS: Are 당신 sure about this?
Discord: I have a 소총 of course I'll kill him, and if I don't we'll send a team out there to kill him, and get the machine.
KS: Ok
Catie: I hope 당신 know what you're doing.
Discord: Of course *shoots rifle*
Sean: That nearly hit me!
Pinkie Pie: 당신 got a sniper, hurry!
Discord: Go! Kill them!

Communists were sent...

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Hedgehog In Ponyville One Last Time part 3

posted by Seanthehedgehog

의해 the time me & 무지개, 레인 보우 Dash got back in Equestria we saw that all of it was frozen.

Sean: Oh jeez.
Rainbow Dash: How did this happen?
Sean: I'm not sure, but I have a plan. Chaos Control!

Eight hours earlier

King Sombra: I only need a few 더 많이 things to get my time machine working again.
Sean: *pulls out gun*
Rainbow Dash: He's still working on it.
Sean: He's screwed. *kills King Sombra* Chaos control

Eight hours later

Rainbow Dash: What?! It's still frozen!
Sean: But how? I killed King Sombra before he could time travel to get all those pricks, and it's still frozen.
Robotnik: That's because...

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Pinkie's Duel part 4

posted by Seanthehedgehog

D: Why is this happening?!

After evading the big rig once again Pinkie had to stop a railroad crossing, and watched as the train passed her.

Trucker: *pushes Pinkie Pie's car*
Pinkie Pie: What the? *looks behind her* 저기요 STOP!!
Trucker: *doesn't stop*
Pinkie Pie: *puts car in reverse*

The big rig kept pushing Pinkie Pie's car closer to the crossing until the end of the train arrived. Pinkie then drove off the road letting the truck pass.

After nearly getting killed again Pinkie Pie decided to drive slow, and avoid the truck, but that didn't work out. She saw the truck in front of her, and decided to stop at a gas station....

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Beyond the Trees of the Everfree ch. 3 prt. 2 Scootaloo's decision

posted by Dragon4322

Scootaloo leaves theater

While the war was going on, Ponyville was informing its citizens 의해 making a video in the theater. The Cutie Mark Crusaders weren't interested in the war going on. Except for Scootaloo, she went to the theater 의해 herself and saw the video.

The video interested Scootaloo & at the end the video said "and with the Ponyville Military putting all the effort into creating their own flying war machines, Green Flame asks for YOUR help" and once the video ended Scootaloo decided to go to the base herself.

As she was walking out of the theater with the new idea to sign up for the military she forgot...

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The Inglourious Hedgehog In Ponyville part 8

posted by Seanthehedgehog

The train is halfway across the bridge, and Griffons are trying to kill Celestia and other ponies at the engine, but back at Equestria

Luna: Where is my sister?
Pinkie Pie: I don't know! griffons kidnapped her!
Fluttershy: They took other ponies as well.
Luna: Well then lets get them back *turns Pinkie and Fluttershy into Griffons*
Fluttershy: We look exactly like griffons.
Luna: that's the idea.
Pinkie Pie: Now that were a different animal we must speak another language.
Luna: No 당신 shouldn't.
Pinkie Pie: *spots Applejack* Ich werde 사과 브랜디 tauschen.
Applejack: Griffons!
Pinkie Pie: Hallo, Ich...

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당신 people can be really funny sometimes...

posted by xDark_Angelx

If anyone knows me, I am a brony. I've been with the show for the summer and have loved every moment of it. The fandom is great, and the show continues to be great. It has flaws, but that doesn't stop me from loving it.

That said, the fandom has flaws, too. And these 벽 posts greatly represent them.

People are making a bigger deal out of this Twilight Alicorn thing than necessary. Everyone's butthurt is almost funny to me, yet at the same time, I just don't get it. Why is this as if it's the end of the world?

And people quitting the fandom because of it? Give. Me. A. Break. I like to be nice--my...

