U have a grate voise, but u have to work at some things. Like u have to work a bit at ur control over the voise so it's not goes to high in the end of every word and stuff. That is a Thing i think u have to work on (idk if u wanted it to be like that, this is one of the songs i don't lissen to very often) i sing A LOT (like every day) and think it sounds a liiitle bit wrong.
Don't be sad cuz i did'nt say like: ohh u have the best voise i ever heard, 또는 something be happy insead! If u don't get criticism u can't be better and i belive in u! U have a realy good voise but it's not perfekt. But nothing is perfekt sooo XD