need some help,i need some strong and passive poems pls!!!

okay im not sure what 당신 mean but will this do?

I 사랑 the way 당신 look at me,
Your eyes so bright and blue.
I 사랑 the way 당신 키스 me,
Your lips so soft and smooth.

I 사랑 the way 당신 make me so happy,
And the ways 당신 show 당신 care.
I 사랑 the way 당신 say, "I 사랑 You,"
And the way you're always there.

I 사랑 the way 당신 touch me,
Always sending chills down my spine.
I 사랑 that 당신 are with me,
And glad that 당신 are mine.

or

Your lips speak soft sweetness
Your touch a cool caress
I am 로스트 in your magic
My 심장 beats within your chest

I think of 당신 each morning
And dream of 당신 each night
I think of your arms being around me
And cannot express my delight

Never have I fallen
But I am quickly on my way
당신 hold a 심장 in your hands
That has never before been given away