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The Inglourious Hedgehog In Ponyville part 2

posted by Seanthehedgehog

We drove to Canterlot 성 where we were told to meet up with Celestia. The front of the 성 was gaurded 의해 jeeps with machine 총 on them. Soon we went in the castle, and saw Celestia standing with Twilight, and other ponies. "Hi guys." Twilight said when she saw us, "Hey." I said simoultaneously with 무지개, 레인 보우 Dash. Celestia then begun to speak, "As you're all aware, griffons have bombed Ponyville, and other places in Equestria. We need your help to stop them. I sent my army into Baltimare to defend it from the griffons, and that's where they'll be waiting for you, the inglourious hedgehog."...

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My little 조랑말 talk 2!

posted by mlpfim1222

저기요 every pony! Today we will be talking about the Keep calm and Flutter on episode and the My little 조랑말 sweepstakes! First off, I absolutely loved the new episode. I liked how Discord came back but also learned to use his magic nicely! Some people got upset that Discord is nice now but I think that it was really cool how Fluttershy did that for him. This episode was totally worth the wait! Do 당신 like Discord mean 또는 nice? I don't think 앤젤 was ever seen in a episode that many times so I think that is good he got to stand out for once! Oh yeah, it was cool to see the ponies use the elements of harmony again! I always 사랑 to see them use them!
On to the My little 조랑말 sweepstakes! Soooo excited! I hope I win but, there is like a 100,000% chance i won't! Maybe if I don't even win my parents could take me to Los Angeles! I wonder what the my little 조랑말 음악회, 콘서트 would be like. Well see ya'll later thanks for reading!

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더 많이 then One Hedgehog In Ponyville part 7

posted by Seanthehedgehog

We ended up at 30th 거리 station in Philladalphia. Catie 스톨, 훔친 a train while I 스톨, 훔친 another train. Both of us used chaos control, and ended up in Equestria heading down the train tracks towards Canterlot. Catie fired at me while I was getting close to her. I used my gun to shoot Catie's gun out of her hands, doesn't this remind 당신 of a similar chase? Anyway we were heading towards Canterlot when a russian tank was trying to blow up my train. It wasn't going to work though, because 무지개, 레인 보우 Dash flew towards that tank, and kicked it, but it didn't go anywhere. 'I'm gonna have to 옮기기 it'...

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더 많이 then one Hedgehog In Ponyville part 3

posted by Seanthehedgehog

"That's why Catie might win this time." I told 무지개, 레인 보우 Dash. She was impressed in Tail's work on the train I stole, and could 당신 blame her? "We need rocket launchers on our trains here." "Yeah, and with the hearts on them people would misjudge us." I said. Then the both of us just sat on a rock, and relaxed. Meanwhile, back at sugarcube Catie was still with Pinkie. "I don't know why Sean left when 당신 came here." Then Catie put a spell on Pinkie, "Now 당신 will do as I say. I want 당신 to get everyone in Equestria to destroy Sean The Hedgehog, and anyone that stands in our path." Pinkie copied...

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rarity and her 로스트 brush

posted by fefe2002

rarity woke up and wanted to brush her hair but
rarity:oh my gosh where is my brush!?i have to find it!
then rarity called all of the main 6 to help her find it
rarity:i 로스트 my brush! i need it!
twilight:it is okay we will help you
rarity's friends:a ha!
rarity:okay!okay! are 당신 crazy! i can not keep my hair like this!
then rarity went mad
rarity:omg!i feel horrible! girl's quick find it i can't stand a second!
무지개, 레인 보우 dash:twi i think rarity went a little bit too worried
사과, 애플 jack: i don't think she is okay 당신 all
pinkie pie:i think she just need to party!
flutter shy:i think we have to find it quick rarity is crying
then twilight found the brush on the make up place and gave rarity it then rarity went to normal and then
rarity:thanks 당신 all are the best now have fun in your 집 i have to brush my hair bye!
then they took a group hug and went to there houses

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Rise of Nature's Wrath: Rumble, Tumble, Fall; Part 2

posted by NaomiWinx

It was just a regular 일 in Ponyvile......

Celestia was just quietly sitting in her 왕좌, 왕위 room. She was 글쓰기 a letter of the big party she was having today. It was to celebrate the birth of Equestria, but something wasn't sitting right with Celestia...she knew this party..the whole annual festivities. She did not actually create Equestria with her sister like everyone thought. But she didn't let it bother her and decided to have some fun. Nothing could go wrong. She sent her letters to all of Equestria and went back to her royal duties.

"Howdy ponies! Sure is a purty day" said Nikki as...

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Discord is back part 11........WE DID IT!!!!!!

posted by applejackrocks

Azura and Cotton Swirls stood beside each other. CS started playing the guitar. Meanwhile Nikki, Score, and Stormy rolled their eyes.

Azura: *singing* Did 당신 Forget, that we were even alive?
CS: *singing* Did 당신 forget, everything that we had?
Azura: *singing* Did 당신 forget? Did 당신 forget 'bout us?
CS: *singing* did 당신 regret ever standing 의해 my side....
Azura: *singing* did 당신 forget, we were feeling inside...
CS: *singing* Now were left, to forget 'bout us......
Azura: *singing* But Somewhere we went wrong
CS: *singing* We were once so strong..
Azura; *singing* Our Friendship is like a song.....

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The 로스트 Memories - Part 4

posted by Quillabex

I pushed my way through the pegasi to get to my mom.
"I-I, what-?" I cried.
"Eclipse, sweetie, thou shall be strong." She said as she hugged me.
"What happened, what's going on?"
"Mmm, I believe this conversation should be taken, privately." She said as she walked out the door. I followed her. "RainbowDash, I would like 당신 to take charge of the meeting."
"Yes Ma'am!" She saluted. The doors closed behind us. We walked down the hallway upstairs.
"Tell me, how are thou be throughout of what has happened." I told her how I had the mysterious dream, and I told her about how I woke up in a testing lab....

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My Fellow Bronies

posted by triq267

My Fellow Bronies,
I'd never really wondered what friendship could be,
My Fellow Bronies,
Until 당신 all shared its magic with me;
Big adventures, tons of fun,
Your beautiful hearts, faithful and strong,
You shared your kindness, not always an easy feat,
And Friendship is Magic made it all complete,
Yeah,
My Fellow Bronies,
Y'know you're some of my very best friends...

So, today is the final 일 of 2012. But it also marks one 년 of me being a brony. One 년 이전 today, while killing time until the new year, and after numerous suggestions from people whose opinions I trust, and massive amounts of research,...

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A Changeling Hearth's Warming Eve Part 5

posted by The_Exorcist

Cotton Swirls explained to them about 퀸 Chrysalis. "UGH! I can't believe she did that!"said Score Heights. "We must go defeat her,now."said Cotton Swirls. They all said okay and went out the door.

"SURPRISE!"said Applejack. They all said oh no and Score Heights told her,"Applejack,you lied to us the whole time! Just get out of Ponyville!" 사과 브랜디 told her,"Ha,like I am going to do that! I mean,isn't it just wonderful? Seeing all the ponies in great scare,chaos,and no Christmas? I 사랑 it!"! "Come on,let's put them on!"said Azura Alor. They all put on their elements,and then defeated Applejack....

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December 2012- Score Heights Birthday (sample for 년 long fanfic article)

posted by Quillabex

The snow fell calmly from the nightly sky as Score Heights was asleep in her bed. The full moon's light broke the shadows of her room and lit it up with the warmth of Luna's magic. The light eventually shifted to Score's face as she rolled over, disturbed 의해 light. For a moment, she paused, hoping to go back to sleep when she remembered that it was her birthday today, December 4th. She rolled over again to look at her clock. "12:00 AM," she muttered under her breath, then yawned and rolled back over to go back to sleep.

She then popped up screaming; "IT'S MY BIRTHDAY!" She jumped up and down...